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I bet Twilight wouldn't complain if she was having sex with him on that bed.
Ah. The Doctor. I do love the Whooves fanon, because Doctor Whooves is my favorite BBC(and usual)TV show of all time.
Time for two Doctor Who things.
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2331559 Agreed.
2331620 Right there with ya
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Yay, another chapter! Clop was even better than the last, yay for the doctor, and I think Isaac is gonna flip shit sometime soon.
Bravo Zulu again
2331559 especially when he has more endurance than any stallion
I'm assuming Mac hit him straight in the face and he has at least a decent sized black eye or bruise. Because if it was a hook, I don't care who you are, you're going down (maybe not a K.O. but at least some sense of vertigo) if you just let someone deck you willingly without blocking or rolling with the shot.
Or maybe Big Mac just doesn't know how to throw a punch properly...but I doubt it.
2331730 Valid point. I will explain that in the next chapter.
Wait wait wait wait, so this is just another of these fics that people like, where the protagonist, fucks every thing that moves? how unoriginal! *Gasp* and he has a rare blood type?! That is so not cliche!
I wish people were more creative with the human brought in by a spell thing. And what happened to STD? does it even exist in Equestria...?
Edit: If you think I'm trolling, yur dubas
It is a custom here on earth. Me and my brother have been fighting scince he was 5.
Well, now he can go anywhere!
Yeah tell them Isaac you have every right to be mad at them, they never consider your emotions, now they better treat you better or they will face the cold shoulder. And yes Dash, is bad is very, very bad, and just when he was starting to forgiving you…what is wrong with you?
Also a rare DNA blood, that will not affect now that he has royal blood to boost?
Again, rushed, needs better punctuation, use your commas. Also, so much is talked about in a really hasty manner, and there doesn't seem to be much development in terms of events, plus the conversations between characters seems really unnatural...
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I say MOAR!(of Whooves images and chapters of this fic)
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Oh, by the way, you should have used a better memory flashback for Isaac to emphasize his point about "not fitting in anywhere" to Luna. The one you used, far too neutral, and not really a lot of meaning to it. Also, it would help if Isaac explained some things about the memory, like his father and such, to Luna, to help her understand it better, also, there needs to be more to the memory than just the house, maybe some of Isaac's school years and such....
2331895 Take it easy. I'm working on it.
To that statement I think twilight is the exemption that proves the rule
2331559 agreed the whole i'll turn you into a sheep thing definitely a sign.
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You say unoriginal, I say pretty damn funny! XD
Oh ya Twilight that note really helped to ease the situation.
Anyways doing AJ like that was hot! Keep it up, oh and also who will be the next one to try to jump him? Fluttershy? Or Rarity?
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Well, ok, but I think you also need to take another look at what you've already written and make some changes there, too, because what happens there is going to carry on to the future chapters as well...
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I did enjoy it (especially the part with the Doctor) but I just lost it when you did the Blazing Saddles bit.
2331984 Rarity's dating Spike
2331559 Oh you silly bastard. That's hilarious what you just said.
2332172 Hey someone had to say it first.
2331808 STD's? They got magic they don't need vaccines for that.
funny but wished for a figh and Mac gets his ass kicked for once come think about is big tuff farmer vs traided MMA fighter worst case thing for mac he gets sent to the ER with a few orgains rupchered
Issac should totally have sex in that bed again. I would just to piss off twilight. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
I will just say a few things:
1. I find it hard to believe that Issac can control his dreams so perfectly.
2. Now that you introduce polygamy into this story, I'm wondering is there a limit?(Otherwise Issac will probably have the whole town under his belt)
3. The part with Big Mac was hilarious
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4. You totally got The Doctor bit perfect(and you used plenty of references. Not sure how Issac is going to be able to use the sonic screwdriver)
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5. I'm surprised that Twilight isn't interested in banging Issac, you think this would help her with her research in learning more about humans.
2332138 Oh ya forgot lol.
I think he might get with Luna
I should have seen it coming
Isaac,
Have sex in this bed without asking me if I want to join again and I’ll turn you into a sheep.
~Twilight.
You do know The Doctor doesn't say "spoilers" Right?
River says that.
I must say, I like the story so far. A few points of confusion, but I'm sure they'll make sense eventually.
Not quite at an upvote from me yet, but I do want to see where it goes.
Well done
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2333121 YES! I was wondering in anyone would get that referance!
2332017 I know River said 'Spoilers' I just thought it would be clever.
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And now! for my next impression! Jessie owens!!! Oh god, teared up, sides burst, and stomach clenched, You sir are amazing
My moneys on Spitfire being next(bow chicka wow wow)
You are the last prime, Opti-...I mean, Isaac
Mate, LOL to the extreme with this story
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Looks like you got your reply's to me and Onyx mixed up there buddy
2333538 Damn it.
Okay he was recently ripped a new one by a manticore, went to surgery, and got a blood transfusion how the fuck is he able to help out on the farm or even feel like even entertaining that idea. That is a glaring issue that I can get over but still....
This chapter seemed to move a lot quicker than the previous ones, but still a good chapter
2333714 you have a valid point, lol, never even realized that