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# WritingSpirit

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This story is a sequel to Black Canvas

The time for a jolly good Hearth's Warming has come yet again, and what better way for Rainbow and Taciturn to celebrate their favorite holiday by going out and have fun?
Of course, Rainbow Dash had her sights set on something more. She had been through every challenge that she been tossed into and now, she thinks she's ready to move on; to continue her life with Taciturn by her side every night. She's ready to be his loving, happy wife.

Surely nothing could go wrong this time.

This story is the third in a series. It is recommended you guys read And He Silently Painted A Rainbow and the second-parter, Black Canvas if you do not want to get lost.

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Art by TheLittleBear

Chapters (12)
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Hard to believe it been a year since the first story came out huh?

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Yeah. Can't believe it myself.

Yes!!! More! I've been waiting for this!

Woohoo!!!!!

oh dear 0_o
why do I not envision this going well

Yessss...Finally another one! I jsut finished re-reading the other 2!

I can't even believe it's been a whole year since And He Silently Painted A Rainbow came out....
Yessss...I can't wait till they end up getting married!
They'd better....OR ELSE

It seems that the 3 people who disliked this have no hearts.

I WANT MOAR...um..you know...if that's ok with you...

Huh.......
When it boils down to it, I'm surprised Rainbow is going to the trouble to please her mother...

The first one was interesting, but it's gotten old by now. Sorry.

New chapter yay!

I'M GONNA KILL YOU FIREFLY

Yessss...On to the next chappy!

That chapter was full of d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww..
A slight error here though:

"What's gonna into you all of a sudden?"

Should be Gotten, not Gonna.

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Fixed it!
Thanks a bunch

Yay! Update!
I need moarrrrrrr

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

And just cause I can: First comment!

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still find it surprising rainbow needs her mother's approval as much as she does. I understand it's important, but perhaps you could give a reason as to WHY? (I just see rainbow as coming off as doing something regardless if she has approval. Maybe indicating as to why she looks up to her mother so much?)

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Planned to hammer down that nail in Chapter 9 actually

Update!
So...Tassee already secretly knows that she wants to marry him by the looks of it. But it seems kinda strange for Dash to want her mom's approval so much. I always thought she would just go ahead and do it even without permission...

Can't wait for chapter's 8 through finish this story is fricken amazing!!!!

That taste was distinctive; it was the mushroom soup she loved since she was a filly.

Hmm...from this information, i can deduce that the pony could either be Firefly or her Father

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so her mother ISN"T a complete - (fill in cold-hearted adjective here)
.....hmmm.

i dont think it was RD's father it said "mare" not "colt" so hopefully it is her mother or maybe a mare who knows tassee very well to know were he is. i just hope that chapter 9 comes out very soon. celestia speed tassee.

Well.

So...Firefly apparently has a heart in there somewhere...
..interesting...

I hate winter, i always get friggin sick! Seriously, every winter! its like the friggin flu virus decides one day 'hey im just gonna fuck up his winter fun, that outta be fun!'
...ummm...also amazing chapter. I KNEW IT WAS FIREFLY

nice call Rainbow87dash, nice call

Happy new years!!!

Yessss..I KNEW it was Firefly!

Well...damn this is depressing

Oh for the love of Celestia, please finish the story by Sunday after Sunday i wont be able to get on the internet for almost 2 months.

The first thing I thought about when I saw the chapter name was Dr Who...

Oh...I didn't like this chapter...I LOVED it!

Wow....

Holy CELESTIA !!! I actually started to cry when I read this towards the end.
But still it's an amazing reunion, and the way you brought tassee back just spectacular!!!

Hope I'm allowed to download this one....so it can go with the other two! ^_^
only two minor 'oops'

"Yyou "

and
" as she knelt down"
^ HE.

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Found them!
Thanks a bunch!

3730737
=)
yay! thank you! I asked a while ago via mail (a LONG time ago) just wanted to make sure with this fic ^_^

3730737

I do hope in the next chapter/finale to the trilogy, we get to hear Tasse have a conversation with Dash.....even if it's short.

Awesomesauce!!!!!!!
Oh. But wait. There's no more? Like, ever?

End? As in..no more?
NNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

This was nice.
Because you are a master of the feels.
And that ending left me with a nice feeling in my heart.

wait, you don't mean "end" as in the end right? RIGHT?

dude comeonn!!!!! Don't leave it at that you said for another story please please please continue it. maybe as the children they might end up having ?

That ending.
I'm happy now.
That was very, very nicely written out.

This triology has been interesting, with an unique character being shipped together with Dash.
So reading this has been different, because of how limited the interaction with Tassee has been. Though, as others have written above me, you are good at feels, especially 'd'aaaw'-moments, heh. The storyline, in all the fics, have been a good mix of slice-of-life, together with some mystery or adventure.
Just;
Likes and faves for all your three stories.

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It was so incredible awesome. Again!
Seriously, you're a writing-master.... I want moooore *_*

Seems you all thought there was going to be a sequel. huh?

I actually decided for a while now that this story would be the last one in the trilogy ever since And He Silently Painted A Rainbow was finished. I thought it'd be nicer to leave it as it is here, partially because I want to work on other stories, but more importantly because I felt that if I did any more to it, it would ruin the magic.

Basically, the trilogy, along with Taciturn himself, would still have a place in my heart and hopefully, in all of yours too. There'll be a time where I'll revisit them and just re-read them like it's written by somebody else or something. It was fun while it lasted, of course, but as the cliched saying goes: all good things must come to an end.

So again, thanks to everyone of you and to 3733637 and 3735066 as well for not only coming along this journey, but finishing it with me

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Jolly McGee, that was one long comment.

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... You aren't serious, are you ?
It would be so awesome to see a sequel of this... :(

3737225 It has been a pleasure, heh, that comment, as the ending, you have your way with words.

Anyway.
I actually support WritingSpirit's idea on this, even if it's kinda hard to write with full honesty. As it is now, the ending left me feeling content.
I'm happy.
It's like "and they lived happy forever after" now. We don't know what happens next, but, as someone said (don't remember where, sorry), our window into their world has closed. I could continue reading into this universe, but, this is one of those points where it can end with a great closure.

That said. Um. Dash and Tassee has shared a great dynamic, and following them has been fun, so, if you decide writing more, I'll be there following it, be it a short epilogue, or an entire sequel.
Heh.

Hope I don't get downvoted too much now, sorry guys. If you disagree, do downvote though, and your option may win be sheer masses, or something like that.

3737225 ok then...

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