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Silentpegasus
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I'm that first downvote
Didn't like the story- deal with it
2117279 It's fine, I can't please ever-pony.
Yea that's true
it's okay, you earned a fave and a like
Not bad I have read a few stories like this but I will see how this turns out.
looks pretty good for a first time
Ok, human just appeared aaaaaaaaaand AJ's a bitch
I would like to point out that anthro isn't really considered humanized. Whatever the case, I'm not really a fan of anthro but I'm willing to give this a chance.
But for that to come to pass; a question:
I noticed the "Romance" and "Sex" tags. My point: will this be the typical HiE where everything go ridiculously easy for the protagonist and he makes the mane six fall in love with him in an instant - and/or worse, all of them? Because if that's the case I'm out.
Anyway, without further ado; let's read. Be right back with a review.
I like the fact that Spike was the one to knock out the protagonist. In 99% cases it's always Applejack or Rainbow Dash, which is becoming a bore.
Isaac seems like a likable guy and a good enough character, though the fact that he takes the whole "being ripped from my own world to a land of colourful, talking equine creatures" really well bugs me. Mental break-downs, people - you would have had one had it happened to you.
Well, things seem to go pretty easy for him if you overlook the fact that he got locked in a cage like some animal. Other than that I don't really see anything that may turn out to be a problem in the fut- wait; the mane six don't trust him? And Applejack's and Dash's attitude (and some for Twilight) makes me want to hate them in this story?
...
I love it! This contradicts my previous statement that things will go easy for Issac, which is a good thing! Make him work for his well-being, make him deserve their trust!
So far, so good.
Just one thing:
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Capitalize 'belong' in the title.
I WANNA HEAL I WANNA FEEL WHAT I THOUGHT WAS NEVER REAL I WANNA LET GO ON THE PAIN I FEL TO LONG! erase all the pain it has come I WANNA HEAL I WANNA FEEL LIKE IM CLOSE TO SOMETHING REAL I WANNA LET GO GO TGE PAIN I FELT SO LONG!
SOMEWHERE I BELONG
This seems rather standard. I'll wait to pass judgement after something actually happens.
2117744 Oh trust me a break down is coming it will appear later on.
2118155 haha
I think I may have picked up on another mistake earlier, but I'm not absolutely sure.
Out with the bad, on with the good as it were, I can't say I dislike it.
It's sort of interesting to think of the ponies as anthro, especially since the cover art has me seeing them as human.
Well, I'll follow it with a favorite and a like, please,do write on, I suppose I would like to see more.
Good day gentlemen.
2118317 I just chose the pic because it looked cool and I'll fix the spelling error. Thanks for pointing it out.
2118326
Welcome.
Here to help, I'll be a little off-side proof reader.
2118313 And the relationship(s) between the protagonist and the pony of romantic interest? Will it be built or just "Hey, I like you - let's have sex!"?
im like it :D
2118398 I plan on building it, he will have opportunities to sleep with some mares, but I don't plan on just making the story one sex scene after another.
2118456 Ah. So it /is/ harem then? We'll see how it goes. Harem fics, when done right, can be magnificent. Keep in mind that they are also really hard to pull off.
2118545 I wouldn't know.
it's a bit cliché, but it's readable
loving this! already added it to my favorites
Ok the story is going steady, lets see how it turns out.
Which type of anthro? Refer to this: http://privatex007.deviantart.com/art/Anthro-Types-and-Adoptable-305193748
I just want to know before I start reading so I don't confuse myself.
I like this guy.
2118684 I'd say its about 20% out of 80%.
2118705 Okay, thanks.
Note to self, strangle spy for being a spy
Wow!! Nice! Lyra lol....
And all I could think of when Vinyl was listening to the I-pod was "Somewhere I Belong" By Linkin Park, does this story have anything to do with that?
Not bad, I will see how this will go
That was fast
2117279
Might I inquire as to why you did not enjoy the story?
nice this story is going pretty good!
Saw humanized, "AAAAAHHHHHH YYYEEEEAAAHHHH!"
notices a new anthro tag in description, "AAAAAAAHHHHH NNNNNOOOOOO."
holy shit this got featured.......not like i'm jealous or anything
Alright... Honestly, this chapter felt incredibly rushed as I read through it, both pacing and especially the conversations. I suspect you choose to let the reader imagine how the scenery unfolds as the character(s) walks to and fro between location and how fast paced conversations are. If not... well, it felt like that anyway - and that's not a good thing.
Uhm.. Hi, random talk to self... (I will get to "I’ve already got three girls numbers." later)
I agree with the person inside his head.
Anyway, this was a pretty bland chapter to be perfectly honest. I couldn't really get into it as I read. Well, maybe a little when he kicked the crap out of those pegasi (even if that was completely random); which brings me to another medium I'd like to point out:
Judging by how he handle himself in combat, Isaac is apparently a 5 star class fighter - considering he can handle 2-3 people ganging up on him no problem - and we have no idea why. Sure, it was mentioned in the first chapter that he somewhat consider himself stronger than most, but that doesn't automatically make him a combat god. Hell, even special forces get the living fuck punched out of them from time to time.
Whatever the case, let's have some exposition!
By the way, not only is he a combat specialist but he's a ladies man too. Three girls' numbers within the first hour of his stay in Ponyville.
....
Remember the thing I said about how harem fics can work if done right? Yeah... even if this isn't a harem fic as I first expected it really has taken a turn for the worse.
nice track for kickin' ass
2118863 I was going to spend ten minutes writing something, but you basically summed it all up for me.
Thanks.
And to the author... What that guy below me said.
2118863 I'll explain the combat skills soon.
I was browsing deviantart when I found it and I knew it had to be my cover photo. Sorry again.
2118845 Sorry for the failed expectations,
2117284
How in the hell did your comment get a downvote for being understanding?
2118919 Someone has to do it. Stick around for the all "fun" I'll be having. Or better yet, don't; because I do it because I like HiE.
2118934 Delightful. I'm sure his at least 4 years of martial art practice will be a fine addition to his background!
That is the reason behind his skills... right?
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say Silentpegasus i think this would be a better cover
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Props to you, good sir! I was sarcastically thinking that the "song" was going to be either Weird Al's "Weasel Stomping Day" or Agent Tex's theme. Still, you threw in a RvB song anyway. Good on ya mate!
As for the story, I look forward to the next chapter (hopefully chapterS) I'm still a little confused with the whole "everypony has a phone" deal, but what can ya do? It's all good.
P.S. Actually, the fact that he received the numbers of Lyra, Ditzy, and motha-bucking VINYL form two emotions in my heart...
1.) I'm totally friggin' jelly.
2.) It reminds me of friggin' Pokémon Soul Silver with every single person that you come across gives you their BUCKING NUMBERS!!!
Ignore the rage.
Bottom line: I love the story. Keep going at it!
update again,soon
2119003 I did see that one on Deviant art and I considered it but I like the one I picked.
2118942
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