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Silentpegasus


An aspiring writer that loves the fandom and it's works

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Once again, you managed to draft an interesting story. Keep up the good work.
BTW, contrast on incluidos Comet in this story, we don't see much of him after Flash Sentry.

Hehehe. Good job! Can't wait for more!

I am curious to see how getting whomped by Tirek evolves into royal debauchery.

So a brand new story.:trixieshiftright: on the same day you updated another story. (I wish you wouldn't do that.) But whatever, like gets this one started with it's first review:

Unfortunately, a calamity named Tirek struck. Most humans were too scared to venture there after he’d been sent back to Tartarus and several moved back to their home after he was dealt with. Connor chose to stay and was being treated by the best doctors available for his injuries.

Did I miss something when watching the finale?:rainbowhuh: Last I checked, the only building that was destroyed was Twilight's home. And we saw no one in Ponyville leaving their homes during the attack, So I'm wondering what the hell happened to him.

“No, nothings wrong Princess.” Twilight said with a nervous smile. “It’s just that a friend of ours is getting out of the hospital today and we have something planned for him.”

“Who?” Cadence asked with interest.

“Connor Rowe.” Celestia and Cadence thought for a moment and tried to place the name to a face. “The human that showed after the Discord fiasco. He was injured during Tirek’s rampage.” The pieces fell into place and both Alicorns remembered Twilight’s letter describing the event.

Wow:rainbowderp:.......They couldn't even remember the first human in Equestria. That's got to hurt.:fluttershysad:

“It landed near the Everfree Forest!” Dash said as she flared her wings and took off towards the crash site. The six mares came upon an odd looking building, it was two stories high had white paneling on the side and windows. The six gulped and saw the door swing open to see a tall, bipedal, bald, ape like creature wearing a grey T-shirt and jeans. He quickly walked outside and circled the house. When he got back around the front he dropped to his knees and raised his right fist in a victory.

“Yes! No, red slippers!” The six mares looked at one another in confusion as he stood back up. He turned and froze as he laid eyes on the six mares. A long silence fell between them.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:Oh yeah, this made me laugh. Although, it wouldn't exactly be a bad thing if he did find some red slippers, would it?

“Hey easy Pip. I’m barely holding together as it is.” He chuckled as he tousled his hair. Since moving to Equestria, Connor had developed a tight bond with a local colt name Pipsqueak. His parents left him at the orphanage when he was three and he was living there ever since. “How’re you doing?"

:rainbowderp::rainbowderp::derpyderp1:Okaaaaay, where the hell did that come from?:facehoof:

“Don’t let him get under your skin sugar cube. Discord may have helped Tirek, but he got what he deserved. Besides he’s better now.” She said as she chugged back her drink.

I don't know, to me he got off too easy.(but that's my opinion.)

“‘The only thing we found on you that wasn’t broken.’ Are you an idiot?” Thunder stated. “Don’t answer that, cause I already know the answer.”

“What? It’s true.” Mac face palmed.

“Caramel, if somepony lost a leg do you ask about it?”

Well shit, what the hell happened to this guy? With the injuries he sustained, it's like Jesus.:pinkiegasp: What he do, walk up to Tirek and punched him in the face?:twilightoops:*end of review*

So this new story is off to great and mysterious start. Can't wait to learn more about Connor. I also noticed that this is your first story that has Twicorn in it.:facehoof: While I'm pretty sure that the story won't focus a lot on her(hopefully) Please refrain from pissing me off.:twilightangry2:

So far so good, but I wish you would work on 'Tears of Fire' some more...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

So about the anthro tag... Do the anthro ponies have human faces like on the cover or ponyish faces?:rainbowhuh:

That cover art is simply delicious :rainbowwild:

4903895 (Must contain fan squeal!) Ahem, Nope. Just a random name I came up with. Why?

Whoever diskiked this obviously has no taste or just gets on here to hate anything they can.

Where Luna damnit! Also fave and like!

4904396 Thank you for the kind words, but everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

It's a fun romp. I like the aspect of Gamer Luna. That's pretty nice, and also having a portal available for Equestria to Earth Travel is decent. That said, I'm surprised that you don't, or haven't mentioned, Button Mash. I'm only saying it because of the massive fan cannon dealing with Button being a gamer. I could see the colt warming up to Connor.

Regardless, this is a fun story that I plan on following to the very end.

Thanks for letting us view the universe you've created.

My god!
I'm not sure whether my eye is leaking from the sheer beauty of this portrayal of Luna, or if it's the liquid burn I got in the corner of it earlier tonight.
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Actually, the stinging with it answers that question.

:yay:It's storys like this that make me love reading, especially your's.:yay: :twilightsmile:I wish I could write this well, your damn near perfect. Please, never stop writing.:twilightsmile:

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Meeeeh just wondering. Anyway nice story.:ajsmug:

“I need all the bleach.” Connor said as he made his way downstairs.
“Get a second glass if you would be so kind.” The Princess said as she followed the human.

This....This is what earned you my like,fav,and continued interest.

I like it! A like and fav you shall have.

:rainbowlaugh: She's psychic. Of course, she's psychic. It wouldn't be any fun if she wasn't!

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I haven't disliked this story but I can understand why they might.

It's far too tell-y While also being rather inconsistent about it. There's no reason that the story should tell us Twilight is 5'8" unless A, it's important to know exactly how tall she is and B, someone is actually reading/saying those details for some reason. Nobody else got that kind of detail. Similarly, details like Pip's time in orphanages is randomly dictated to us in the middle of a completely unrelated action. This chapter is full of these things.

