• Member Since 3rd Mar, 2013
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superpony55


Hello, I'm superpony55. I used to be on this site a lot, but I've sort of lost interest in MLP. My older stories are not very good quality, but I hope you enjoy anyway.

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The tickle monster is chasing Twily! What will she do?

Note- this takes place on Hearth's Warming, but that's not the main theme. Read it any time of year! Happy Hearth's Warming!

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YB
YB #2 · Dec 12th, 2013 · · ·

The ending feels a bit rushed, even for this kind of story. It just goes too fast.

Otherwise, the chapter has been a quick but real enjoyment, and I didn't notice any shocking grammar mistakes or anything, except a missing line space here:

“You mean tickle you,” Shining Armor said.
“Okay, Shining! HELP! THE TICKLE MONSTER WANTS TO TICKLE ME!!!”

So, well, I might as well upvote this. That was decent :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! :twilightblush:

3618023

I'll fix it. Thanks! :twilightsmile:

OH NO
NOT THE TICKLE MONSTER
ANYTHING BUT THAT SAVAGE!

That definately put a smile on my face- what a heart-warming little story!

Comment posted by Herrpface deleted Dec 12th, 2013

D'aww.

You win an upvote.

I'd be terrified.

D'awww.
To think Twily couldn't levitate a bookshelf, now look at her. :pinkiesad2:

cute. :twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:
most adorable thing ever

This is absolutely adorable!! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile: that is so cute.

I'm upvoting, but it's not like I thought this was cute or anything...b-baka...:trixieshiftleft:

*Tries to type in comment about how adorable and fuzzy this fic is, but passes out due to heart attack from diabeetus* :heart:

Thank you for wiring a story that deserves its praise. Definitely great to cheer up.

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:rainbowlaugh: IT'S THE TICKLE MONSTER!!! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! And yeah, at least she can levitate a pillow! :twilightsmile:

3619878>>3619934>>3619930

Thank you!

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:rainbowlaugh: Of course it wasn't. It's not like it's about Twily running from a tickle monster or anything... :raritywink:

3620202

Are you okay? I'm glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

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:twilightblush: Thanks! That made me smile.

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:pinkiehappy:Well, he's dead...poor Alchemystudent, died from cuteness overdose

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:twilightoops: Oh no! Oh well, hope he enjoyed it. Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

3621404 *Tries to type replay but is still passed out from heart attack* :heart:

I know everypony has said this already, but... This was adooorable! :twilightsmile:

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:rainbowlaugh: You need help?

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:twilightsmile: Thanks! :twilightblush:

3621874 Can't, type, reply. The adorableness, is too strong! :heart:

Nooooo! I'm allergic to adorable!!! -dies-

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:rainbowlaugh: Are you okay?

3623674

Thanks! :twilightblush:

3623713 I will be in Canterlot Royal Hospital for the next 2 - 3 weeks due to Acute Adorableness Poisoning. I am expected to make a full recovery, provided I do not encounter more than 10 deci-cutes of concentrated adorable before release.

3623781 Thanks. I will.

“Shining’s totally not a tickle monster out to get me, and I totally didn’t just hit him with a book!”
Made me laugh out loud, nice. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, I liked that part, too. :twilightsmile: Thanks! :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Pvt Caboose deleted Dec 20th, 2013

I thought Twilight didn't know about pillow fights until the episode Look Before You Sleep.

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If she had, maybe she'd forgotten. :twilightblush: This was meant just to be a short, funny story, and I hope that minor detail didn't keep you from enjoying it.

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I still enjoyed it.

That was adorable!

Not bad, not usually my type of story. I'm more into dark, sad stories (hence why I write them a lot), but it was fun and cute. It gets a like and a 3/5, and 5/5 on the cute metre. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

That fic was so sweet that it gave me diabetes. :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Congratulations! This story has officially been deemed a Ruby by The Gem Hunters!

Overall it's a very cute little Slice of Life fic. The pacing was almost perfect. Only a few instance where it wasn't really clear who was speaking detracted from the experience. Good work!

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