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My name is Twilight Sparkle. I was just crowned Princess, but I'm not ready. I don't want to be Princess. I just want to be me. Just Twilight.
(Note: The non-Princess Twilight Sparkle tag symbolizes who she is in her mind.)
(Note #2: This story does not use any names until the last sentence.)
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4057128
Thanks for reading! If it made you feel sad, I wrote it right.
Cute
4057143
Thanks!
4057135 'Twas brilliant, and it definitely compounded my sadness, but damn it was good.
Ummm... things are moving quite fast around. Give more details, more colors to your story. Oh, and add space between paragraphs. It gets confusing. You should put things like this:
"DON'T FORGET TOP WRITE!!!!!!!!!!" Pinkie Pie shouted wildly, both hooves waving frantically.
Other than that, a bit of polishing and it's good. 7/10.
4057165
I started this story with two goals in mind- write a sad story, and to write a story without mentioning names. Thank you for the help!
4057157
Wow, thanks.
That's a huge compliment. 
4057177 No problem. Why lie? I enjoyed this.
4057197
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
4057339
She's my favorite character. I actually like that she's a princess, I just wanted to try my hand at another sad story. I understand if you don't want to read it.
4057375
That's okay.
Good story here.
encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTBIgMAivIUVpPdYZQwOXxK8UXv5_XnEDAu2DEArLXuPIiunoayvw Well... 'Just Twilight'...
Except becoming a princess has been Twilight's dream since she saw Celestia raise the sun...
4058241
Yeah, I was just seeing how well I could write a sad story.
4057760
4057375 I feel where you're coming from. I try so hard to be tactful and respectful, but some things just rile me up so much I can't hold my peace
Well I read the story, I thought it was AWESOME!
I just have one thing to say...
KEEP.
IT.
COMING.
P.S.(Cause I just saying)
Twilight being Twilight, is what got us Season 4. Twilight being Twilight is what gave us, Every. SingleMy Little Pony EPSODE!
Besides who else would she be... Masked Matterhorn? (sorry... bad joke)
4066401
Wow, thanks.
I enjoy writing sad stories, so sometimes I'll write one-shots like this one. I'm glad you enjoyed this, and I hope you like some of my other stories! 
Wow! This was a GREAT story. I love it! Just a mistake I notice- you capitalize princesses in one sentence, then have is lowercase in another instance. They are used in the same way, so I just thought you might want to look at it. But that was AMAZING! I love how you wrote it with no names!
4077121
I'll have to fix that. Thanks for the compliment!
That was a very cute story.
I like how it ends with just Twilight.
4083067
Thanks!
SSEeeeeeeqqqquuuuuueeeeeeelllllll!!!!!
please
4263715
Thanks!
I might write a sequel, who knows? If I do, it'll be a while, I'm already trying to write a sequel to Dried Apples and Packed Bags, Milkshakes, Wittle Woona and Cewestia's Day Off, update my stories on fanficton (and hopefully Dragonbrave here), and work on my original story.