For Queen Chrysalis, the end seemed near. Defeat after defeat at the hooves of her enemies had left her tired and desperate while her army of once thousands reduced to a mere several dozen. Surrounded, it seemed that utter defeat was inevitable. But she was a proud changeling queen, she wouldn't go down that easy. She still had one last trick up her hoof. A Portal...to another world. And through that portal, she entered a world of new wonders, of new dangers, and to her surprise and utter shock, a world of giants.
For Rick Mason, life was alright. He had a nice house, a decent job, and two awesome dogs. What else could a guy ask for? Tiny talking alien bug horses? ...Well it's not like he wasn't asking for them.
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8/30/20 Featured?! Well I'll be, thanks a bunch folks! I really appreciate the love.
That pictures adorable.
Cool more plz
Oh yes. Please. Go on with the story.
I really want to see Chrissie in a world with beings 40 times her size (according to the thumbnail).
Hm. Interesting. I am curious to see where this goes.
I love this. I have not read this yet. I will soon.
Oh ho is that a Jojo reference I see?!?!
You get a track just for the epic dissing Queen Cheeselegs delivered to Princess Sunbutt.
this has a changeling tag does this mean Chris gets new lings for herself?
also will pony main six make a comeback? or are they doing a star swirl approach throw and leave the problem for someone else?
oh god, it like beekeeping but even cuter still if the picture anything to go by!
A successful evacuation. Well done.
That picture's adorable ^2.
Now the question is, does being so nuch larger than changelings mean that the "food" output is also scaled up? So now cheeselegs can have awesome cosmic power with her itty bitty living space?
Wow
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You better complete this story, you will not let it die. If you do I swear by Faust's Milky Tits that I will find you, and bap your snout so hard it atomizes into dust
Insert tfs goku teleport here and some of tyose guards had a reaaaalllly good day
Add " mark there.
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I've always been partial to the idea that eqestrian critters are tiny. Makes the freakish proportions and violations of the square cubed law make so much more sense.
This is kick-flipping EPIC!
And I REALLY hope you can continue this story further, I love how you handled the dialogue, the theatrics, the little awesome details you sprinkle in, the way you play the comedic sections, and I especially like how you did the inner monologues with Chrysalis.
This first chapter ALONE has some really amazing segments & I want to point out these 8 first of all.
Character Study: Your Chrysalis
I want to do a deep-dive on a few quotes from Chrysalis that I feel show a HUGE amount of her personality & motives.
I feel, that with these 3 quotes, a complex and intriguing model of Your Chrysalis can be formed.
In the third quote, Chrysalis speaks of conquest to the ponies with intense bravado that she seems to show to her enemies.
But the first quote seems to show her true intentions of leaving the planet, shown through the general contents & supplies being brought; stolen books, the wounded, children, & various sack & resources of differing kinds, as this deliberately shows a plan of rebuilding & settling,
Because if total conquest of another world was Chrysalis' plan like she told the ponies, then she would bring every soldier, every scrap of food, every weapon, and leave the rest for dead, but Chrysalis DIDN'T, which shows plans beyond conquest and leaning towards societal healing of her people.
The second quote I find both the most fascinating & the most straightforwards, Chrysalis is okay with DAMNING ALL living things, herself, her hive, & everything else on Equis, for a good CHANCE she can have her hive & followers prosper.
Thus ends my personal character study of Your Chrysalis
: praise :
I sincerely hope you continue this, as there have been a severe shortage of tiny ponies in houses, & yours might be the first one to focus on Chrysalis & changelings.
You have made a the beginnings of a masterpiece within the prologue, bravo man, bravo.
I believe with all my heart, that you have struck GOLD.
Good Luck!
Please continue this.
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Both of these comments are perfect.
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Very TRUE
ok so it seems that celstias is horrible in this universe and likly doesnt know that love and lust are a little diffrent. also with chrisalis viewed as she is by the ponys it is likly that if the figure out how to follow her they will be doing so under the assumption that she is taking over there and they will likly come to fight as such i would enjoy if chrisalis thought of this before hand and planned this so when she is playing nice with the humans and the ponys come through and attack thay will be viewed as evil especialy if chrisalis comes forward with some info on celestia shunning her and her childern before hand making her act bad?
will wait and see with exitiment
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I'll be honest mate, I was NOT expecting someone to put so much thought into how I portrayed our little Love bug, much less with such a professional-ass review as you did. Really, it's crazy to think that someone liked it that much and I'm real appreciative of that.
And hell, I don't know If I'm the "first one" to do something like this, but it's cool to hear nonetheless.
So in short mate, thanks a bunch! It's folks like you that give me the strength to continue writing and I'm real grateful for that.
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Hmm...that's not a bad idea.
*Sneakily makes a note to yoink that for later*
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hey! if you use that make sure to boop yourself
Absolute fucking UNIT
This story is already amazing.
Please continue it.
Also i love how Sunbutt got a verbal beating from Chryssi.
Well I am very curious about this...you sir get a like and I shall track and follow this thing like the Royal Guard tracked down Changelings!
Fun stuff. I like the over-the-top humorOur tone of the story.
At the very e d, I was expecting Chrysalis to reveal that she needed not magic to actually complete her spell and that Celestia helpfully provided it. Note that just because Chrysalis says something doesn’t necessarily make it true.
I'd like to at least see the characters introduced to each other before this gets shelved.
Therss a reference I'm not getting or I am very confused, he has a dog that talks? A translating collar or something?
You seem to still be going strong with your storytelling & writing, hope to see more!
I was thinking it might be something from UP as well, so thanks for stating your inspiration.
Would Chimera try to eat and or lick some of the changelings?
Good Luck!
I was a teeny bit worried that Dem would be one of those people that actually pretended to be a pet for someone else, especially with the talk of "good/bad girls", "Crunchy-Roll account", & "punishment from a master"
Thankfully that wasn't the case, instead we get a dog with an 'animal translation collar' type of deal, neat!
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yeah, a translating collar, like this :
The reference is UP.
I was thrown off by a dog with a translation collar.
Hmm, I wonder how this dog will be used plot wise.
The only part I'm surprised by is that Dem can navigate to crunchyroll.
Well that was pretty random...
That went in a COMPLETELY different direction than what I was expecting
This sounds like a fun adventure.
Talking dogs. Well that's a thing.
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Guess who won?
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proberby chrisalis as she both got away with her plan and made the ponys dought celestia
Talking dog. It’s the first one I’ve seen besides Spike in EG this should be interesting
B-Bakka!
Oh no! Tiny Chrysalis strikes!
Ah, another pet...
Wait a minute... Is this some sort of petplay furry shenanigans?
Oh okay... Talking dog... Straight out of left field... but okay.
I first thought Dem was an actual fucking furry somehow
Interesting detail, with the talking dog collar. Looking forward to more of this.
"A Boy and his Dog" anyone?
nooooo why is there a cliffhanger I want some tiny Bug horse action(っ °Д °;)っ