• Member Since 3rd Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 30th, 2019


Hello, I'm superpony55. I used to be on this site a lot, but I've sort of lost interest in MLP. My older stories are not very good quality, but I hope you enjoy anyway.

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Comments ( 21 )

A good story. Just needs a little polish. Maybe vary your sentence structure a bit, it seems a bit... jerky.

I've never read anything like this before. Is there a name for this style of writing?
The story begins normal enough, but takes a turn towards crazy. The amount of detail describing each scene tappers, similar to one of those slippery slope kids stories.
By the end I found myself laughing from sheer inanity of the events. Nicely Done


Thanks for the feedback!


Thanks! :twilightblush:

Comment posted by mlpfanficismagic deleted Oct 18th, 2013

3336675 best...story... EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :rainbowkiss:

Random fanfiction, but great. :pinkiehappy: :rainbowlaugh:

3536448 You are welcome. :pinkiesmile: :twilightsmile:

Congratulations! This story has officially been deemed an Emerald by The Gem Hunters.

Slow down a bit, and you could have another Sapphire to add to your list.

I see a sequel in te future called "Big Mac eats a Big Mac"

Yo, dawg. I heard you like Applejack... :trollestia:


Actually, I like Twilight the best. :twilightsmile:

Applejack's the Element of Honesty, and the best apple-bucker around. But can she see why kids love the taste of Cinnamon Toast Crunch?

"Uh, because they're swirled with cinnamon and sugar in every bite?" :applejackconfused:

No, it's because they're swirled with— oh, no wait you were correct. That's never happened before.

"Gotta have my pops." :ajsmug:

edit: 3749489
Actually I read something like this before, where Big Mac prepares that kind of sandwich for the CMC to eat.


Is it only me that finds it a bit unsettling that Applejack is named after an ALCOHOLIC DRINK and thus a breakfast cereal for kids is named for an alcoholic drink? :rainbowderp:

Interesting, for sure...



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