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Princess Twilight Sparkle travels to the Crystal Empire to visit her brother, Cadance, and their new foals, Il Bolero di Fuoco (better known as Bolero), and Gleaming Shield. When her train ends up derailed due to the snowstorm, she ends up somehow trapped in an ice cave, in a raging blizzard, with none other than Flash Sentry. Can these two star-and-dimension-crossed lovebirds thaw out the chilly Frozen North with their love, or are they doomed to freeze to death wandering aimlessly through the snow and hail? When Shining Armour finds out his sister's going out with a royal guard, can he accept it for the love that it is? Or will he totally flip a table?

The song "Vanilla Twilight" belongs to Owl City.

BEFORE ANYPONY ASKS, YES, "IL BOLERO DI FUOCO" MEANS "THE BOLERO OF FIRE" IN ITALIAN. I LIKE TO PLAY ZELDA GAMES, SHUT UP, GO AWAY, IT'S A BADASS NAME FOR A PONY.

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Thumb up for the picture.

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I found it on Google images, where I find all my story images. I always like knowing who's art I'm stealing, but sometimes Google likes to be stingy with that information. :unsuresweetie:

Thanks, though. I know this particular story isn't my best. I was up all night and needed to vent some of my OMG TWILIGHT FLASH SENTRY EEEEEEEEEEEE feels.

:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

THIS STORY EARNS FOURTEEN OUT OF TEN FLUTTERSHYS

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I'm going to assume that's a good thing! YAY! :yay: Thank you!

:moustache: very suave, Shining Armor.....
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: I loved it.....:trixieshiftright: come to think of it, my older sibling does the same thing.....huh, deje vu....

Eh... The pacing was kind of awkward, and there was some grammar issues here and there, but overall it was okay. Also...

WOOHOO! AMERICANS WHO REFUSE TO SPEAK AND WRITE IN AMERICANESE UNITE! 8D

(I'm breaking the law every day. In Illinois, there's a law that says we speak American, not English, but I do my best to speak and write in PROPER English. Which means Armour. Stay awesome.)

Also, learn to do research, okay? There's already a fic called Vanilla Twilight.

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Yeah, I don't care if there are a billion fics also called Vanilla Twilight. Mine is also called Vanilla Twilight, because that's what I wanted to call it. YAY FOR BEING UNORIGINAL AND SLEEP-DEPRIVED.

Yeah, the pacing issues are a side-effect of the aforementioned caffeine binge and subsequent all-nighter. I wasn't going for my magnum opus, I just wanted a silly story about Twilight and Flash Sentry being stuck in a frozen cave, and I wanted a piece with Shining Armour flipping out about his wittle baby Twily dating a soldier.

The strangest bit is, I won't spell the words "color" or "neighbor" with a "u" generally, but I will with armour. Maybe it's just me.

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Hehehe, I just really wanted to make Shining Armour a giant overprotective wacko. His name is Shining Armour for Celestia's sake. His entire purpose for being is protecting other people. It makes sense that he'd be wildly, violently overprotective of his little sister.

I'll give this a read later, but for now here's the image source:

http://dm29.deviantart.com/art/I-m-Watching-You-Bub-378594569

Fullmetal Alchemist

Holy hell I'm reading that right now! :pinkiegasp:

proud fathers syndrome:rainbowlaugh::heart:

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Eh, the manga never really did it for me. I prefer the original FMA anime over the manga and FMA: Brotherhood, just because.... I don't know. I can't really tell you why. I just prefer the original anime. Ah, Vic Mignogna, let me love you. :heart::pinkiecrazy:

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You know the type, the weird guys who are always stopping you on the street to show you a wallet full of pictures of their kids being adorable and has eighty-five billion and a half stories to tell at the bus stop while you're just trying to get to work.

So, basically, Maes Hughes Syndrome.

2854102 :facehoof: What I meant was I was watching FMA (Brotherhood) right now.

I feel like a twit now.

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Hey, don't do that. We all make mistakes. :twilightsmile: My mistake of the day was posting this atrocity of a story, and yet I went and did it anyway! :twilightblush:

2854174 It was published today?

Here, added it to two groups for you.

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Well, by "today" I mean, at like four in the morning after an all-nighter coffee binge, yeah. Oh, no, don't add this one to groups! :raritydespair: Ugh, this one was more just a brainfart type filler while I mustered up the inspiration for something that doesn't suck so hard.

