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Lucky Seven


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Roseluck hates Hearts & Hooves Day. She's always been a single mare, and spending the entire day selling flowers is not her idea of a good time. She was hoping things would be different this time around, and who knows? Maybe things will finally change for the downtrodden mare.

Obviously, the title is a play on words of the Poison song, "Every Rose Has Its Thorn".

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 56 )

DAVENPORT IS BEST PONY!!

Comment posted by Garbo deleted Feb 8th, 2013

2091024 Don't know why that didn't get deleted. I definitely deleted it.

2091032
What I love about this is that if this was one of my stories, Davenport would be so OOC. It's interesting for me to read other people's uses of him that don't portray him as a womanizing, profit-obsessed, functional alcoholic like I do.
I love his character so much.

2091312
Yes indeed.

Evidently Davenport is the opposite of me: he perks up this time of year. Good for him. :yay:

Who the hell is Davenport? Nevermind, anyway a very, very perfect little one-shot, serriously well thought of and written. I'm a fan of Twiluna as well as Lyra/Bon-Bon and I'm glad to read to read this fic, you made my day, thank you very much good sire:twilightsmile:

2091383 All I know is that he works at "Quills and Sofas," so he's a legit character, albeit very unknown. So Andrew wasn't lying when he said this character is pretty much never heard of in fanfiction. :rainbowlaugh:

2091405 Did you enjoy it, oh bestest friend?

2091455 Very much! It was quite cute, and I only wish guys were more decent like Davenport where I live; he doesn't hide that he finds her cute, or tries to act all, uh, "swagger"-ish (ugh, just writing that made me want to smack myself). He does something to make her feel good for the holiday. That's all a girl wants. To feel sort loved on this day, even if they before hated it. I wish there was more to it, obviously, but that just shows how much I enjoyed it.

Truthfully I didn't expect to enjoy it as much as I did! For just one thousand something word I loved it! The only thing was I'm not a fan of twiluna shipping. But that wasn't very relavent to the story so I didn't mind. And when I hear the name Davenport I instantly think LOST but I dont remember why.

Maybe this Hearts and Hooves day will make things for the better in my life?Guess I'll see(If my thread of fate doesn't buck me in the face:applejackunsure:.)Nice one-shot:twilightsmile:

Every Rose Has It's Thorn - Poison

Finally a Davenport fic! FINALLY!

And Roseluck too? You're like the hipster of bronydom :rainbowlaugh: In a good way.

And here, as a thank you for the story. Sexy timez is here:

“Yes... well, anyways. After the festivities came to an end, she said she wanted to thank me personally. So I took her to my house, and she thanked me. A lot,”

Huzzah!
Thank you. I will forever keep the image of Twilight chasing a drunk stallion around town walloping him with a water bottle. :twilightsmile:

2092140 Oh no, not water. A glass bottle :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This one's a simple one, and boy oh boy after reading the heinously bad "To the Beat of Love", I'm glad I actually read a fic where everypony acts like... y'know, PEOPLE.

I'm not really a fan of Twiluna... or LyraXBonBon. So I rolled my eyes at it. (Simply hanging out together doesn't mean they're dating. GRAHHHH WHY CAN'T TWO PEOPLE OF THE SAME GENDER JUST BE FRIENDSSS GRRARRRRRARRRAAARRRHHHHH)

Then again, that's what you get when a show has a mostly female cast with most of the fandom being a buncha 20 somethings with their heads up their asses. I probably shouldn't leave that statement in my post, but shit, someone has to say it. Maybe I'm just tired of shipping in general. Who knows.

But besides that, this quick, simple little fic hits a lot of notes right. First, the pacing is brisk and to the point. Character dialogue is believable, and character interaction is engaging. When Roseluck and Twi converse, the reader can imagine a similar conversation occuring in real life. I kind of wish there was some more inner monologue from Rose's perspective. Like, is there a reason she hates H&H? It's one thing to feel lonely around the holiday, but it's a holiday in which everyone buys all the red roses. She's making some good money here.

But money can never fill a void as empty as me.

...Shut up, Rose, you depress me. And don't even gripe about all those couples making out back there. Or about how hard you tried to get guys to notice you. Or about how you've never had anypony for H&H. Like, ever.

....

....Here, Rose, gimme a hug, I'm sorry. The rest of us are lonely too.

2092261 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

It's rare that people give such in-depth reviews, so seriously, thanks.

Short and cute read, good job.

Short and sweet not bad, I really liked it :pinkiehappy:

Really good story man :pinkiehappy:

I thought that was adorable and a really well written one-shot!

Dang. Now I want to see more. You wouldn't be against that, would you?:scootangel:

2091712 As soon as I saw that a guy named 'Relevant Heavy Metal' commented, I knew this was coming :rainbowlaugh:

2092654 Well, Roseluck has quickly become my favorite BG pony, so who knows?

2092396>>2092503>>2092577>>2092627 And a collective 'THANK YOU!' to the four of you!

I'm glad you enjoyed it, but since I've gotten a few people wanting more, I have a question for you guys. Sequel or not?

2093226 Sequel definitely.

Very cute story man. And I love the originality of the ship (not to mention Roseluck gets almost no love as it is, so it's nice to see her get a story).

Definitely a thumbs up. :twilightsmile:

2093226 I'd support and read a sequel to this

2093226 I wouldn't mind a sequel, that we actually be quite awesome :rainbowdetermined2:

Dat title...

Poison: Every Rose Has Its Thorn?

2095339 Yeah, but whereas that means for every good thing, there's something bad about it, mine means the opposite.

2095344

I kind of figured that. :twilightsheepish:

When I saw the title, I just thought of "Poison" because of the relation to the song and this fic.

I liked your fic, it was well done.

2095429 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

I liked this. :D
(If only things happened to me like that...)

2095527 I'm glad you enjoyed it, Roseluck!

You're my new favorite background pony. As soon as I saw you commented, I had to reply! :pinkiehappy::heart:

Very nice
i don't know what i was expecting becouse i thought it could have gone on longer, you know with the date and all but i really liked it
Every thorn has its rose is a great saying and this story fits it perfectly
roseluck was down on her luck and when she last expected it someone comes and shows her some love very sweet :twilightsmile:

2095754 That's sweet! I'll have to read more of your stories.

great story but why did it have to be a one off.

happy hearts and hooves day everyone

D'aww! Maybe someday they'll have a shop called Quills, Sofas, and Flowers. :pinkiehappy:

Too bad I'm deaf, can't hear what he's saying but I can READ haha.

2310323 Well, not to be rude, but it says MISS Dark Angel.

Sure you know how to read? :trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

No, just kidding, I love you. :heart:

A firmly okay story.

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