good luck in your other work, kind of a shame you cant finish this properly

You know this story is the first one I read from your collection and my personal favorite due to how much work you put into it. I really enjoyed all of Isaac's adventures and, although I'm disappointed that the scenes in this summary wont be portrayed, I'm glad that he had such great times. Its a shame that the duel or the heat incident with the Mane 6 and the Princesses wasnt shown because that would have been hillarious. Still I'm glad that you made the time to complete your work via summary rather than cancel the story. I hope that you can continue with your stories, now that you finished this one

I'm guessing each paragraph is each chapter.

WHile disappointed that this won't be finished normally I find the summarization pleasant enough.
Though I admit the whole Luna/Isaac thing threw me for a loop...and I have no idea why it did seeing as I should've expected it.
Anyway I wish you luck on your future stories!

It was a good run. I wish you the best in your other stories.

I believe I was infected with the virus too, The Feels.....

oh lord, i wish i was better at art so much, i want to create this story, the whole story, and bring it to life. Maybe one day i can, but till then, good job, and it was one hell of a run

i liked this story i wish it went on a little longer so it doesn't leave it so open ended not much i can do there

While I am dissapointed that the rest of the story was explained through summery, as well that Isaac is no longer in a relationship with the mane 6(also shouldn't they have their own kids seance he had sex during their heat), at least it was told in a cinematic way. Shame Isaac had to die.

Bravo sir for giving us one hell of a run and even though it was a summary I can say that it was one hell of a story. Good day sir.

how i both love and loath you

…………………whatever……

I like how he had a kid with Luna............ good story

Oh Silent you evil genius you. Love it, I absolutely love it I'm kind of sad its over though But if you ever feel like writing more of this I suggest to make that last chapter in to many. You had an amazing run best luck on everything.

-Your faithful follower Alpha

Sad that you didn't officially finish the story in story fashion but the summary was nice.

Overall...

Meh.

I don't want to sound rude or anything, but over the course I didn't particularly enjoy it too much. Issac, compared to James from Displacement, seems to carry way to much angst and baggage, and at times the Mane 6 seem to go too far OOC. Rarity, the Element of Generosity, cheating? Twilight going into his mind, while not going into another Lesson Zero induced mania?

The sex was a bit less then satisfying and a bit too straight forwards...

All in all, it's not bad it's just not my thing.

4021746 *jazz hands* magic!

4021940 well it's not logical, therefore "magic" aka copout.

This would have made an awesome fic. I never known that one fic could hold so much action... A little too much if you ask me.

Although its painful to know that this great story was only finished with a summary, I have to say that I really enjoyed it all anyway. It's been one hell of a journey to read this story, I'll never forget it

Well I'm heeeeeerrrrrre(You knew this was coming.)

To everyone: STAY OUT OF THIS! This is between me and him, so don't interfere and I don't want you guys giving any dislikes on this comment.

First I'll start with the good:(Yes, I have a few good things to mention)
I got to say after reading EVERTHING you had planned I'm really surprised at you. The way you talked to me, it was like you didn't know what the next chapter was going to be. I was thinking this what happens when you don't plan ahead. But JESUS you had planned enough to keep this story going on for another year. Story arcs that I liked: Crystal Empire arc, Isis returning arc, Blueblood duel arc, the 'heat' wave/molestia arc.(that was funny) I have to say I'm proud of the stories what you had planned. This still shows that your a good writer. (so pat yourself on the back.)
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Even though I said you had good ones, there were still some that I didn't like. The whole Catalyst fusing part. you wanted to stop him from being a Gary Stu, and then make him one again?! The part about the first Changeling being a human, which you never explained its origin well. Scarlet being Celestia's and Lunas mother and the virus outbreak(too science fictiony and complicated for this story) which led to Issac's death. I HATE endings like that. And last I checked, you wanted to end the whole Issacs past is in the past and move on thing, only to have his comrades temporarily returned, and then having his dead fiance giving him a final farewell.
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Add to the fact that you had to be a fucking pussy and call it quits pisses me off. You had good ideas but you had confidence issues. I'll admit even the good stories that I pointed out could have bombed depending how you wrote it. The fact that you started second guessing yourself and changed your mind is what did it for you. Instead of going, "I'm the author, I'll write the story how I want it. And if they don't like it, then they can go fuck themselves!" You tried to please everyone, and now in the end you pleased no one!(You led your own downfall.)

