Before anypony says it, yes I know that the indention are missing from most of the paragraphs...I apologize. I've tried to edit, but my laptop is acting screwy...on a side note...enjoy the new chapter.

Something wicked this way comes. Its name is dash and it comes for vengeance.
Good chapter.

This has some great potential. Can't wait to read more.

“Who in the hell are you!?” One of them shouted, as he moved to stand, from a small crate he sat on. “Your executioner.”

This here, this is exactly why you do not mess with Rainbow Dash.

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1519467 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png

Dang rainbow you need to take anger management classes

Do not fuck with Rainbow Dash.

Fuck yeah, Rainbow.
Fuck yeah.

Chrysalis is screwed.

I'm not sure why I'm liking this story so much. I normally don't go for stories that make ponies do things like Dash is doing, but I think it's because the first chapter made me hate Chrysalis so much that I'm glad to see Dash take vengeance.

Anyways, my insanity aside, this is a fantastic story so far. I hope that everything else isn't as easy as taking back Ponyville was, but then again, nothing is dumber than a Diamond Dog, so I don't think I've gotta worry about that. Can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store!

1519536 I'll tell her you suggested that.

1519898 I would never have suggested doing so before, and I wouldn't definitely not advise it now.

1520224 lol just wait, it gets better :D

1521063 yeah, and anypony else that gets in her way.

1521427 Super sonic Pegasus, vs. Diamond Dogs...yeah not much of a matchup. Don't worry though my brony, things have a way of going from bad...to much, much worse.

1521499 Wait don't tell her! She will come and kill me....with that rusty sword.

1522973 Nah, she'll probably use the rusted spork she found the other day...but don't worry, I won't tell her.

1524832 nicely done sir i194.photobucket.com/albums/z116/bluemonk9/My%20Little%20Pony/4151666_d8b65659f1c7ec8b9e66a111e448a455.jpg
And I'm working on chapter 3 at this very moment.

Kill Chrysalis

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1522973
Trust me, that sword is anything but rusty.

I'm finally getting round to reading this... Two words.
Me.
Ghusta. (I know it doesn't have an h)

“Who am I!? Who am I!? I shouted, through the hilt I still held onto, my temper flaring as I charged forward. I ran him through, pinning him to the tree, and gazed into his eyes. “I am the only family that little Pegasus had.” I said in a calm voice, unnerving even myself, as I watched blood pool at his feet.

I think your missing a " there, unless Rainbow dash was experimenting with narrating her own thoughts and actions.

1761280 52 weeks ago and he still haven't fixed that error.
I think this author's bitten the dust.

Perhaps I should point out that the plural of 'pony' is 'ponies'.

Besides that, I'm only on chapter two and I'm really loving this. Blood, mutilated bodies and steaming entrails... brings a smile to my face.

3899368 Yeah... I was lacking some serious focus when I wrote this chapter.

GIVE IN TO YOUR HATRED, RAINBOW DASH! IT IS THE ONLY WAY!
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Bloody Diamond-Dogs