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YES IT'S BACK IT'S GOOD TO SEE THIS STORY UP AND RUNNING AGAIN! THANK YOU SO MUCH
Ahh.. Hearth's Warming?
There isn't enough yes to describe how happy I am that this is back. CONTINUE WRITING GOOD SIR!
Awesomez! =D
so what will happen with his deal with luna ?
3658425 (Announcer voice ACTIVATE!) Tune in next time!
3658430 spoiler plz
Isaac said as his eyes became daggers. What will it look like if it happened litaraly.
IT'S BACK
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This is
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great chaptermerry christmas
Kufufufufu~ Sorry if this sounds like a bad comment, but im not good about giving comments. All i can say is i enjoyed it, sorry that this sounds really stupid. Sorry friend. Kufufufufu~
F1utt3rShI~
(Daemon Spade)
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When in doubt, Mossberg that bitch!
I prefer a Benelli M4 or a Saiga 12 Tactical personally
Awesome! But I have to agree, Dodge is kinda OP.
Can't wait to see his report on the holocaust., mainly for the history than anything else
MEAT. XD
Awesome!~
yay another chapter and a good one.
Merry X-mas to you to.
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Oh hey DJ what's up
3659257 not much. how about you?
Boo, Dodge, boo
First,
Their's a difference between Dodge and Jeep.
Second,
If you implying he pulled out a Rem 870, then it's a shotgun, not a rifle. Get 'er straight.
Dodge a shotgun shell... no you can't juat kneecap logic like that.
Fuck this fic and the horse (lel) it rode in on.
I seriously spent the last two hours reading chapter after chapter, just waiting for the main character to stop being such a tool and that has collapsed right before my very eyes. I could handle the numerous talents that he seemed to just pull right out of his ass, I could handle two ponies pining after him and I could handle the whiny "my life is so hard" routine, but this is just beyond me. What has gone from a fic that could have held something special has quickly devolved into a wish fulfillment fic of the highest caliber. Not only is the main character a whining, brooding, poor excuse for a respectable character, but he also manages to draw sympathy from ALL of the characters he runs into.
Skipping chapters didn't help at all. All it did was introduce more and more cliches while adding on to heap of garbage that is Isaac the god of all Gary Stu's. In short, he fucks a chick, bad things happen, everyone sucks so give him some sympathy, learns or reveals a bullshit talent and repeat over and over and over again.
Sit and insult an OOC Twilight for things that weren't her fault? Who cares! This Twilight is too brain dead to sit and level this idiot and all of his nonsensical complaints!
Make a promise with a scaly little serpent to back off from one of the MANY mares that inhabit the town? Fuck that shit! Just have Rarity dump 'em, writer! That will completely and absolutely rectify the situation and take all of the blame and responsibility off of this assholes shoulders! Spike is dumped! Fair game, right brah?
Fuck it! Have 'em fuck a princess! Why not? The guy is a marine, blacksmith, MMA fighter, COMPLETELY likable and faultless (other than his multiple personality disorder, his trust issues, his textbook douchery, his willingness to crush someone for some poon the list goes on and on!)
Other than the sad excuse for a likable character, the fic itself is littered with half finished sentences, hard to read grammar, terrible pacing and OOC that's running rampant, such as the previously xenophobic Twilight, douchebag Rainbow Dash and unclassy Rarity (Yes she is out of character. Even the trashiest chicks in my old high school knew better than to go from one guy to another in like a matter of minutes. Give it a month or two you freakin skank!).
It really brings me back to Earth, when it comes to the quality of the fics on this site and what kind audience writers are really appealing to whenever they post a story.
If this story can rack up 1,000 likes, it's a pretty clear indication that this site isn't a melting pot filled with different types of writers who all aspire to write something original.
It's a clogged up toilet.
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I'd go with an AA-12.
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Discord: "You must be new here."
3659527knee capping logic is what fan fics are all about that and good stories
bythe way good chapter bro glad you continued on writing this story
3659679 nice dude. Or first get a Masterkey undermount.