And of course don't think I forgot that one little snippet.
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I warned you about what would happen if I didn't like what you did, AND YOU FUCKING DISAPPOINTED ME!
Now before I talk about this, I'm going to tell you WHY I was so focused on this part. Even though I was enjoying the story and left comments, I'll admit that your story was starting to bore me like everyone else was. I felt the story had gotten stale as if the magic was gone and the story was dragging on with no end in sight. When a chapter was updated, I wasn't in a hurry to read it and wouldn't touch for days until I got around to reading it. And then....that arc happened. So much drama, from sadness to anger and back again, SO MUCH EMOTION!(It was like I was in a emotional rollercoster) I got so wrapped up in that arc that I said, the magic had returned. Your story was coming back to life. When a new chapter came up, I immediately read it to see what would happen next.(just like the old days). Then..... you fucking canceled the story. Leaving that story unfinished. I was so frustrated at you.(and you know that.) and then there was hope, you were bringing the story back after you realized the mistake you made. Of course you dragged that part out which kept me on the edge of my seat until you finally hit that topic, which I was disappointed on how resolved that part of the issue. AND NOW THIS! the first part of what you had planned I loved. and then you had Issac break up with the six which......pissed me off! If you planned on this to happened then why did you cause such drama in the first place? You basically did what practically every writer on the show does to poor Spike. And then you conclude that issue, with Spike hooking up with the CMC and everything is A O.K. without even explaining what caused this to happen. I might not remember everything, but I think the CMC are still underage in this story to be part of a herd.

*sigh*
You made us go on this emotional ride with this story and now that you end it right here, it as if everything we experience was all for nothing. Every time you made us laugh, smile, sad, angry now means nothing. I hope that you learned your lesson so this shit doesn't happen with all those future stories that you had planned but couldn't release because this story was in the way. Let me tell you something, I know a guy who has a bunch of uncompleted stories and even though his fans complain that he should finish those stories he makes like 2 new stories every month. The fact that just ONE story kept you from making more.....just disappoints me. And even though your going through some depression, let me tell you, Your not the only writer on this site that's suffering from some type of depression. Some have it worse than you but they STILL keep going, because it makes them feel good and they have their fans to back them up. The next time your feeling down, TELL US! We will be right here to help you. You have about 500 people that support you and they can provide comfort, advice, and whatever you need to get you out of this state.

As much as I want to say, that it's alright that you ended the story and you should be proud of what you accomplish and shake your hand. But:
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You disappointed my bro, so congratulations you are getting my 2nd dislike I've ever given on this site(you earned it.) If you want to talk you can PM me. I'M OUT!*bangs keyboard*

As depressingly sudden ending as it is, I'll deal. You have your own shit to worry about and that is very understandable in these times. May our journeys allow us to cross paths once again, worthy writer. *This is where a thumbs up emote would go if there was one, and I'm to lazy to link a picture.*

4027146 Everything you said hit the nail on the coffin. I mean, he didn't want to finish because of confidence issues? Dude, i could understand writers block, but seriously? You should only have confidence issues if you released the chapter, not writing the story. If anything, this whole chapter is the most pussiest move I have ever seen in fanfiction history, and that's saying something.
Even the shit he does here doesn't make sense. Breaking up with the entire Mane 6 because he had issues with Twilight entering his mind? Pretending to "kill" a body? Has no problem fighting Blublood? If anything, he could have just put this story on a longer hiatus if he wanted to improve the story, dialouge and pacing.

I say that this was a good, it ends with the truth being revealed and all loose ends tied up.
No doubt -- endings are hard. But then again...nothing ever really ends, does it?~chuck, supernatural

This disappointed me. After all the time i put into reading this to get slapped the first time with the fact that you gave up. Now that i saw this its just a disappointing ending. Good day sir

-Hunter96

4027146Everything you said was true and I'm sorry for ending it as I did. Frankly I came up with that whole deal at the drop of a hat. I had no wish to continue the story and it was mentally draining me to the point of exhaustion. I'm not using it as an excuse. I'm just stating a fact. I know that I could have gone more in depth with some parts as you pointed out with the whole Rarity/Spike thing. I didn't evene know that people payed attention to that arc and I only added it in as a filler.

It is true that I had no idea what I was doing when I first published it and I was just making crap up as I went. Writer's block did hit me like a ton of bricks after I posted the second to last chapter and I was desperately trying to get back on track. Like I stated in my previous PM's the idea of a summary had been kicking around in my head for a while and I wrote that summarry in the hopes that getting my idea's down on paper would help that creative spark again and I could expand on it. I tried so hard to do that but nothing came out. I swear I must have stared at that summary for hours on end hoping for something, anything to jump out at me and get to write it all out.

