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poor flutters.
Sombra, you're an evil bastard
Why do I see him and Flutter hooking up in the end with a little one on the the way ^_^
Another awesome chapter as always!
Kufufufufu~ I cant wait for more. Keep up the good work. You really must find more time for this. I literally shall we say 'fit' of joy when i see this done. But its well worth the wait. Kufufufufu~
Good chapter the only thing that bugs me is Issac's back story and character, it seems like he's perfect and dark and everyone wants him, which is fine, but it seems he's all macho and perfect without trying at all and his past seems like its a bit overdone, like he's constantly gone through the worst and isn't fazed by it that much. My point is that he's a bit of a Gary Stu, or at least i think he might be, the story is fine and he's not totally perfect but some of his elements come off to me as such, try easing up and try making do different things show off more of his weaknesses and other sides of him, to balance him out. But I still like the story and I think its going okay but there are a few elements that bug me.
legit
Wow your nearly at 1000 likes good for you and HOORAY another chapter
2864058 why dashie upset yo
I foresee FlutterRape in sleep.
Awww, Poor Fluttershy
Look what ya did man!!!
Flutter rape incoming
Man if this guy was a Marine he mustn't had the lightest deployment ever.
in the words of Mr. Frezze ("nice very nice")great chapter by the way
I need moar :( I went to the chapter bar and I saw that there weren't any more chapters to read and it made me sad :(
Btw do you like mmmmm bananas? :3
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Never, this Fluttershy will never do that, mad at him thinking less than other yeah I can see her gettting a bit mad, but Rape? Never. And those this mean that when AJ, Dash or other mares asking to rut them he will decline?
2887858 Sombra?...... I must be lost because I don't see how he fits into what is happening. If you are referring to the evil bastard that is in the process of trying to kill him, that isn't Sombra. It is a hitpony that the asshole Blueblood sent.
And the hunt continue, I wonder what will the next opponent
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1. She want sex with him.
2. He said AJ and Dash force him.
3. An idea pops in Flutters mind.
4. ?????
5. FLUTTERRAPE!
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6. Fluttershy is…well shy,
7. They have a very respect of their friendship.
8. If she can't stay brave in the Trixie incident, chances are, she can't have enough courage to rape
9. I know what you are going to said the Galope Incident was because the animals ignore her, he said all and is all open with her.
10. I can see her trying harder to get close and when she said stop she start to cry and he see her suffering.
11. Bing Bang Boom, caring/kindness sex coming up, Bang there you have how things will turn out
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They always forget about YOU'RE GOING TO LOVE ME.
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I just said it in the 9) that doesn't count and it will never happen. He is not an asshole at the moment Shy start to beg, he will reply her emotions
Everything got sad this chapter but I can't say it wasn't a good chapter
MOAR!!!!!
KEEP IT GOING!!!! I do wonder when you are gonna hit the in depth portion of his units mission from hell and the tags he regrettably had to bring home...
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Gotta agree with you some of these parts seem kind of weird like it's bouncing all over the place and the only thing that seems to be consistent about him is his stance on what sex should be.
As for the others is it really necessary for ALL of the mane cast to force themselves on him? (he got away from Rarity though)
This story would be a lot better if you didn't just skip from place to place with short and not detailing your actions. It's still a good story nonetheless.
Another great story and I think Fluttershy want some little attention, I kinda feel bad for her.
2887927 I think the reason who so many mares jump on his pol is because its a clop fic…))) kindling! The reason is that he is a male and there is like only three stallions for every seven mares. Plus, things between male and females in their world are totally different from ours. Also, he is alien to them which make mares to be interested in him, like an exotic thing.
2888175 NO! I would never make Shy do that.
2887927 I totally see that and I will be diving into Isaac's back story more in future chapters including his time in the Marines.
I demand FLuttersex
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Apparently you havent seen one of Alex Wondegrove's (Its alex wond something) reviews on the previous chapters, i suggest you look in the comments bro LOL.
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i also find it funny how you have a picture of the "Doctor" and you name is DoctorStrange.
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Yeah I knew that you will never, do something so horrible with Shy, Dash and AJ got a very nasty talk like they deserve and perhaps they will have another one after go gossip about him all the time
2889802 well i managed to find him and well he kind of makes a few points and I kind agree with him to a certain point, pretty funny review though.
2889901LOL
and in the shadows Lord dark-blood evil red hate king dark-night evil sat in the shadows of his own shadows and smiled an evil-dark hate king smile. 'He knows how to fight, and be the opposite of evil-dark.' He laughed an evil-dark hate smile that only the dark lord dark-blood evil red hate king dark-night evil's would. 'This should be fun.' and with that, the evil Lord dark blood evil red hate king dark-night evil returned even further into his shadows shadows shadow.
2889917 (clap clap.) very good
2888277 Sorry just its a black unicorn stallion that has a shadow move into him. Also he had a creature from the Crystal Empire area Those things made me think he was Sombra.
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One thing to point out about the bow, although a compound bow is easier to draw a re-curve bow has more power therefore giving a higher chance of splitting the arrow which in either case is impossible. Also some explanation and detail of that scene e.g. *Isaac reached around the mare, her blushing as he did, "you see, you need to hold it straighter like this"..."you also can get more out of the bow if you hold the string like this", demonstration with his own fingers, on above the arrow, two other below it. "Then release, your top finger first then the other two"....* something like that would of been cool but I can't complain, I haven't worked on my fic in ages so I guess it's kinda hypocritical.
Good chapter anyway
Elixir
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well compound bows have little to no draw strength....
Stories getting better but I feel that Isaac is coming off as a Dark, mysterious, attractive, manly tough guy who has seen death on a horrendous level but hasn't succumbed (Much, He has the voice in his head :P) to any depression or what not. Entering the stages of Gary Stu. A few other elements bugged me but they're stupid things. This story is just fun to read anyway :D
We require more, good sir!
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Yeah I mentioned that...
I got a bit annoyed with the 2-3rd person perspective all through it, plus 'The man' was used waaaaaay to often. But I see you are doing well. Why not give Shy some sugar in the near future huh??
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Entering? He was a stu 18 chapters ago! I dont really care because the story is entertaining.