2854186 Too late, the deed is done.:rainbowwild:

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:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:
NOOOOOOOO -- Ah, oh well. :raritywink:

It could be worse. I could be some of the writers I see on the internet, and I look at their stories and I go, "This is a joke, right? A parody? You wrote this to make fun of stupid people, right?" and then it turns out NOPE, they are the stupid person.

2854197 Only one thing to say about them

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....This is wonderful. :rainbowlaugh: I love it.

i love you for this story :heart:

Thing is, I am not much of a fan of any story including (kiddin? I forgot the guys name? again?) and twilight. when I saw the pseudo 5K word counter, I decided to read the description. then the last line. "Or will he totally flip a table?" yup, I am sold. no going around that. An I do not regret reading this even the tini tiny-est bit. Loved the humor, stereotypes, AND THERE WAS A TICKLEFIGHT, SWEET CELST ITIQ3WQ8VBN9NSA _Pop.exe stopped working_

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Hahaha, thank you so much! I actually kind of hate this one a little bit. It's kind of a sleep-deprived mess. Also, I think the name you're looking for is Flash Sentry.

Also, I try to keep the descriptions of my stories child-friendly, so I decided to put "flip a table" instead of "flip his shit".

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Aww, thanks, I love you too. :heart:

2854545 sleep... deprivation?? what is that? sleep? you mean the overrated nine hours of laying still with your eyes closed everyone always does?

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....I really hope you're kidding.

.... It means being deprived of sleep. You know, not being able to sleep at night. When someone stays up all night for multiple nights in a row (a condition either called "insomnia", or "finals week", depending on who you talk to), the human brain tends to go a little gooey. Stuff starts not making sense anymore, and not in the fun, Discord-Turning-Clouds-Into-Cotton-Candy way, but the Oh-Dear-God-I-Have-A-Massive-Headache-Why-Can't-I-Just-Die-Please way. Sometimes, a person can start to think things are actually good when they're not, like this atrocious mess of a fanfic I posted very, very early this morning.

Ooh, I love Owl City.
I guess that makes me love your story even more.

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To be honest, "Fireflies" and "Vanilla Twilight" are the only two Owl City songs I really like. Kinda? They're the only two I have on my iPod, and I don't really plan for more unless it really wows me. I have an entire choreography sequence for Fireflies storyboarded out on my computer, but I can't get enough volunteers to wear the skintight fabric bodysuits strung up with fairy lights. Oh well! :pinkiehappy:

2854657>> *insert sleep deprived applejack here*
For some reason FiM is dur hurrin' me, and I can't post the bunch of utterly hilarious pictures I assembled as a response to that. You didn't just take me serious, did you?

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Ah, I see. For some reason, FiM durr hurred on me as well, and I only recieved the first part of your message, the part that asked what sleep deprivation was. I had no idea there was another bit of it.

As an older brother myself, I more than sympathize with Shining Armor's feelings. No touchy the Twily indeed.

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See, I'm an only child. I wish I had a big brother like Shining Armour....

Alright, that was funny and sweet, and ended up at hilarious. Thumbs up.

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Thanks, but I wish it were my other one-shot making it into the popular pages consistently. I don't understand why people like this one so much.

...unless I get my hooves on some sort of ancient forbidden time-stopping spell.

Like sister, like brother I see. :twilightsmile:

Also, Daddy!Armour. I can just imagine him being Hughes from Fullmetal Alchemist, showing off pictures of his kids to anyone he manages to stop on the street.

Right before being murdered to hide a conspiracy planning to undermine the entire country. :trollestia:

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HAHAHAHAHAHAaaawwwww, I just made myself sad. I remember that scene in FMA and it makes me sad inside.

you know of owl city...you live....this time

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Like anypony doesn't know of Owl City. :unsuresweetie:

2856055 Exactly. That way I kill least amount of people possible :twilightsmile:

Owl City happens to be one of my favorite bands, so I'm loving the references.:heart:

Great one-shot too, by the way.:pinkiehappy:

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WHY DOES EVERYONE LIKE THIS ONE SO MUCH

I HATE THIS ONE

I DON'T KNOW WHY I POSTED IT

2856396 Do you what me hate this for you:twilightsmile:

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Do you what now? Ingles, por favor.

2856103 if you didn't know Owl city I WOULD KILL YOU:twilightsmile::rainbowderp:

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Ingles, por favor. It means "English, please" in Spanish. I can also say it in French, German, Russian, Japanese, and Swahili if you need further clarification.

Cute and violent...Awesome:twilightsmile::heart:

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