Then you have random, apparently pointless encounters like Discord popping in and back out. Judging by the rest of the chapter, since Discord wasn't there to bury the hatchet or to hang around and tease people, I doubt that Discord'd appearance is anything more than extra words.

And finally there are badly out of character characters like Celestia calling someone an idiot.

In my opinion the story needs work, but it could be a great little number with some quality revisions.

Love It! It perfectly describes me in that situation. Good job on making the characters not too dull and predictable.

This reminds me a little of Her Starry Sky, by J8ck78.

(1) MC walks in on Twilight doing naughty things AFTER she's asked them to come over.*

(2) Luna can read MC's mind and respond (probably going to lead to some awkward moments due to MC's thoughts).

(3) Luna had an alter ego so as to remain incognito (although, many stories do have that).

Thaaaaat being said, I'm not saying it's a ripe-off. It's already got a like from me, and I am tracking it. You have elements in it that make it your own, and I love the back story, as well as the shipping done with the Mane 6. I look forward to more of your story (and secretly hope that you take it someplace fresh. We need more original stuff on this site).


*I mean serious, I'm not bashing the story, cause it's actually pretty good and I'm going to be keeping an eye on it, but Twilight basically tells MC that "[she] need [him] over here. It’s important", then goes and bumps ugly with her coltfriend. Ooooops. :facehoof:

4905630 In all fairness though she did say "at noon" and he came over earlier which obviously means Comet was supposed to be long gone.

I have a question; what does anthro mean?

All hail the newspaper! It’s powers can tame even the most wildest of creatures.

ALL HAIL

well, good fic, nice flow... I LIKE IT, may i have another?

I absolutely love the scene where Connor and Celestia caught Twilight screwing with her boyfriend. This Luna has my respect for giving Blueblood the beating of the century.

4905947 Anthropomorphic: To have human like form attributes or Basically the Cover image. Your Welcome:ajsmug:

encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRmRLBhOsUSwtb2QRZJ4jhWXIZvG0SR8loh4knZ2M5dGZRj8Ax5 I do enjoy this I can't wait for more.
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Oblivion reference
Skyrim reference

CALLED IT

:rainbowderp: That link text wall.... That aside, I like where this is going.

4906250 What the fuck is up with the wall of text?

4906479 "Stop right there criminal scum!”
(Oblivion)


"Azure Star" (daedra artifact quest in skyrim)

Yeah, I'm a bit of a fanboy when it comes to the elder scrolls

4906629 I did not know that they were in Video games the criminal scum thing I've heard used in youtube video mash ups but I ws unaware of it's origins. and the Azure Star thing I chose becuase Luna's disguise is blue and stars are part of the night sky.

Skyrim is boss!:pinkiehappy:

Thanfully found no red shoes

But there where red sun glasses!

Another chapter so soon(haven't even responded to the first one.) and early in the morning. I had to go through the whole day knowing there was a chapter I have to read and wouldn't until at night. Let's see if I got another one in me. Review start:

“Asking me out Twi? Cause Comet is my friend and-” A purple blast of magic went through his window and hit the wall behind him leaving a scorch mark. “You’re paying for that window Sparkle.” He grumbled.

Hilarious moment already. In your opinion, whose your funniest OC? It's messed up seeing that you can send magic blast through phones(what if someone used this method, turning phones into a weapon?:derpyderp1:)

Lyra turned to see the human and froze. “Put the screw driver down before you blow us all the way back to Earth.”

Don't know why, but my head went straight to Doctor Who and I'm pretty sure that quote wasn't in the show(for all I know.)

“I can fix it! I-” Bon-bon grabbed the newspaper she had been reading before fetching the human, rolled it up and lightly tapped her mare-friend on the nose.

“No.”

“But I-” Another tap was delivered.

Bad Lyra, bad.
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“However, we were meeting with some representatives from the griffin and dragon kingdom. Along with some ambassadors from earth. Luna’s little outburst caused some concern. Therefore I suggested that she,” she looked over to Connor. “how you human’s say, ‘lay low.’”

Wouldn't that mean that whatever business they had planned, Luna wont be involved or have any say? Man what a way for Celestia to make Luna less important. How long will she have to stay low?

“Do it because you owe me.” Celestia said with a grin.

“Huh?”

“The crown is covering your medical bills, consider this as a collateral.” Connor’s right eye twitched.

More like blackmail. Also it was because of the princess actions that cause this to happen so if anything it's their fault and are responsible for covering any damage Tirek did.

“The tax bit anyway. The medical is a gift for your role in Tirek’s imprisonment.” The man furrowed his eyebrows and crossed his arms.

“I didn’t do a bloody thing. Just got my ass kicked.” He gripped his right arm in frustration.

So I was right, Connor did do something during Tirek's attack. I'm guessing it wasn't much seeing as nothing came out of it but a few broken bones. First Celestia is saying the bills she's paying are collateral and now she says they're a gift? I'm confused here, she said one thing and in ten seconds she contradicted herself. If the bills a gift then why bringing it up as means of blackmail?

“Very true, but Pinkie practically blurts big news to the entire town like it’s her job and Rarity loves to gossip.” Twilight stated.

And of course since Luna is going to be living in Ponyville in disguise, Pinkie's going to throw her a party.(That's not going to end well.)*end of review*

Well we finally get to the main story, I'm guessing the first chapter might as well have been a prologue since were now starting the whole roommate scenario. Let's see how the first day will go.

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