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Love music, skiing, art, acting, alcohol, philosophy and clearly MLP

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Snowstorm is new in Ponyville, has just met the mare of his dreams, and landed a great job. But how will he react when the object of his affection is not only his partner, but his manager? Lessons of life, love, loss, and laughs, as well as everything in between.

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Hey guys! Sorry to end this at a bit of a cliff hanger, but more will come soon, I promise! Let me know what you think of Snowstorm, Warmhearth, and any other character's whom I create. Happy Holidays everypony!

Two words and one symbol, track+email
Keep it up.

I'm very much enjoying it so far! There are a few spelling and grammar hitches, but the story itself is interesting and you tell it very well.

I like the story so far, however you seem to alternate between referring Ms. Softhearth to Ms. Warmhearth.

I hate cliffhangers, but I love them at the same time, because it takes a good writer to make a good cliffhanger.

Oh damnnnn

Shit's about to get serious

again I say.


AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTT:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

"She seemed friendly enough, but she was like a good sweet treat in a -scence-." should be -sense- (the paragraph where he meets Pinkie)

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
i oh so almost misunderstood the ending......
:3
i can tell this is going to be one heck of a BEEEEEEEAAAAAUUUUUUUUUTIFUL
"ahem"
relati.....FRIENDSHIP :D

“Yeah, yeah…alright. So -you’re Snowstorm name- huh? I was wondering how long it would take you to introduce yourself, but I guess Twilight took care of that.” Rainbow gave a smirk.
I assume you meant either -your name's Snowstorm- or just -you're Snowstorm-

Great story so far, BTW.

42946
They all seem to be interesting characters and it's a good story so far. Only 2 errors I've found, but I posted those in the relevant chapters (none in this one obvious enough for me to notice)

"A few second prior" should be "A few seconds prior (first sentence)
Also, confound all these unfinished stories ending on cliffhangers I keep finding and getting engrossed in. I hope there's not an upper limit on my watchlist :ajbemused:

44277
Thank you for catching all those little errors! They have been promptly located, corrected, and been told to straighten up. I'm glad you're liking the story, it's just a shame I don't have an editor.:applejackunsure:

......cliffhangaaaaaaaaaaas
i hate you so much
but then again....
ITS ONE HECK OF AN AWESOME STORY

Whenever I read this, I always play this song

But i just had to turn it off during this chapter, dident feel right...

But anyway, loved it as always :pinkiehappy:

OMG. Pls continue the story, it's getting more interesting by the second…

45077
I could have even an editor for your story, but I haven't really put up "I can be an editor for anypony's story!" on my bio, lol.

If you WANT an editor, I'm pretty good at catching/fixing typographical errors, and have absolute boatloads of free time. PM me if you're interested.
Great story by the way:pinkiehappy:

2 things,
1.confound these pony's, they cause me to take a break from writing my song lyrics.
2. The text is screwed up a bit around the middle, such as this

(Rainbow took the note in trebling hooves and began to read, tears staining the parchment beneath her eyes.

Ms. Warmhearth,

I can’t thank you enough for your hospitality and kind advice. Unfortunately, circumstances have led me to feel the need to lWinter’s Howl

Chapter 7: Unable to Bear the Cold


Snowstorm’s brain desperately tried to decipher what his eyes had just witnessed. His mind buzzed with a million quandaries, why would Rainbow kiss her? Did she even like me? Or was she just stringing me along? Was that all )

Plus it jumped around a bit there two...

45962 Well never mind that, i refreshed and see that you fixed it.

45964
Yes, I published the story and saw it had 3,000 words-ish, so I knew I goofed up somehow, and tried to corrrect it asap

umm i think the story glitched and posted the story again cutting off the end note but then at the bottem the actual note is there still good story man

45967 Yeah, that confused me a bit, i was all like :rainbowhuh: then i was all like :rainbowkiss: then after i saw it was big cause of that weird publish glitch i was all :pinkiecrazy: then i saw it cut off one of the ending sentences and was like :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage: then i saw you fixed it and i was all :moustache: wait.....what? How did spike get here.........

D: Poor Rainbow and Snowstorm. And DARN YOUR CLIFFHANGERS! XD Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up! :D

wow im really hoping theirs MORE:flutterrage: to this story:fluttercry:

shit's getting REAL


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Awesome story, characters are true and well written, perfect dose of interesting and heartwarmy corniness, keep it up! :rainbowlaugh:

ugh! must have new chapter soon!!!

confound these writers, they drive me to read
and i cant wait for the next one, its awesome and i hope you make another one soon

Darn. Another cliffhanger. WHY?! Don't stop the story, I wanna know what will happen!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
MUST READ NEXT CHAPTER TO FND OUT!!!

WHOOOO!!!!! AWESOME!!!
Love it! Keep this work up!

Awwh, that was adorable :fluttercry: I really like what you did there, and I can't wait to see what happens next in your story! :D

I really am liking this, unlike most romance fics that rush into kissing so fast, this one took it's time, has a good story line, and is overall well written. 5/5 fluttershy's and stars for you :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: * * * * *

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww
keep writring, please, dont stop....
TAKE MY INTERNETZ IF YOU MUST!!!!!!!!!!

Hey guys! Thanks for all your support and comments throughout the saga! I may not he posting a new chapter tomorrow (as per usual) and will instead be going back through and re-writing/editing the older chapters in a large update. While it may appear to be ending, I'm considering continuing on and making a much larger plot, having these chapters be only the beginning of RD and Snowstorm's relationship. However, I don't want it to become overdone or for it to continue just for continuing's sake. Let me know what you guys think and P. S. If anyone has some fan art they think would work better as a cover please let me know!

Nice! i needz more! Damn these romance fics are fucking getting to me!

Love it! It would be awesome if it continued but I think you're well founded in being cautious that it doesnt go stale, but I think you can do it!

MASSIVE ASS UPDATE:
So I went back through almost every chapter today and changed a few things, a touch up here, some more detail there, etc. While none of it necessitates a re-read of the whole story, if you feel the need to re-read go ahead! New chapter should be up some time tomorrow!

D-d-d-d-d-d-d'aaaaaaaaawww. No seriously, cute as it can be.:rainbowkiss:

Awww Shit. Another Dash Ship Fic with a jealous AJ

SYMBOLISM!!!
This was really funny, clever and fucking adorable.

Peace Out.

Now, THIS is defiantly the best chapter yet. Eco friendly shower excuse? perfect.
Time to read this chapter over 5 more times. Let's see how much i can get used to all the d'aaawwwww.
"Read this 100 times and try not to d'awwwwww"

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