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The_Dash
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Looks to be very good. I will have to read it in a minute.
Looks good. Going on read later list. I got one piece of advice for you real quick though, be careful when you're writing in first person for a character you didn't create. You have to get their personality right...
Wow!
This has potential. Can't wait to read more. Tracking! 
Wow....that is all i can say. Great chapter just...great! Except now that 3 of the mane 6 are dead im sad
Woa
... Pony Punisher
.
Badass Dash is best Dash.
Tracking.
I'm intrigued, do continue.
1511332 Thanks, I appreciate the advice. I know all to well the problems of writing a 1st person perspective, when using a well established character, my hope is to stay as true to Rainbow as possibly...but at the same time reflect the changes to her character due to the events, and setting of my story. Once again though, I appreciate the comment, and hope I can write a story you guys will enjoy.
1511324 as always thanks for your support & comments.
1511351 thanks, I'm hoping I can live up to the potential lol
1511366 Believe me...it pained me to write that, but it was needed. I mean if they'd all lived...then Rainbow wouldn't be willing to go to such a dark place.
1511395 huh...I didn't even make that connection...well played sir.
Oh, I've been waiting for someone to make a story like this. Thank you very much my good sir.
1511697 don't thank me, thank the randomness of my mind.
1511594
Why thank you. The Punisher is one of my favorite marvel heroes. Plus the whole second half screamed Frank Castle.
1512659 I definitely saw what you mean. I went back and read over chapter 1 after I saw your comment.
>Kill off Rarity in first chapter: Instant Thumb Up
>Kill off Pinkie in first chapter: Instant Watch
>Kill off
that ho bagFluttershy in first chapter: Instant FavBefore anypony says it, yes I know that the indention are missing from most of the paragraphs...I apologize. I've tried to edit, but my laptop is acting screwy...on a side note...enjoy the new chapter.
Something wicked this way comes. Its name is dash and it comes for vengeance.
Good chapter.
This has some great potential. Can't wait to read more.
This here, this is exactly why you do not mess with Rainbow Dash.
1519100 Thanks dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
1519467 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
Dang rainbow you need to take anger management classes
Do not fuck with Rainbow Dash.
Fuck yeah, Rainbow.
Fuck yeah.
Chrysalis is screwed.
I'm not sure why I'm liking this story so much. I normally don't go for stories that make ponies do things like Dash is doing, but I think it's because the first chapter made me hate Chrysalis so much that I'm glad to see Dash take vengeance.
Anyways, my insanity aside, this is a fantastic story so far. I hope that everything else isn't as easy as taking back Ponyville was, but then again, nothing is dumber than a Diamond Dog, so I don't think I've gotta worry about that. Can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store!
1519536 I'll tell her you suggested that.
1519898 I would never have suggested doing so before, and I wouldn't definitely not advise it now.
1520224 lol just wait, it gets better :D
1521063 yeah, and anypony else that gets in her way.
1521427 Super sonic Pegasus, vs. Diamond Dogs...yeah not much of a matchup. Don't worry though my brony, things have a way of going from bad...to much, much worse.
1521499 Wait don't tell her! She will come and kill me....with that rusty sword.
1522973 Nah, she'll probably use the rusted spork she found the other day...but don't worry, I won't tell her.
Replace drink with Story.
1524832 nicely done sir i194.photobucket.com/albums/z116/bluemonk9/My%20Little%20Pony/4151666_d8b65659f1c7ec8b9e66a111e448a455.jpg
And I'm working on chapter 3 at this very moment.
Kill Chrysalis
1525635 epic dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
This chapter was beyond fantastic. Again, still not sure why I like this so much.The detail you put into the scenes make me visibly cringe, but that only means you're doing it right.
I really wish Braeburn didn't have to die. He's my least favorite pony in the whole show, but you made me really feel for him, so I applaud you for that. Can't wait to see how crazy Dash goes on her next adventure!
Oh, and that bastard Blueblood got what he had coming.
1531295 I appreciate the comment.
I actually tried to step things up this chapter, especially after I red your comment on Chapter 2,
about taking back Ponyville being almost easy.
So I'm glad to know you enjoyed it...and that I made you cringe. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy_invert.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
Grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, but who the hell cares?
Heheheh. It's simply not possible to not feel cold satisfaction at Bluebloods torture and death. Particularly beautiful when he bit off his own tongue.
1531904 yeah, it would probably be wise to invest in a proof reader...probably. All the same, glad you enjoyed Bluebloods demise.
1531904
Sweet, sweet irony...
Amazing so far.
So amazing I wrote you a song!
We drink to our youth, for days come and gone
For the Age of Aggression is just about done
We'll drive out the Changelings and restore what we own
With our blood and our steel we will take back our home
Down with Chrysalis, the killer of Princesses
On the day of your death we will drink and we'll sing
We're the children of Equestria, and we fight all our lives
And when Sovngarde beckons everyone of us dies
But this land is ours and we'll see it whiped clean
Of the scourge that has sullied our hopes and our dreams
Down with Chrysalis, the killer of Princesses
On the day of your death we will drink and we'll sing
We're the children of Equestria, and we fight all our lives
And when Sovngarde beckons everyone of us dies
We drink to our youth, for days come and gone
For the Age of Aggression is just about done
1533131 Perhaps next chapter Rainbow should use Fus Ro Dah? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
1536762 Maybeeeeeh.... Or a dragon helps her kill some big enemy >=3!
1522973
Trust me, that sword is anything but rusty.
1536762
Only Fluttershy can use Fus Ro Dah.
1540782 okay....
As Ryback would say. FEED ME MOAR! I say FEED MEH MOAR LOYALTYS VENGANCE!
1545778 Peace be with you my friend. Chapter 4 is currently being written, and I promise a twist no one saw coming.
1545802 Oooo.... A plot twist. Why can't i like this story 500 times
Man, I love a good dark fic with best pony. The only thing holding you back is grammar, and Dash's voice being a touch off.
1549787 hmmm...
So what do you think needs to be done? In terms of RD's voice?
im putting this on my read later just because of the cover art... i hope im not disapointed
really good, really sad.
Keep it up
ok this is epic it's the first dark story that i actualy will read from the start to finish
Here are some stashes
By the way you just got a new stalker
Okay so just real quick.
I wasn't planning on releasing this chapter in two parts, but I know a lot of you have been waiting for this, so I hope you'll forgive my splitting the chapter.
Also I sent this off to my proofers/editors, but still haven't received their revised editions, I will update as I get those back.
I hope you all enjoy the first part of chapter 4, and that it leaves you all wanting to read part 2.
~Time to dash, Dash out~
Epic Trixie time, buck yeah!