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Looks to be very good. I will have to read it in a minute.
Looks good. Going on read later list. I got one piece of advice for you real quick though, be careful when you're writing in first person for a character you didn't create. You have to get their personality right...
Wow! This has potential. Can't wait to read more. Tracking!
Wow....that is all i can say. Great chapter just...great! Except now that 3 of the mane 6 are dead im sad
Woa ... Pony Punisher.
Badass Dash is best Dash.
Tracking.
I'm intrigued, do continue.
1511332 Thanks, I appreciate the advice. I know all to well the problems of writing a 1st person perspective, when using a well established character, my hope is to stay as true to Rainbow as possibly...but at the same time reflect the changes to her character due to the events, and setting of my story. Once again though, I appreciate the comment, and hope I can write a story you guys will enjoy.
1511324 as always thanks for your support & comments.
1511351 thanks, I'm hoping I can live up to the potential lol
1511366 Believe me...it pained me to write that, but it was needed. I mean if they'd all lived...then Rainbow wouldn't be willing to go to such a dark place.
1511395 huh...I didn't even make that connection...well played sir.
Oh, I've been waiting for someone to make a story like this. Thank you very much my good sir.
1511697 don't thank me, thank the randomness of my mind.
1511594
Why thank you. The Punisher is one of my favorite marvel heroes. Plus the whole second half screamed Frank Castle.
1512659 I definitely saw what you mean. I went back and read over chapter 1 after I saw your comment.
>Kill off Rarity in first chapter: Instant Thumb Up
>Kill off Pinkie in first chapter: Instant Watch
>Kill off
that ho bagFluttershy in first chapter: Instant FavReplace drink with Story.
Damn. I like what I am reading. This is going to be good. Keep it up :)
Damn. Just damn.
yep sounds like metal gear revengence to me just minus the whole cyborg body parts and nanomachines n the synthetic blood with enhanced sences...lol
Rainbow Dash has joined "The Brotherhood of Blood"
Wait where's Spike is he died too? D:
Bloody Changelings
Wait a minute. Where'd Spike go? Did he die, too?