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Rarity say you're sorry to Isaac... Come on.
Good girl.
Rarity... whoa, from all the mane six, she is the one that messed things up..
No way, Arby n' the Chief reference!
3324335 Which one?
I feel as though issac should have a herd but not the whole group
and FYI rarity is a bitch
3324384 what else is new
3324356 The thing with Isaac teaching Luna to shoot, as well as her sensitivity being at 10...
3324435 Oh right!
The irony if that FUS RO DAH is killing me.
pretty much sums it up
I literally cracked up with the Skyrim reference. Great chapter man! Can't wait for the next!
Kufufufufu~ May i have another soon kind sir? Kufufufufu~
F1utt3rShI~
(Daemon Spade)
Twilight slapping the 2 of them? What a bitch, really that was really un call for, and Rarity is in REALLY serious problems right now, I will not be surprise if he stop talking to her all together or even what she did, open old wounds with AJ and Dash, seriously I still can't believed he is so forgiven with those 2, they RAPE him practically, and with Rarity did to him…yeah I will complete understand if he decided to go into a long trip, after her encounter with Luna, don't speak to AJ, Dash, Rarity or Twilight until they learn there lesson and just decided to go help his friend changeling.
Trust is a 2 way street he trust them and they betray him, he really should be more anger at them at this point and doing the ice treatment right about now. its more than natural, why he hasn't?
3325137 He's lost too much and doesn't want to lose anymore friends for whatever the reason. That's why he puts up with their bullshit.
3325152
Oh so THAT is why…still I really wish those 4 get some punishment specially Rarity and Twilight, they really deserve it, for what they have done
Why not POOTIS POW?
3325499 POOTIS? What's that?
Called it! Draw! The thu'um was a bit if a surprise though. If he can use one, can he learn them all? Hard to say but I like thinking about it. Nice addition and I'm glad they worked it out.
Perhaps the alabaster unicorn will take something away from this, but that remains to be seen. She has much to apologize for but all things in time.
I await your next chapter with baited breath.
Love the Red vs Blue reference.
Doc is best medic.
Who else get someone orange juice for a gunshot wound to the leg.
another excellent chapter. keep up the good work.
Skyrim(dont know why it's a big deal), Red vs Blue, Arby and the Chief references, Oh my! this was a good chapter, which deserves a review Sooooooooooo lets get ready to RUMBLE *ding* *ding*:
Question: Were Spike and Rarity even a couple in the first place?(I don't think I remember) and I doubt it was hard for Rarity to end it.
The way the fight went, some might say it was a draw, but I'm thinking Issac won since he was able to get up and walk to Spike who was still on the ground.
The way Issac describes Rarity, makes her sound like a evil, seductive, manipulative bitch.
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It's weird how Issac can be a honorable badass one second then be a immature child the next.
If my nickname was Zero, I would be imagining this:
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Surprised that her color wasn't dark blue(Or was that too cliche for you?)*end of review*
Got to say, I wasn't expecting the fight to go that way at all. All I got to say is, PLEASE DON'T LET THIS TENSION DIE! Even though Issa'sc plan of letting Spike let out his frustrations worked out. It's still not enough(in my book.) Actually I don't think Spike will(or should) forgive Issac. You want to know why?........................................................................You'll have to ask me if you want the answer.(u mad?)
3325987 well i got shot in the arm and i got halo 4 and a 40" flat screen does that count
3326239 You're not in a boxed canyon in the middle of nowhere with no way in or out, so no.
Isaac's what? You need to write these things down.
Not to mention the emotional crapfest this story has turned into. I mean when it started out it had a nice storyline with the clop. Now all it has is clop & fight scenes for no real reason. Bro code is one punch while you sit there and get hit. Not start a goddamn brawl.
Uhm...Astrum...Calm down...please...We might be critics...but that doesn't mean we have to insult their story...even if it is true....
Nifleheim! Astrum! Laugh it off! It's nothing to worry about! Let's Just have FUN! HAHAHAHA!
Shut up Risum.
3326293 your no fun time to get sarge YOU JUST GOT SARGED
3326222 Oh trust me, IF Spike decides to forgive him then it will be a few chapters.
Were you expecting something like this?
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You know that bit of he asking don't be kill it was really out of place, he was angry, resolving a problem and Twilight just add more unnecessary pain, he should be feel bad and angry, this change is complete out of place, and it was not even funny if you where aiming for a joke and the thing with the glare of Luna…yeah same thing, it would be better if just protest but Luna use negotiation to persuade him to use it, not treating, really I don't think 2 parts add up with the rest of the chapter.
And the fight was good, I only wish they had stay it, a secret
3325760 here's a hint: $400,000
3326653 Prepare to get Simmonsised.
Rarity that was not very lady likegreat chapter too
3327055
.......????? Dafaq is that supposed to be?
A good read, with fun references. Nice to have Isaac tell us (the readers by way of Luna) what happened, although I sort of had a suspicion his injuries were torture or heavy war-fare induced. Also, rarity should have told Isaac that she and Spike had broken up before getting it on. I mean really! Common sense!
3327924 Spike's death.
3327655 Oh, Team fortress 2?
3328382
Why u gona kill spike?
3328390 yep, Heavy says it, although he really says: "Put Dispencer here!!" the way he says it makes it sound like: "POOTIS penser here!!"
And it has since become a Youtube wide phenomenon.
3328401 I'm not. I thought that you thought that's what I was going to write
3328449
I was expecting Spike getting his ass handed to him(not gettin killed), since Issac is all OP. You pointed it out that Issac could easily have beaten him.
You say he's a Marine and you say he had a drill sergeant? The fuck? That's an insult to the Army! Marines have drill instructors. Army has Drill Sergeants. Get it right or join the military so they can beat into your head!
3328481 Sorry!
3326591 Can't say I'm too fond of the direction this story is going in either. It did have a good start to it but as the story progressed there was always a new reason to either feel sorry for Isaac or make him more "awesome and badass". He's also bedded Spitfire, Vinyl Scratch and four of the main six, screwing over another character in the process. Seriously Rarity for the past two chapters has started to come off as rather heartless.
I'll still read it but as I said I'm not liking the direction it's going in.
3329519 Sorry, in all honesty even I can't see where this is going. I just write whatever pops into my head now and I can tell that my story is suffering because of it. Sometimes I think it would be better if I just put it down for good.
3329734 NO! GOD NO! DON'T KILL THE STORY! IT CAN BE TURNED AROUND! JUST DON'T WRITE WHATEVER POOPS IN YOUR HEAD!
...Astrum is right. Just think a little more about the story when you update a chapter.
3329734 You don't need to kill the story, in fact I think it would be better if you tried to improve it. Don't just write down whatever pops into your head, if you have an idea really think about it and how it would affect the story. If you need time to get some new ideas take as much time as you need.
God, I love this story. I do have to say that I hope Isaac fucks Luna at some point, that would make it for me.
Bravo Zulu on another successful chapter.
3330167 I plan on them having a romance.
Who's Zulu?
Why did you change it back to it's old cover? This is like the 4th time you changed it. (Not that I don't like it, just why?)
3332071 I may use that cover for a new story I'm writing.
3332136 Okay
3331829
Bravo Zulu is a way of saying 'Good job'.