That backfired. It just showed me how far I had to go to complete it and it didn't seem worth it. Keep in mind it was my first human/clop fic so I was a rookie at it when I started and didn't expect to get the type of feedback I had recieved from so many people. I didn't want to just cancel the story like I did last time and I wanted to end the torment of my psyche. So I published the summary and....I have no regrets. I feel as though a 20 ton weight has been lifted off my shoulders and I respect any criticism and harsh comments. I knew what I was getting into the minute I wrote the summary and I'm not sorry about it.

I am sorry that you and several others find it displeasing and I tried to satisfy everbody. That was another key factor to my downfall. Now I know that I must power through no matter what. I'm not going to continue that fic. No matter what anyone says. It's over and done with.

From the ashes a new one will rise. Better and brighter than before.

Thank you for all the encouraging words and messages to me and I hope to see more of your reviews in the future.

4031164 wow u had to put effort into reading a good story

I know its not the best ending but at least it was well thought out and not a pile of crap. I liked it actually. Good on ya silent Pegasus I hope to see other stories at least somewhat like this in the future

Holy Shitballs....... This beats the Everliving Hell out of replaying Super Mario Galaxy 1 & 2 and Sonic Colors.

Respect, my friend.

...Scarlet, huh? That on purpose?

4095577 She had scarlet red hair.

4097847 I may have misspelled reses but when the blood is O type its called O reses negative or positive I THINK its like that for all blood types they just don't bother saying it and just shorten it for e.g.to A positive instead of A reses positive. My mom told me it WAS all blood types and she is a doctor so yeah.:/

4103119 No idea who you're talking about.

It's so sad

This update never showed for me. Oh well.

Darn, I hope you change your mind and pick this story back up. I get that you've laid down a summary of the rest of the story but Its so much nicer to read when it's In story form.

4034972 I'm kind of disappointed of how the story ended, but I can understand for your reasons for doing so.

So, the story is over and Issac sacrificed himself for the good of the planet. Wow. Just...wow. There really isn't any need for this to be continued because it's over.
Good Luck with life and everything else.

Blunt criticism. This story was for lack of a better term was annoying. Don't take anything in this comment to heart but the entire character development for Issac was awful. Again all my opinion and should be brushed off but his character screamed Gary stu with the combat training and the convience of every one of his skills. Beyond that the other characters as you have portrayed them are nothing but anthromorphic nymphomaniacs. I did read all of it and was relieved when I finished.

4297244 I realize this and I apologize for the content. It was my first attempt at a humanized fic and was more of a self insert. I like to think that I have improved then when I first started writing Somewhere I Belong.

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That's not a rare blood type.

Thank you for at least ending the story like that. Every other author who decides to cancel their series never do that and I wonder why: Is it because they're afraid of the backlash they're going to get for ending a series this way? Is it because they're afraid a random fan might try to make this idea a reality and do it poorly? Or is it because they still hope to come back to it one day which is why they never bother to do it? Whatever the reason is, I'm just glad that you wrote down a summary about what would really happen to the characters instead of just simply saying it's cancelled and leave it at that. At least I am now content with how the story ended because, at least it's finally over.

Now as for the story itself, it definitely just kept on getting more confusing as the plot goes on about everything that has happened to Isaac, but I at least understand it in the end and at least everyone else managed to get along really well before the guy's death. It's just sad that he couldn't at least end with him starting a life or finally having a moment of peace where everyone at least gets to live without anyone needing to sacrifice themselves. Not to mention I don't think Isaac ever got a real girlfriend through all of this, just lots of friends with benefits. Oh well it was an interesting story and I really enjoy the fact that the story is actually done instead of discontinued so thank you for doing something that I saw no other artist bother to do when they are cancelling/ending a story, write a summary about what happens to everything else before closing the book on this for good.

whyyyyyyyyy!? I liked this story soooo much!

4353232 That was my bad. I accidentally added it and I have tried to get it removed.

Some people are just rude with their comments xc I thought the story was great. 10/10

The should be a sequel to Some where I belong called finding piece it take place in the fucher where Isaac's douther try's to find out more about him and has many quest try to learn about her dad and try to learn his secrets that he took to his grave did any one think of that http Silentpegasus had so much Potential and he threw it at a wall and kicked it over and over till it died he could bring it back to life

4451089 As I said in the PM. No. Best to let sleeping dogs lie.

4451264 I know I just wanted to see what the people say and you got my first dislike you had Potential but you killed it I hope you love what you ave done and to think you where a good write

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57 weeks? Really? I can't even remember when I posted that.