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Draconian Soul


Proof that I'm not dead. I was just in a slumber, waiting for reason to rise again. I might have found that reason.

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Twilight sends Spike to the Crystal Empire for a few days so she can concentrate on some official business. When Spike arrives, Cadence is too busy to really spend any quality time with the dragon. The only pony that seems to have the time for him is Shining Armor.

To keep Spike occupied, Shining spends the day with him, walking, talking, and just hanging out with him. Even when he does have to work, he takes Spike with him and makes him an honorary Royal Guard for the day.

Let's just hope that Spike won't let it go to his head...

Thanks to Vexy and Bad Seed for their help editing this story, as well as Mr101 and Skeeter for throwing their support on it.

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Woo! Tis here! :pinkiehappy:

Awesome.

It's here at last!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Even when he does have to work, he takes Spike with him and makes him an honorary Royal Guard for the day.

Let's just hope that Spike won't let it go to his head...

Is this going to lead to Spike arresting random ponies and ordering the guard around?

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Cause I hope it does...

finally a spike/shining armor brothers story begins

Wow, Spike is an expensive date. Better work hard, Rarity! This dragon will eat you out of house and home, literally!

I like how you got Spike's adolescence here. Fighting between being a grown up, and physically being a child. Well played, sir. Well played.

-Lumino

Annnnd you're in the Box. Hell yeah. :ajsmug:

3592927 No it isn't. I don't see it up there... :pinkiesad2:

3592985

I've got filter mature turned off and I see it. :duck:

3592985

What 3593013 said. Just wait. It'll climb. :rainbowkiss:

3593013 Ah ok, then that would be it! XP I have mature turned on... :twilightblush:

i'm feeling pretty good about this story, also the thing about Shining leading what Spike eats, pure gold :raritystarry:

3593091

Gah, I hate how ambiguous I sounded.

I mean to say that I have "View Mature" ticked, and I can see it in the featured box. Therefore, without "View Mature" ticked, you must surely be able to see it.

3593146 Well, it's in the featured box now, so I guess it doesn't really matter now! :derpytongue2:

This is so cute. I love the interactions between Shining Armor and Spike. Keep it up. :heart:

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Maybe he will, maybe he won't. We'll find out soon enough :trollestia:

3593350

Uggh, come on Drac, teasing readers is my schtick. Pony up already! :rainbowwild:

Grats Soul, both you and Lumi hit the feature box with your brofics! :pinkiehappy: :moustache:

There are far too few stories with Shining/Spike broshipping

High quality bromance fics are hard to come by in this fandom, especially when it comes to Spike. Shining Armor in non-romance stories that don't involve Twilight directly are practically nonexistent.
You score three yays for this chapter alone.
:yay::yay::yay:

Some serious bro love in this fic, I approve.

Great read! Shiny/Spike bromances are quite hard to find, and I think the 103:0 ratio speaks quite well of the quality of this one.

dat bromance man. I always headcannoned that Shining and Spike were best bros till they went their separate ways. Their personalities just seem like they would mesh perfectly.

Dat 121-0 L/DL Ratio

Is it just me, or does Shining Armor sound like a surfer or beach bum?
Good fic so far, regardless.

very good story please write more, but if you cant at the moment, i can wait (true story)

Got some serious potential on this one, can't wait to see where it goes.

3593404 I still can't believe they made two separate versions of the same show, but with two different dragon designs...

That cover image = dawww.

3597022>>3593350
Pranking Cadance would be freaking hilarious!

>>>He started to relax, closing his eyes. “Maybe Twi was right. She can take care of herself for a while.>>>

Meanwhile, at the Hall of Books (also known as the Ponyville Library), Twilight was already in insanity mode and the library was on fire.

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:trollestia:

>>>Spike’s eyes shimmered, mouth salivating and tongue hanging out. The crystal ponies all shined and glistened, causing Spike to salivate with anticipation.

“Mmm, crystals…” Spike shook his head violently, smaking his face with his claw. “No! They aren’t food—they’re ponies. You can’t eat ponies.”>>>>

Yessssssss, SSsssssssspike! Conssssssume them all! Give in to your carnivorous feelings and your journey toward the Sombra side will be complete!

>>>Spike chuckled. “Nah, I wouldn’t eat the ponies here. I couldn’t even hurt a fly! Even if I’m hungry, I’ll find a way to deal with it until food comes.”

“Heh! Good to know.”>>>

A couple of Crystal Ponies wandered nearby and Spike drooled, "Oh look! Food has come!"

And so the carnage began.

:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Riz

3593404

FINALLY !!

Someone writes a Spike and Shining being brothers :heart::twilightsmile:


Thank you~ :pinkiesmile:

A Shining Pair

GIGITTY >:D

I feel Twilight is a bit OOC here for simply sending Spike away. The show established that this is his biggest fear, and yet Twilight just sends him to the Crystal Empire without so much as a second thought.:rainbowhuh:

Spike and Shining doing some brotherly bonding. Just beautiful. I'm liking this. :raritystarry:

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That is sending him away for good, not sending him off for a while. If that was the case, he would always have been around Twilight and the Library 24/7. It's not like she said "Don't come back here".

3604523 Not at all! I'm a wicked little troll who pokes fun even at the stories I happen to like! In fact, the more I teasingly poke a story in the ribs, the more I like it. It generally means I'm paying close attention to what's going on and find myself internalizing every line, which then gives rise to many silly thoughts and scenarios, especially when the story is already a comedy.

The stories I don't like are treated VERY differently... I shred them mercilessly in scathing reviews not unlike Mr. Plinkett's critiques of the Star Wars prequels.

Some stories are touching enough that even my shrivelled, cynical heart begins to beat again and a dusty tear creaks out of my withered lacrimal ducts.

Some stories have villains clever and loathesome, with enrage the righteous fury of Sekhmet, She Before Whom All Evil Trembles, within me! Against those foul devils rides forth Lord Alondro, the Deus Ex Insert, the most powerful god-moded White Knight in the omniverse!

And there are also 'meh' stories which are just sort of... there, not very good but not very bad, and nothing much stands out writing-wise. They don't really warrent a reaction either way.

And this has been your totally unrequested explanation! No need to thank me! :trollestia:

Excellent story! Thank you for sharing it with us. :pinkiehappy:

I still can't believe these two hardly shared a scene...:facehoof:

“Hit it off well? The first words I said to her were ‘I REALLY LIKE YOU!’ I was yelling at the top of my lungs. I’m surprised I didn’t scare her away when I did that.”

I'm assuming you haven't read the official comic given how this meeting is different, but if that's the case, then congratulations; you were pretty damn close.
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This will be fun!

Of course a baby dragon is gonna have stamina problems at the third shift. But it will still be amusing.

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