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Jet Howitzer
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Jet Howitzer
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Clopfic? Porn with Plot? Plot with Porn? or a story that happens to contain sex?
That cover art
1934048 Plot with a smattering of porn. Mostly plot, though.
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Twilight would wear a full bodysuit wouldn't she?
Wait a second here...
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Wait.. Hold up..
I just..
Howitzer... Just....
Hold on.
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So.
I'll.. just.. go now.
And...
Things.
((Commence reading.))
1934126 I dun get it.
1934159 Didn't expect a humanized fic from you.
Let alone something saucy.
I guess I should learn to expect anything from anyone.
((Also, there has been more writing done on my OC story. Just so you know.))
1934170 Expect anything from me. Hell I wrote Celestia getting raped by Cthulu. Anything is possible from me.
1934176 True enough.
That was actually a very relaxing and a very emotional first chapter.
Very good work was done here, good person.
Hmm…
The calm before the storm, eh?
1934176 That stuff was crazy I should add.
1934126
dat gif
I hope this doesn't end up as a group sex thing. I feel weird saying doesn't instead of does. That's what ponies do to me thought.
Hm. Commence read.
Should be interesting.
.....You have my intrest.
Interesting. As for 'your' wings, are they just amputated stubs, or what?
Regardless, +1 for you.
1934063 Mostly plot you say? Hmm...
Like Plot with plot? or plot with Plot?
YRGH my read later list grows larger by the day
Not a bad start.
So there's no correlation then? It's good to know that it's the small things that matter the most except for when it's not.
(Now that I've come here and said that, I may as well read the story.)
Well now this should be interesting lets see how long this goes before one of the girls kiss Icarus
Looks very promising! What's the schedule like for the next chapter and on cause I'm very interested where this ends up going!
1935048 Chapter two is about half done being written. No ETA on editing, though. Mine editors are a finicky, but lovable, group. I owe them all quite a bit for the work they put in.
1935059 Fair enough, looking forward to the next chapter regardless!
D-d-dat cover art...*has nosebleed* ...Rarity truly is the best of ponies. And humans evidently.
Will read. And soon. Looking forward to this.
1935112 Glad you like it. And I respectfully disagree. All ponies are best ponies. But why don't you wait and see what I concoct for this tale of mine.
1935121
I like this story.
Please, continue.
~Legitimizoring Video Game ficfictioner
1934792 When I first wrote that I wasn't giving it much attention. Frankly, I was more concerned with the plot than with the short synopsis.
I love this song, so I hope you make a good job representing it with this story. ill put my trust on you
My friend... Your title gained my interest... Now your picture has my attention. Let us see if you can keep it.
You...haven't been featured yet?! What blasphemy is this?!
KNIGHTY!!! Just kidding. It's not knighty's fault that the feature box is broken...
...
Anyhow, good first chapter. The characters may be humanized, but they still sound and act like, y'know, ponies. Upvote and favourite, my good man.
-DivideByZero
This story makes me rage. Not because of the text, but because of the picture and humanized ponies. FURFDUUUUUUUUUU
Perfect for the vibe of most of this chapter!
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Okay, well why the hell isn't Spike in this story? I honestly rage at fanfics where the mane six have an awesome vacation and have a lot of sexy fun with each other while Spike f***ing misses out on everything. I though that after the Crystal Empire itself that the fandom would never produce this kind of Spike neglect ever again, let alone get featured.
Yeah, all except the one who risked his life to deliver the Crystal Heart. Perhaps instead of saying Spike isn't present in this story, make it clear that Spike does not exist in this fanon universe. Because there's really no excuse to leave him out of this unless he's being heavily rewarded in some other way (which isn't mentioned as far as I can see.).
Off to a very good start, I like it a lot. Just one problem: you have the story tagged as humanized and you are still using very obvious pony references.
Think there's one or two more in there. Nothing too detrimental, it's just a bit confusing if all the characters are supposed to be human.
Oh...oh my. What a delightful premise. What a marvelous first glimpse. Faved, upvoting, and tracking. Ain't even mad that they're all humans. Would be nice if that had an explanation but whatever. And promises of smexy times to boot? Ladies and gentlemen, I think we have a winner.
Icarus? Like from the legend of Icarus and Daedalus? It fits, he lost his wings through his own mistake. A mistake which cost him and his father a great deal, and definitely would have left him recovering for a few months.
I can see this story will be very interesting, and very well written. I am looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Nothing better than a day at the beach with friends
1934048 I couldn't help but notice your icon is the druid from the Fire Emblem GBA games. Take another look at the cover art. They could all be Fire Emblem: Awakening characters. An odd idea that popped into my head, I know. I think Fluttershy just reminds me so much of all the soft-hearted kind women in Fire Emblem based on appearance, not to mention virtually being a Laguz.
1936217 Minus one.
You better be careful around Celestia if you got a name like that…Or did you already know that?
My guess is, He was once an adventurous scamp who flew too high/far, got tired, fell and broke his wings to the point that they had to be amputated…or something to that extent.
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Didn't I explain to you once before that Spike is a kid? What's he going to do in a Mature fanfiction?
Anyways, to the author, I enjoyed this so far. I hope to critique it after a few more chapters.
1934063
>Not a relevant comment.
Just realized your
BritishJersey ass wrote this. Can't wait to critique it, though.I remember reading this a few days ago...
>ThatFeeling