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Twilight's Birthday Present

Twilight's birthday is here and Cadence is about to give her the best birthday present she ever had.
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zyr1987

zyr1987 #1 · Jan 11th, 2014 · · ·

This was really cute. Aside from some typos and awkward phrasing (and my opinion that thoughts should be italicized, not in quotation marks, to keep them distinct from dialogue), I liked it.

Iamnotarobot #2 · Sep 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This was adorable.

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