This story is a sequel to Doomguy Wants It
Nightmare Night finally arrived and Luna was having a wonderful time with Twilight. And everything was going well for the small town of Ponyville, 'till Rainbow Dash decided to prank the blood thirsty space marine that went berserk over Smarty Pants just a month back. Now please list all the things that can go wrong with that idea.
I'd like to say: All the ponies who are hurt or harmed in anyway in this story are not ponies I hate. This is not some type of trollfic or story I'm writing just so I can write about hurting one of them. I love all ponies deeply and equally *Cough*Except for Luna*Cough* and that *Cough*She's best pony*Cough* all of them get hurt equally.
Now please don't take this story seriously and have a Happy Halloween!
I admit, I'm giggling a bit too hard to look out for grammar
Hey, Luna, here, a special Nightmare Night treat for you: KNUCKLE SANDWICH!
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I'd like a threequel.
MOAR! GIVE US MOAR!
3424524 Still a sequel.
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You don't say???
3424651 *Stabs with a fork and runs away*
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*bleeding to death*
*ded*
3424809 *Runs past with a defib and a med pack and revives you and drops the med pack next to you whilst braking stride*
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*play choir music*
Choir: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
This just really shows how jaded DOOMGUY is.
Not even Twilight "Motherfucker" Sparkle can stop an angry space marine charging towards her at 58 mph.
Doomguy: the silent Duke Nukem
If you want to, I could proofread your story/stories and help with the grammar.
Because you could use a proofreader or two. (Everyone does, even Stephen King)
3425087 Not jaded, he just likes to fuck shit up.
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God I love your Doomguy stories.
3425680 Glad to hear that!
As always.. Amazing just like the first one.
And Rainbow Dash totally deserves it~!
3427099 One question though, are you gonna make more Doomguy stories.
3430294 Oh of course, if you guys like them this much. Might as well, maybe around holidays though... unless I get struck by an idea I can't pass up.
You said and twice.
The word "good" is grammatically incorrect here. The one you're looking for is "well."
'Till has an apostrophe.
Just stare at this word until it hits you.
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I really liked the way you write these, but there is one thing that bothers me.
doomguy is pretty hypocritical and sometimes completely swaps character sometimes.
he punched luna for being an ass when moments before he stole candy from kids.
you also showed him having no concern for others when doomguy throughout the game is constantly the one sacrificing every thing for the safety of others. His very reason for fighting hell being to save humanity. He also seems to have a strong sense of morals sense his very reason for being on mars was beating up his commanding officer for ordering him to shoot civilians. I'm not saying he does not have a stunning capacity for violence but he does have some restraint when dealing with innocents.
But don't mind me I'm just rambling right now.
3439767 Just remember, after he stole the candy he did give each of them a gumball, boom justified! XD Lol, honestly Doomguy has been rebooted so many times that in some cases people make him look like a dumb blood thirsty killing machine (Like in some of the comics) to what you stated. But other than that, in the next sequel (which plenty more will come) I'll try to stick what you said and try to keep him straight. (depending on his mood, also don't take that statement the wrong way about keeping him straight.)
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Its very good to read a story were the doom guy is actually some what decently written.
I mean the in the first story when he fell under the spell I was laughing my ass of the entire time.
personally I see doom guy as having one major defining character trait. His Willpower is incredibly strong as he can look unpon untold horrible monstrosities of hell itself, Commit himself to commit unmatched deeds of violence, and keep going simply because in his mind...It was right thing to do...
His moral compass seems to be strong enough keep him sane and fighting in the worst possible situations, he never seems to doubt the worth of his personal fight against hell, just seemingly excepting the fact that he has to simply because it needs to be done.
Maybe its just the fact that doom guy is pretty much my favorite character of all time and one of those I hold extreme amounts of respect for.
3439833 I understand what your saying, I share the same feelings for my favorite game character Frank West from the Dead Rising series. But yeah, this fic after I reread a few times does hold a few problems, ones that could easily be fixed. But in the mean time I have many other things I need to be doing besides going through and fixing them.
Other than that though, it is just a mindless comedy I did write for Halloween. But once I get some free time I'll try and fix those moments that just don't seem right.
more more more plz more
These are great, ponies getting their ass kicked without mass murder/genocide.
3677573 Well I want it to be so that everyone can read it, and not be turned away.
I am awaiting the next installment bahahaha
3989788 Sadly the next installment won't be out for a little while. Seeing that my exams are drawing near and that I have to take down all my Doomguy stories and make them one because of a new dumb rule Knighty and his legion of Moderators came up with.
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Awww...
...well I still support watchu doing. If it can't go through, these are still excellent reads x)
LOL Again THIS IS GOLDEN!
Also, MOAR DAMNIT!
Um... Rainbow..? Well...