(Sequel: 09/05/2017 I took it down for the final time a few months ago. I didn't like where it was going and wanted to give it a final rewrite. It will take sometime but please bear with me. )
All he wants to do is go fast, but he's not fast enough. He wants to go far, but it's just out of reach. He wants to live large...well, he's got a poor diet. So, at least he's gradually making progress there.
Nimbus is an orphan born colt who quickly learns the struggles of friendship when he is acquainted with Rainbow Dash. Their adventures, crazy antics, and skylarks make their bound more precious than what others may see.
(Part 1 of 2 )
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Chapters (9)
Floccinaucinihilipilification
Hmm...
Challenge accepted!
*flips through books
Aha!
Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis:
Noun; a medical condition caused by inhalation of ash from a volcano, causing buildup of silicone in the lungs, eventually leading to pneumonia.
Boom.
I was reading this chapter when all of a sudden...
BLAM. Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis.
Seems vaguely familiar...
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Haha yeah. I wonder where I got the idea for that word.
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Alas, Tis a true mystery...
Dude...dude...you need to run a spell check before you submit these chapters xD
I kinda skimmed it for now and I'm fairly certain I saw a ecoming instead of becoming :P
And know what to capitalize and what not to :P Family Anniversary doesn't need to be capitalized :P (what is a family anniversary anyways? xD how do you even celebrate a single event that a family decides to celebrate every year? xD do you mean reunion?)
Meanwhile, Daisy cloud does :P coz it's a name :P
Anyways...I liked it :) duh. I always like your ideas :P
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well, thank you, Twilight Sparkle. I was going to send it to you for grammar errors, but I was too tired and lazt, pretty sure you were asleep at the time, and I REALLY didn't feel like taking an extra hour to work on errors once you were done. So,yeah...this is probably your face right now >>>
4331177 lol I ain't mad :P
And you don't need me to run a spell check :P
Specially with that twilight stuck on your head.
As if she didn't check your spells.
Twilight, I am disappoint.
Decided to comment after I saw your thanks on my user page ^^
This story is awesome and really REALLY deserves so much more likes than it has! You pulled off a likable OC and are able to write great character interactions. And I LOVE the chapter lengths, you put great detail into your writing! My only critique would be some grammar mistakes here and there, but they're nothing major or distracting. Keep it up!
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Your comment was totally what I needed right now. I was debating on whether on not to carry on with the story because of the lack of attention it was getting. I know my grammar and spelling errors kind of frequent, but I told my self to get more absorbed in the story and shrug off the grammar. I plan on making the corrections between now and this weekend. For real though, thank you.
Oh celestia this chapter had so many hilarious parts that I couldn't stop laughing xD
I like Sky Forge, she sounds nice
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Thanks! This chapter was a whole lot of fun to work on. Longer than the rest so far, but I like it.
you should post your fic here: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/378/folder/777/1/post-your-fics-here
maybe it'll get some more attention