• Member Since 3rd Mar, 2013
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superpony55


Hello, I'm superpony55. I used to be on this site a lot, but I've sort of lost interest in MLP. My older stories are not very good quality, but I hope you enjoy anyway.

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Cewestia is coming! Cewestia is coming! Woona is so excited! But what will happen when she doesn't show up?

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Comments ( 87 )
Comment posted by Regidar deleted Oct 13th, 2013

Oh my god, this is unbearably adorable:rainbowkiss:, I think I might be dying from the cuteness! :pinkiegasp:

My heart... It gave a small beat... if even just for a moment :rainbowkiss:
I liked it, but the delivery (the way it was narrated) just seemed a bit off to me... Oh well, don't fix it if it aint broke :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! Please upvote it if you enjoyed it!

I love how even her parents call her "Cewestia" because Woona keeps writing it that way. :heart:

Thumbs up from me.

3342830 Whoops I did now!:twilightoops:

youveblendedthewordsbravothishappenssometimesandIthinkIshouldseeadoctoraboutbutImnotsureithappenstoooftenImmagotothedoctorrightnow!!!

3343929 youarethesecondorthirdpersonhohaseverdonethisbutthatdoesnotmeanyouareamasteritisaveryfeelsrelatedskill. :raritydespair::raritycry::fluttercry::applecry:

Oh gosh. All my feels. Take them all. :pinkiesad2: :heart:
Thumbs up and fav. :twilightsmile:

THE FEEEEEEEEEEEELS!! :heart:

Fire engine one, and prepare to D'AWWWWWWWW! :rainbowkiss: :twilightsmile:

Uh...
Just too forced to be "cute", couldn't get any fells if that would be longer i wouldn't even read it to the end.

3344582>>3345902>>3345997

Thanks!

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That's okay. Thanks for reading, and telling me what you thought.

Comment posted by Romaji deleted Oct 14th, 2013

Okay, that didn't work. I surveyed the room. I then trotted over to the ottoman.

I get the feeling that she briefly forgot how old she was supposed to be.
I don't think that's a word I could use flawlessly if I couldn't even spell more basic words.

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Okay. Fixed that. Thanks!

Awsome. In my favs for cute overlode.:raritystarry::yay::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::ajsmug::pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by twilight517828 deleted Oct 21st, 2013

Please give me advice so I can make the story better!

Comment posted by twilight517828 deleted Oct 22nd, 2013

OMG!! so adorable!!:pinkiehappy:

"wears armor"
This is more adorable than fluttershy.
"runs for life"

3420446 well, you did want me to read your stories. Keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

This story is just AMAZING. It has the adorableness, the sweetness, the warmth and most importantly something very special: the soul. Thank you for writing it.

Best wishes, Zelos

WUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUV THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ello,
I say it was a cute bit of a read, eh.
It only got a 3/5 on my meter tho.
Suger Lvl is.... Overdose.
Some feels at end. Middle is a void.

Gonna have a nice impact on casual readers.
Have a nice day.

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Okay. Thanks for reading!

YB

Adorable. I was, I don't how I could express it, maybe doubtful in the beginning, but it quickly got into me. This is like readable sugar. The ending feels a bit rushed though, I'd have expected more events, more information about what happens with their parents next, and finally I think Celestia recovers from her sorrow too quickly.
Anyway, here is my like, take care of it :moustache:

So freaking cute.

3537936 loved this story! It was awesome. I just didn't get some things, like, where was it set? Why did Celestia go? How did she change?

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Thanks! :twilightblush: Celestia needed to go run Equestria.

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