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I personally perfer medium range over cqc. That being said:
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Or
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It's nice to see that Rarity and Isaac made up but is it really a good idea for them to talk to Spike together? I think that would be a bit counter productive, however it probably will make things better despite the risk.
Wait, what herd? they practically launch at him into sex and never let him know if he even wants to be a part of something, and now they have this weird relationship of oh you have a herd now and his brother have the talk? Dude, seriously that makes no sense, he should be mad, clear the air, I think should be in order, not put this that contradict himself, and revenge, yeah I still my ground he deserve NOTHING,
Please dude I like this story but honest to god, you are putting things to fast, also great thing with the guilt trip with Rarity and Luna, very good job.
And serious sorry to add but…yeah, very sudden to put all this herd card, build off dude, we need build off
3659858 good fics have some reson for those random happenings.
3659656 some of us are here just to watch him fall... hars.
Finally after waiting for so long you bring back this story from the grave you buried it with. So let's how good this resurrection is with a review:
Was the whole pest part of the chapter a reference to the upcoming episode Bats? Also where did Twilight send them?(and shouldn't she have reverse the spell before teleporting them?)
Five chapters ago he was all furious now he's like all meh. You still have that problem about your OC's getting over some issue so quickly(well at least a few days passed before he got over it.)
This popped in my head when he said this(Did you used this as your reference?)
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I knew you couldn't resist and I knew you were gonna use that scene.
They didn't have a problem killing a pack of wolves sometime ago, so why they give Issac shit?
Um excuse me..... I'm pretty sure it wasn't his fault. Even Dr. Death doesn't agree it was Issac's fault but Rarity's(for once we actually agree on something(It's the apocalypse))
*deep breath* ever since the incident happened I've been hooked to see what was going happen and it looks like that time has come. Although the whole apology thing with him saying its his fault that I don't agree(you also made him sound a bit emo in my mind when he did it.) I'm willing to let it slide. BUT! you better not disappoint me with this next part! Spike has been always getting abused by the fans and even the show itself(just look at season 4). And like tomorrows episode, I think it's time Spike is finally due for some happiness.(SO YOU BETTER NOT HALF ASS IT!)
Um.... he's driving an alien machine around town, I'm pretty sure it's gonna attract no matter how slow he drives.*end of review*
So after being dead for a few weeks(it's been that long? felt longer) This story has return with a decent start. Even though Issac's demons are dead, it appears there is more mystery behind him. And even though you depowered him magic wise, you didn't depower him character wise.(You basically turned him from Superman to Batman. From one OP to another) so stop making him all perfect like(I know he's not perfect since he's got shitload of issues but he gives off that vibe). Still I'm VERY HAPPY that this story is back. But BE WARNED, your walking on very thin ice with the Spike/Rarity issue and I REALLY don't want it fall through the cracks and drown(If I'm not happy with what you do on ending this side story, the next review will so brutal it will make Dr. Death's review's look like it was written by a teenage chick having her period.) So happy writing...... oh and Merry Christmas.
I can't help but notice there's so much wrong about this story and its logic... but still, it's awesome enough to make up for those things and more.
Great story.
Oh and Merry Christmas.
Love the Star Wars reference.
One of my favourite lines.
3660036 *Gives a bottle of Jack* That was mouthful. The thing with Spike probably won't happen in the next chapter. More likely the one after it.
Merry Christmas you top and im surprised that he Will wat a manticore
Merry Christmas you top and im surprised that he Will wat a manticore
Isaac's starting to sound like Trevor...
3660023 That's the thing! He's never going to fail! I could come here five or six chapters later and all I'll find is Fluttershy sucking his dick because he's also secretly a zoologist
3661304 one can dream cant he?
3661242 Who?
3659306 I'm guessing you're a Ford person?
Did he keep the hide?
3661851 No, you couldn't pay me enough to drive one of those...
3661873 Yeah he did.
3661881 Likewise.