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I'll just leave it here.
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Your Doomed
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2305150 How so?
2305167Very, because Rainbow is unstoppable for her *cough cough* activities...
summing up the main point as simply as possible
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Awesome chapter!
Da fuq?
Yay new update. And a good one at that! Keep it up!
So Basically he got to "taste the rainbow" and the "rainbow" got addicted.
Isn't the whole 'Rare blood type' thing a bit too cliche'?
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Yeah, that is about right. Still not the worst way for things to go. That thing with the manticore kinda sucked but otherwise the day went meh.
Um ya that was a awesome chapter. Now I just hope that Isaacs alter egos don't come to life like Nightmare moon did.
Wait a minute, unicorn blood can safe a man life when he is at brick of the death and give back has his life.
Luna just give him blood with old magic on it, those that mean that he will now be able to cast spells and will had a very long life? We still don't know what effects her blood will have on a human.
So let me get this straight he bangs the most awesome mare in equestrian, basically tells a manticore to "Come at me bro!" and an immortal goddess gives him her blood in order to save his life.
DAT SWAG!!
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He's saying that RD is a nympho
2305360 cliché? this is the first time I have seen something like this. but maybe its because I don't read that many fanfics.
but I would like to see some examples
Also I think its going to be epic after this since well, Pinkie Pie will probably spread word around Ponyvile about how .... um health he is in the sack lol. Isaac meets Ponyvile horny horde. Well that's just a prediction.
this chapter was so ... random, and rushed.
one second he's fighting off a manticore and the next he's in the hospital.
one second he's bleeding out and the next he's getting blood from a princess which, surprise surprise... has the same rare blood type as him (which, according to this site ->http://www.redcrossblood.org/learn-about-blood/blood-types is the most common, i don't know if you meant it was rare for anthro ponies or humans (which it is not) but that was just... way too convenient.
and unless princess blood has some super fast magic healing capabilities, he would not wake up that fast (considering the amount of anesthetic/super pain killing magicy juice they undoubtedly had to pump into him) and he acted like nothing had happened when he woke up.
now you could just ignore my rant and just say ''i don't give a fuck, it's MAGIC'' but that hardly makes for a good story.
now i'm done, i mean... i like this story but this chapter kinda pissed me off.
2305549 Agreed.
It also feels rushed still.
That being said it's still not a bad fic. Work needed, yes, but not bad.
So friends with benefits? Not really crazy about that but w/e still a decent chapter, kinda curious if he's gonna have any freaky alicorn powers later since they kept saying alicorn blood was unstable.
Its that time in the evening for Review Time:
I'm guessing the two humans that beat up Issac are his ex girlfriend and his best friend that stab him in the back(don't remember why he did it)
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The whole zen meditation thing is so cliche, but the part with him arguing his other side(or is it his dark side? I thought it was his logical or humane side)
I'm guessing the blood will either give him super powers or maybe turn him into an anthro pony.(romance problem solved there)
Is Princess Luna putting her hat into the ring?
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Ah, now that right there is the perfect woman.*end of review*
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Funny and interesting chapter, liked the fight with the manticore(of course I knew Issac was gonna get injured as soon as he walked into the Everfree Forest). All women should be like Rainbow Dash, also does Twilight and Fluttershy have any feeling towards Issac?
2305549 I saw that and thought isn't O pos blood universal and A pos the rare one ?
I wonder what one of the "side-effects" might be for our friend Isaac? Perhaps a pony alteration into a stallion with human endurance? Pegasi perhaps due to the pain in his side(if close to his mid-back)? Only time will tell I guess.
I smell pony human blood hybrid taking effect soon, that would be legit in this universe.
Best of man with the compliments of pony, chances are you make a true blue brony.
2305774 Well it DOES set up the possibility of it.
Or he could gain a unique ability like heightened regeneration or just become physically more powerful (Faster, Stronger, more Stamina, Ect).
Or, could be nothing.
Man I wonder if he'll get with Fluttershy. Seeing how she got favoritism and is love summed up into a single being I wouldn't doubt it.
Seriously, you might want to consider finding an editor.
Ok two things:
One: you are edging on Gary Stu territory. Be careful what "buffs" you give your character and be sure to "nerf" something else. Like good in bed but cries himself to sleep for an hour.
Two: I know Zecora is hard to write, but you used "fickle" wrong.
is the water fall from Naruto when he has to face Kyuubi.
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Why do I see Isaac getting at least a little magical power from the transfusion?
I can just tell that issac may get magical things added to his list of skills. I love this story, but if he gets magic, I will be a little upset for you follow all the other HiE fanfics.
Super awesome magic powers FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!!
2306248 If thats the case, and Isaac gets the MAGIKS! The you really need to nerf him, like if he uses magic to much, his blood starts to get hot and will boil if he uses it for long periods of time.
im not gonna lie, i was laughing through 95 percent of this!
Did i just noticed a naruto reference?
waterfall of truth.
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O- (neg) is the universal blood donor (my father is that and he gets tons of calls about donating blood at certain points throughout the year), and the most rare blood type for humans. O+ (pos) is rare, but can only be given to other positive blood types. The most common are A and B.
2307915 Not exactly. The dark side of him didn't come out of the waterfall. I hust thought it would add to the peaceful surroundings.
2307999 can't complain,yet it really reminded me,
Also nice chapter!!
Why I am the only one who is concern about the fact that reciving a tranfucion of another species is a bad thing?
Even if the pony is the same blood type and isn't a princess. You can't just put another being's blood in your system.
That is dangerous.
Nice chapter!
In real life, you would die from receiving the blood of another species via transfusion..nice chapter, I love what has developed but it still may be too "action blood near death"
still very good and...
clap bitches
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I would think the same except that Luna is a magical Alicorn soooooooo I think Isaac would be fine.
2308447 ........ maibe I can take that as a explanation and frush the problem aside, for now.
Dawg
Good job though, a few grammatical and spelling errors like that one right there, but that is to be expected from every writer.
Bravo Zulu
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In theory if you would be able to filter off cells from blood and just provide red blood cells it's actually Ok.
Because of the lack of nuclei and organelles, mature red blood cells do not contain DNA and cannot synthesize any RNA, and consequently cannot divide and have limited repair capabilities. This also ensures that no virus can evolve to target mammalian red blood cells.
Assuming that "magic" takes place during the transfer and filters all other components than absolutely necessary(red blood cells and plasma).
Plasma is mostly water plus dissipated proteins, glucose, mineral ions, hormones, carbon dioxide, and blood cells themselves.
Filter proteins, hormones, white blood cells and platelets and you have solution that's you can transfer to other spices without immune system freaking out..
Most blood substitutes research thus far have concentrated on cell-free hemoglobin solutions ergo the thing I described.
So advanced filters or magic. I hope I helped you.
2309604 mmmmm...... interesting
2309604 I didn't even know what half of that meant. I'm going with the 'magic filters' option.
dude should get powers from the blood and epicness will go over 9000
2308203 dude the blood thing screw it he is in Equstria home of Discord and Pinkie pie so to hell with most logic books