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Annabelle RTH


Name's Annabelle, Annabelle Rose the Hedgehog, but you can call me Annie. I write as a hobby and have a policy to finish what I started.

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Flash Sentry visits Twilight while on vacation in Ponyville for a week. Will Twilight take chance on Flash or will she let him go?

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Comments ( 91 )

Welcome to the fandom! It is a great one, and I am sure you will enjoy it. You did pretty good for a first timer, especially one who is new to the fandom. I gave you a thumbs up. Good luck in the future, keep on writing.

I think it great also I don't mind the OOC just dial it down a little.
I bet her friends are going to start the teasing about Twilight's crush.

I enjoyed reading this. Smiled imagining this happening while reading.

What OOC? I practically read it all in Tara Stong's voice AND kept reminding myself that this was in the ponyverse NOT the Equestria Girls world.

Really great work for a new comer!! Can't wait for more!

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It was just a conern since I'm not used to writing for this fandum. But after watching Equestria Girls I knew I had to do something for this shipping, so this is the result.

Thanks for the compliment though. I feel a lot better now with this one. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, you know, I think I might like it here.

well i will say welcome to fimfiction even if im late a little.

Maybe her wings sprung up when she saw, heard, or think of Flash Sentry.

Awwwww... They're connecting!!!

There's one thing Flash Sentry needs to do before asking out Twilight Sparkle: get pass B.B.B.F.F.

3047100: :rainbowhuh:? I don't get it

3056756: :facehoof: They were connecting since the MLP FiM's first movie, didja knew?

3088025Yes I did... I was speaking on terms of the fanfiction. Plus they connected the the humanverse. Not so much in the ponyverse.

Saw that coming.

Nice chapter. I was wondering when this story would update. I can't wait to read how their date went.

Any advice? I'm having a bit of trouble making it work out in my head.

1,000,000 bits say Twilight's friends and sister-in-law will spying on her date with Flash Sentry which by the way made his cameo on "Three's a Crowd".

3862285 That actually didn't come to mind. Maybe I'll use it. Thanks.

3860193 Yeah, it's coming slowly, but still coming. Thanks by the way.

Whens the next chapter coming out??

A FlashLight story I haven't seen yet? Well, time to read again!

Thanks for the update. I really enjoy this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I know how to get Twilight's wings erected.

This is a good story so far. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the update. I liked that mature conversation between Flash and Shinning. I really think you did a great thing right there. Good luck with future chapters and don't keep us waiting too long.

I LOVE this story:heart::heart::heart: can't wait for more:pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

Nice chapter. I think it was a good one. Good luck with the next one. I can't wait to read about the date.

I am definitely loving this story. Can't wait to see how it goes!

Great chapter. I enjoyed it. I can't wait for the actual date. I don't know if I want it to be romantic, tragic comedic, or just awkward. Which do you like?

4743419 I'm not entirely sure. I just go with what comes to me and there a different paths with each scenario that I can take. It depends on what I think I can make work and flow. I'm still working on it.

I do think it'll be cute though.

4746431 That good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck.

Nice chapter. I think you did a great job. Good luck with writing the next chapter.

What kind of guitar, Spanish guitar?

Why do I see a snogging in the future?

Nice chapter. I think you did a great job. Good luck writing about the picnic date.

4925838 It's not like they'll be all over each other... still just the first date

Flash likes war books too?! AWESOME! :pinkiehappy:

Flash loves history too! I'm also really big when it comes to details about soldiers and weapons.

Spike being Spike.

That was a nice chapter. Good luck with future chapters. Thanks for the warm fuzzy feelings.

oiy vey, good luck Flash you're gonna need it.

"I can always make room"

I think Tirek heard that line before he blew the library to Kingdom Come.

Flash got off easy with shining armor. When I first started dating my wife back in 1989, her brother threatened to rip out my throat (until he found out I recently enlisted in the usaf).

Thanks for the update. I like this and I like the thought each put into eachother's gift. Thanks for a warm fuzzy chapter.

I LUV IT !!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

YES, WHAT WOULD THE BBBFF DO. THROW HIM OUT THE WINDOW , IN FRONT OF A TRAIN.... OR JUST CALMLY ACCEPT IT? WE CAN ONLY WONDER.......:moustache:

GOOD LUCK, SURVIVE THE BBBFF:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

SAME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::rainbowwild:

I'M GOING TO CRY BECAUSE OF THAT LETTER AS WELL:raritycry::fluttercry::raritycry:

Sweet. Thanks for the update. I love how Cadence is medding and she isn't being caught. I love this story. Thanks.

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