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Isaac's screwed
Well ... This ought to be interesting.
Kufufufufu~ This was well worth the wait. But do try to find time for the story soon. I find myself intrigued. Kufufufufu~
Issac should have taken a note from the former US Navy SEAL, the late Chief Chris Kyle: If you punch someone famous, you better be running before he or she hits the ground.
EDIT: Here's the news
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That should be fun to explain
JUST explain that bluebitch slapped rarity first!
2738479. Either that, or major Trollestia warning. Probably the former.
Fuuuuuuuck.... Celestia, if you punish Issac then I will be dissapoint.
2738631 i prefer the ladder.
Aaaand to the moon
Celestia probably wants to congratulate Issac but has to keep appearances up. Also this might have something to do with other things he did while gone: like the fire incident or maybe something to do with the cloaked figure that Issac fought earlier.
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Actually, I think it's more likely that Celestia has something important and plot significant to discuss with Isaac which has nothing to do with Blueblood, and the start of the conversation is going to go like this:
Isaac: Look, Celestia, if this is about Blueblood, let me explain-
Celestia: Oh, you've met my nephew? How did that go?
Isaac: ... ...about as one might expect.
Celestia: ...is he still breathing?
Isaac: Hey! I only headbutted him because he insulted Rarity! I wouldn't-
Celestia: You...headbutted...Blueblood?
Isaac: Umm...yeah. Right in the middle of the gallery.
Celestia: ... ... ...*cracks up laughing* I can't believe I missed that!
Isaac: ^^;
Enjoyable continuation. I admit I find it stretching credulity a bit at how quickly the mares are jumping into bed with him. It doesn't really feel believable, and that detracts a bit from the immersion.
Take that blue blood and did I catch a naruto reference.
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dude if Isaac get into deep shit over blue no balls prick I find out who is your neighbor and pay him 40 bucks to slap you in the back of your head
ps nice Naruto cameo thier
pss thank you so much for one of the few guys who have that little shit nor related to the princess by blood
Issac's screwed,
but FUCK BLUEBLOOD, I would've done the same thing, 'cept bring out my spirit animal all over his face!
Aw man I caught that Naruto reference!
Nice one. XD
Bro hoof! /)
Well isn't this a cluster fuck :/
2739211 I Remeber that line to its what naruto said to konohamaru
Isaac done goofed... I was happy with the club part.
2739446 What line?
2739845 Where Isaac said i wouldn't care if she was your grandmother. in Naruto konohamaru said something similar to what blueblood said and naruto responded I wouldn't care if he was your grandmother before headbutting him.
and by the way this fic still awesome in my book :)
Either she going to lecture him about beating her nephew …or she will thank him for that…or the third!
2739854 oh right. heh heh couldn't resist.
By Faust, IT IS KESSLER!!
Oh and Vinyl's Sexiest pony
Seems a little rushed to me. Caught a couple of spelling errors. good job keeping BB in character.
I have the slice reason that 2 things could happen, Rarity will try to be with Isaac in the future, and/or Isaac may have got pregnant one the mares he has be with. Boy the scandals if the mare he got was Spitfire.
And when did he will bed Luna?
I can actually picture Tia thanking him for bringing Blueballs down a notch.
Awesome sauce on a grade A steak this is. ^_^
I think that blueblood lied to Celestia about what happened, didn't he?
And now Celestia is going to be all pissed at him for threatening to kill everyone or something...
Vinyl is one of the sexiest pony :3
And Prince Blueballs deserved what deserves
I loved Isaac and Vinyl's scene together because it feels.... so right compared to the other girls. I wonder if she'll be the one to make Isaac go make a "herd" with AJ and Dash, but for now I like the love between these two and want to see it develop even further. A close one with Rarity still, but I'm worried about how she feels about Spike. If Vinyl is right about Spike being okay with this, then maybe he'll suggest Isaac and Vinyl to have some sort of group sex together or something like that much later in the story.
I wonder if that white guy is an alternate future Isaac like in Infamous where everything that guy is doing is to make him stronger. I bet Celestia will force him to train with her as punishment, especially after the strange happenings about that white guy, I wonder if she knew about him as well.
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*Le Gasp*
I love Hat 'n Clogs from bleach
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Yep! :)
Issac is screwed. Litteraly!!!
Cool chapter, no review.
Rare's .... I think you meant Rares, since the previous shows possession over an object due to the apostrophe, and the latter is a nickname.
fines .... I think you meant finesse, since there was no transition of money to pay for a service.
Other than these two errors, you did perfectly fine, with this wunderbar chapter.
2743775 ...he'll get out of it with a satisfying punishment.
Down with the man... Really... And I like it!
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i don't know if interspecies pregnancy is even possible.
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KESSLER
Oh I know she come to ask him if he want to become his new student
ha ha!
Some things to report sir!
1)when ever I imagine a rave in equestria it always involves Gangnam Style for some reason
2)Clop was boring, corny and a bit choppy so t'was hard to read
3)fight didn't last long enough and again was a bit choppy
4)everything in general seemed a bit brief and unexplained
I think I had something else to say but I'm just too derpy
everything else was fine as always
Elixir
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I guess
2746072 ....*Responds with MultiverseEnder* Goodbye.
Issac you got some splainin to do.
2748859 Love the 'I Love Lucy' line.
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sen·tient
/ˈsenCH(ē)ənt/
Adjective
Able to perceive or feel things: "sentient life forms".
sa·pi·ent
/ˈsāpēənt/
Adjective
Wise, or attempting to appear wise.
Noun
A human of the species Homo sapiens.
Also used to describe something that can; talk, understand complexities, or can have extremely complex/advanced motor skills.
The correct form is sapient.
2747560 Cows are already sentient.
With all due respect, I'm beginning to cringe more and more with each new "Deed" that Isaac performs. I don't have anything against a strong protagonist but this guy is just.... out there...
At least this chapter wasn't painfully filled with lines lifted from Doctor Who and targeted at Isaac, VERY cringeworthy.
In regards to the writing, I may have commented earlier about this but it still sticks out like a sore thumb. This - however- is primarily personal opinion on how fiction should be written and it may not necessarily reflect in other people:
You are not showing us anything. You are telling us. Your writing consists of two factors: Dialogue and Action. Whilst those two do make for compelling over the top drama, it lacks any sort of perspective. We (the viewer) rely strongly on the author conveying a world to us through description and other simple but effective techniques like metaphors, similes and the such. At present; the most descriptive value your story provides is colour and shape.
But this is personal opinion. I have read this far and will continue reading.