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Mr101


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Set in the 'Youngverse'

Princess Chrysalis is excited. Her mother and father, the current rulers of the changeling kingdom, have allowed her to go out into the neighbouring Equestria in order to take part of their annual holiday, 'Nightmare Night'.

Dressed as a ghost and followed by her royal guardian, Obsidian, the giddy changeling steps out to enjoy her first ever Nightmare Night.

Now on YouTube!


Part of the 'When they were Young' series. An expansion on the 'When they were Young' trilogy.


The stories that started the 'When they were Young series'
'To the Moon!
'The Box Queen and the Dracony'
'Operation: Cookie Liberation'


Silly story inspired from the cover art for Halloween by the awesome Aeritus, go show some love!


Thanks to my pre-reader DVAN56 and editor Vexy go give some of their work a look!

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Comments ( 74 )

I still love this picture so very, very much.

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Thanks for sharing it in your blog, it gaveme the story idea. :twilightsmile:

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I'm unable to read it at the moment do to a splitting head ache, but I've got this at the front of my reading list. Knowing you, I can only imagine how adorable and funny this story is and I give it maybe 10 - 60 minutes before it's featured and all know the glory of Ghost Chrysalis, the Spoopiest Queen

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Nah, I doubt that. :rainbowlaugh:

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Agreed, its completely adorkable!

I love it. I want more! next time do her first christmas! Chrysalis is so cute:heart::heart::heart:

That picture is absolutely adorable.

I'm surprised that there have been so few to read this so far with that ADORABLE pic

“What do you mean I have to take her ‘trick or treating?’ I’m a retired soldier, not a lingsitter!” Obsidian grumbled.

Larvaesitter would work better.
Also, "Siddie" ends up changing coat color apparently... He goes into town with a gray coat, but when he is found by Chryssie, he is white .-.

I just hafta say.... LOL D'AWWWWW:rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:

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Whoopsie, fixed. Thanks for pointing that out. :twilightsheepish:

A nice slice of pointless fluff. Damn it these make for good pick me ups. :pinkiesmile:

I get the nightmare before Christmas reference in the title there buddy

3421456 I don't give a Fawkes about your Order of Phoenix! :flutterrage:

Words cannot describe the pure intense joy and heart-exploding adorableness that is this fic. You have no idea how many times I screamed at how adorable Chrysalis was during the entire story. :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

That was adorable.

Gotta admit, that was pretty darn cute, and I'm not even usually a fan of "good Chrysalis" stuff; too easy to Mary Sue her, but you did a real nice job Mr101, hat's off to ya! Have a Happy Halloween! :twilightsmile:

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Gosh dangit, that is exactly what I was gonna say!:applecry:

Obsidian’s eyes went wide as he slowly looked up to Alteratia. Her eyes were also wide, the left one twitching slightly as she simply stared at the old changeling. Metamorphosis winced as he braced himself for what was about to come.

YOU LOST HER!?” she roared at him.

Obsidian sighed.

I really hate Nightmare Night

Best. Ending. EVER!

3423059 haha nice ending and very fitting avatar mate.

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Thank you! You're rocking a pretty cool avatar yourself The1templar! :twilightsmile:

I've got to work tomorrow night, so happy Nightmare Night to everyBrony and Pegasister!

When I saw the cover art I was like HHHNNNGGG!!! Then I read the story and I was Like double HHHNNNGGG!!!

must resit cuteness! its too much!!!

you good person really caught my attention with the chapter title:ajsmug: excellent story

You were the chosen one!

Best use of a star wars line I've seen.

The d'awws!!! They gives me diabetus!!! :pinkiehappy:

I d'aawww many a time. Have one of my feels; :pinkiehappy:

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Yeah, couldn't help but imagine that scene but with a changling head for Obiwan, and Obsidian's pony disguise for Anakin's. :rainbowlaugh:

He didn’t mind taking her out that much, given New Hoofshire wasn’t that far away from where the hize was located;

*hive
Great story by the way!

“What? Trying to play tricks on old Jenkins are you? Clear off!” he shouted loudly.

I saw "chrysalis' First" and I was like :D
but then it was nightmare night and I was like :duck:

Have all of my dawwwsss. All of them.

It's cute, but the issue I keep coming back to is that it's Chrysalis. It feels so at odds with her depiction in the actual series. And while I know, sure, she was younger and could've changed as she grew up (even though the whole experience feels like it'd have the opposite effect and guide her away from the way she turned out...), but it still feels implausible.

I mean, I still like the story, and it's rather funny, but it doesn't make as much sense as the ones that had Celestia and Luna because the whole thing centers on a villain.

*Sees cover image*

*Reads*

regardless of how chryssie turned out in the end a nice story, really liked this when they were young series.

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I don't understand your reasoning. Are you suggesting that Chrysalis was a villain even as a young child? :duck:

ER MAH GERD! THE ADORABLE! SO MUCH ADORABLE! in all seriousness though, I do enjoy me some of the "lighter side" of chrysalis.

duuude, make more of this series. like do sombra or NMM or more Chrysalis

Oh, for the lost days of youth, that we both cheer and mourn at their passing remeberance.

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An out-and-out villain? Probably not. But we are talking about a fairly hefty change between her depiction here and her depiction as an adult, which I feel hurts the charm of the story.

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We're also talking a pretty hefty time-gap. I don't see how it could be unreasonable to suggest that Chrysalis might change over the years. Particularly as she transitions from Princess to Queen (Which would indicate a loss of parents). But hey, there's me looking too far into this.

So ridiculously cute.

I will Strike at dawn. Or most likely just after 10.

Nice work! This was really cute and I loved the ending.

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