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Immortan Joe


Follow me and I myself will carry you to the gates of Valhalla. Where you'll ride eternal, shiny and chrome!

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All Jackson the narrator wants to do is write an MLP fanfiction. But when his writings start to gain a mind of their own and the characters start to interact with him, how will the residents of Equestria react to a man narrating their lives.

If any of you take this story seriously, I swear I'll find out who you are go to your page and post the most immature comment on your page!

((Warning this story may give you a high dosage of mediocrity, so please tread with care.))

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 128 )

Maybe it could be explained what those hands reaching out of the white light was? Completely forgotten past works, now eternally damned prehaps?

Such a lowlife, couldn't be bothered to spend a few precious minutes, or at the very least fake an important phone call?

So far, the grandfather is my favorite character. He HAS to be some kind of war vet.

Ah, just like my Grandpa. The only thing that finally managed to kill him was seventy years of barbecue and Granny's Southern fried everything.

BTW, did you read the (minimal) changes I made to your SotFR chapter?

This fic makes no sense. Stop.

Just kidding, I likes it. :twilightsmile: I just want to see a silly comment on my profile. :rainbowlaugh:

lol grandpa doesnt take shit from no one :rainbowlaugh:

This story is great, i DEMAN ANOTHER

The chapters about the villains should be about downright trolling them....:3

Very clever i cannot wait to read more :pinkiehappy:

The Stanneigh Parable

I take this story very seriously, and I can tell you that the grandpa was awesome.

2985483 But seriously, this is gonna be fucking crazy. Too much for me, soooo... no read, no vote! I'm too scared. :fluttershbad:

It would be cool if Twilight could read the comments we wrote.... *wink wink nudge nudge*

Author's Note:
I swear this is just getting stupider and stupider as it goes.

But the stupider it gets the funnier it gets.

If any of you take this story seriously. I swear I'll find out who you are go to your page and post the most immature comment on your page!

Oh fuck, I'm scared.

this just gets better and better. i must say am enjoying this. i would laugh if i had some one narrate my life for a day (even better morgan freeman)

I like imagening the narators voice sounding like the guy that narates everything in the game Bastion

As Darkus pressed the A button, his Steam client- "Who are you?"
"Shut up, Darkus, you know it's me."
Anyway, nice concept. "It was really-"
"Awesome?"
"Yeah. Heh... yeah..."
After that, the narrator pressed the "Add Comment" button.

And the Narrator was being narrated.

2986278 I'm sorry maybe Moran Freeman can have a cameo.

2981985 He deleted all his work portraying to the whole fourth wall.

2983132 Glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy:

2987867 You better be, pal, cause I'm coming for ya.

2987138 Oh that's a brillant idea, if this story continues to get the amount of fame it's getting now. I might just do that as a bonus chapter.

Not sure... I think I shall read this, JUST because my name is on it... :duck:

This is... Interesting. Though I am not sure as to whom the Narrator actually is... I suppose he is living with his grandparents, and his grandpa does not like him very much... He must have moved in only recently, which would imply that either his parents are dead, or live somewhere else. :applejackunsure:

From the useage of the shotgun I can imply that this takes place in the united states of america. :trixieshiftleft:

Surely if that shotgun was fired someone would have heard this? Unless, of course, they live on a farm. :trixieshiftright:

The story has potential, what with it interacting with the world of MLP. Which is a neat original concept, I suppose.

I'll keep my eye on you... :pinkiecrazy:

2989679 First off the description don't take it seriously, but overall you're assumptions are really freaking close. And for the lack of detail I added I applaud you, and I'm glad you liked it!

This is insane, and I am glad to see it is Incomplete, as it means more is coming. :pinkiecrazy:

Care to try narrating the cake twins?

Fascinating and hilarous.

His grandfather is a jerk, and his grandmother is kind of forceful. I can imagine how this goes... The narrator really should get his own apartment as soon as possible though.

You could Narrate Applejack next, or Rainbow, or Princess Luna.

Narrate Littlepip from Fallout Equestria. It would be silly.

So you called the story charecter....so meta

What's next, the narrator that's narrating the narrator gets narrated?

:pinkiegasp: the meta is reaching critical levels!

So it breaking the forth wall ception?

2995492 The whole story is breaking the fourth wall XD.

3002954 Finally some one who understands me! (And I'm not joking.)

I think you spelled curious wrong...

Other than that, I loved this chapter!

3004249 Thank you, person, I corrected all the misspelled words for you, I'm also glad you liked it.

this is wayyy too funny, gonna fave and wait for more:rainbowlaugh:

NOOO! At this rate, you'll get featured long before I ever do! I demand that you immediately stop outdoing me!:fluttercry:

3006409 Well then start posting your own work, then maybe you'll get featured. Go for comedy or something, everyone loves comedy.

3006491 Damn it all, I just got done filling out a submission form to put The Anchor and the Kingfisher on EqD. Why the hell am I so nervous? Oh wait, because they basically wiped their ass with the last thing that I tried to submit.

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