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superpony55

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The Glass
The Glass #1 · Oct 12th, 2013 · · ·
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A good story. Just needs a little polish. Maybe vary your sentence structure a bit, it seems a bit... jerky.

Back Door Mare
Back Door Mare #2 · Oct 12th, 2013 · · ·
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I've never read anything like this before. Is there a name for this style of writing?
The story begins normal enough, but takes a turn towards crazy. The amount of detail describing each scene tappers, similar to one of those slippery slope kids stories.
By the end I found myself laughing from sheer inanity of the events. Nicely Done

superpony55
superpony55 #3 · Oct 12th, 2013 · · ·
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3335206

Thanks for the feedback!

3335404

Thanks! :twilightblush:

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mlpfanficismagic
mlpfanficismagic #5 · Oct 18th, 2013 · · ·
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3336675 best...story... EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :rainbowkiss:

Musical
Musical #8 · Nov 25th, 2013 · · ·
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Random fanfiction, but great. :pinkiehappy: :rainbowlaugh:

Musical
Musical #10 · Nov 26th, 2013 · · ·
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3536448 You are welcome. :pinkiesmile: :twilightsmile:

JumpingShinyFrogs
JumpingShinyFrogs #12 · Jan 4th, 2014 · · ·
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Congratulations! This story has officially been deemed an Emerald by The Gem Hunters.

Slow down a bit, and you could have another Sapphire to add to your list.

linkman443
linkman443 #13 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·
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I see a sequel in te future called "Big Mac eats a Big Mac"

CallousCloy
CallousCloy #14 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·
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Yo, dawg. I heard you like Applejack... :trollestia:

superpony55
superpony55 #15 · Jan 7th, 2014 · · ·
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3749495

Actually, I like Twilight the best. :twilightsmile:

SummerCandyPegasus
SummerCandyPegasus #17 · Feb 28th, 2014 · · ·
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Awesome.

Is it only me that finds it a bit unsettling that Applejack is named after an ALCOHOLIC DRINK and thus a breakfast cereal for kids is named for an alcoholic drink? :rainbowderp:

xStellar_Bubbles
xStellar_Bubbles #18 · Mar 27th, 2015 · · ·
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Interesting, for sure...

strangephantasm
strangephantasm #19 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·
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4013516

She'll GET YA DRUUUUUUUUNK!

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