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WritingSpirit


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This story is a sequel to And He Silently Painted A Rainbow


Hearts & Hooves Day is arriving soon, and Rainbow Dash had prepared many plans to spend time with her new and special coltfriend, Taciturn Bleach. However, a small note soon found its way onto her doorstep, and it wasn't long before she had to be whisked away to attend, much to her disbelief, a funeral: the passing of Taciturn's father.

Sure enough, Rainbow soon found herself at the grand estate of Taciturn's family, despite the colt's slight whimpers. However, behind the luxury of such a wondrous home, the mare quickly realized that there was more to his life than just paintings and his carefree attitude, and beneath the solace of his home slept the skeleton in the cupboard that Taciturn had never wanted her to find.

Every pony has its secrets, but sometimes the silent ones keep the darkest secrets...


Cover art made by me. Yay!
Sequel to And He Silently Painted A Rainbow. You might have to read that first, or you probably won't understand anything from this story.

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 95 )

:pinkiehappy: OMG YOU HAVE NO iDEA HOW HAPPY I AM :pinkiehappy:
:rainbowkiss: I loved you first story so much i was super sad it came to an end :rainbowkiss:
:twilightsmile: AND NOW YOUR DOING ANOTHER :twilightsmile:

Woohoo!!!

I can only hope it has a happy ending....because it IS labeled dark...... :raritydespair:

Bah. I trust you will have so many twists and turns I'll be crazy by the end. :pinkiecrazy:
Great new chapter!

My goodness sir, you are one of the best writers I have ever seen,

It's awesome man, keep it going!

I dare you to make me cry again, you did it once and I believe you can do it again. I'll save this for later and I'll read when the next update comes. :eeyup:

"hope you take this words to heart."

these* words perhaps?

Another great chapter!

:pinkiehappy: AN AMAZING CHAPTER :pinkiehappy:
:twilightsmile: you can really see how there relationship has blossomed :twilightsmile:
:derpytongue2: i can not wait till the next chapter :derpytongue2:

with another adventure pony named Trail Blazer

That is strange I just read a story, before this one, where one of the main characters was called trail blazer :rainbowkiss:

The story was called Harmony Theory. It is EPIC, well written and pretty funny in some parts

They are one of the most adorable couples I have ever seen in fanfics,

For a second there I thought it said Blank Canvas my changeling OC.

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Lol :rainbowlaugh:
Coincidence. Just pure coincidence. :twilightsheepish:

Interesting creepy-room......


but then....good heavens. The adorable-ness. Well done!

Kinda frightening me with creepyness of the house, was his father like, a messed up mad scientist? Oh well, I guess we will just have to find out!

Keep it up man! Fantastic work!

Comment posted by Rainbow Song deleted Feb 14th, 2013

Why is there so. Much. Daaaaaaaaawwwwwwww :fluttercry:

Well done, WritingSpirit! This chapter has certainly made this pony's Hearts and Hooves Day! :yay:
This story just keeps getting better and better! :twilightsmile:

I swear to jebus, you just know how to get me AND my girl friend to go HNNNNNNGGGG! We both read this together and loved it!

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Glad to hear you loved it, and that she loves it as well :twilightsmile:
Help me say hi!

:pinkiehappy:

Happy Belated :heart:alentine's Day!!

The plot thickens....

with another dose of adorableness! :pinkiehappy:

Why is there so much adorablness???? :fluttercry:

Oh and Sexy Vampire Fish (try get the reference)

You should try to get a picture of rainbow and taciturn cuddling that's a sight I wanna see,

Exciting chapter! This only keeps getting better and better! :twilightsmile:

Who could the mystery grave possibly belong to? Dove Featherheart? The suspense is killing me! :pinkiegasp:
Guess I'll have to wait a bit to find out. :derpytongue2:

HOLY SDFGHJKLDSOF!!!!!
:pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

Good heavens. You certainly succeeded in making this one of the darkest things I've read in a while 0_o
Hopefully this doesn't do a whole bitter-sweet ending....like with Taciturn in a straight jacket....

It's always the quiet ones, I think I have a clue at what is happening to taciturn

I knew it!

That aside, I feel so bad for Dash. Basically getting close to being murdered by the one you love ain't exactly the nicest feeling in the world.

YES! A wonderful new chapter! I love it! :rainbowwild:

It was definitely worth the wait! :twilightsmile:

Well, that turned out better than expected! Well done! :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiehappy: it seems i have been waiting a long long time for this chapter I :heart: it :pinkiehappy:
:twilightsmile: on my birthday too :twilightsmile:
:heart: Tasse and Dashie forever :heart:
:fluttercry: only one more chapter :fluttercry:

:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile: BEST.STORY. EVER . :twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::ajsmug:
:applejackunsure: Is there any chance any chance at all you mite do a carry on of this story ? :ajbemused:

Well played. 10/10 My fears of this turning out to be extremely sad are all but obliterated! :pinkiehappy:
Do you have plans of a stand-alone chapter of the proposal? (of whomever does it? Tassee or Rainbow?)

A fantastic ending to a fantastic story! I love it! And I would love to see another sequel if you feel inclined to write one! :rainbowkiss:

Now I have to ask, have you ever considered sending this and "And He Silently Painted a Rainbow" to EQD? With the originality and overall excellent quality of the writing, I think it would be very successful on there! :twilightsmile:

What an awesome, fascinating, exciting, heartwarming, and endearing series. Well done! :moustache:

And you pull off yet another brilliant masterpiece that warms my heart like a hearths warming fire, you truly are (in my eyes) a master of this craft as taciturn is of his,:twilightsmile::ajsmug::fluttershyouch::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::rainbowlaugh:

Late Replying Session :facehoof:

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After days of wondering, I finally tried to submit And He Silently Painted A Rainbow :twilightsheepish:

Thank you for your submission. However, due to issues with pronoun-object agreement, comma use, and dialogue punctuation, it cannot be forwarded to the pre-readers. This does not count as a strike.

My brain froze at 'pronoun-object agreement'. :rainbowderp:
So basically it's almost there. Just have to figure out what's wrong and sweep it all up! Would appreciate if you guys help me :twilightsmile:

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Not entirely sure. I wouldn't dare type out another chapter unless I have a proper plotline I can work with in my head. Simply put, I need a storyline that would, in the end, lead up to the proposal. It wouldn't be dark as Black Canvas, that's for sure!
There will be a chance that I might do the proposal. Tbh, I've already thought of how it would go, and let's just say it's a little cute :raritywink:

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