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ChaoticHarmony


Hey guys! I write sadfics and sadfic accessories! Oh, and I also do comedy things. Yeah. Feel free to check out my stuff! And I hope you enjoy whichever story of mine you happen to be on! ^^

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Rainbow Dash has finally achieved her dream of joining with the Wonderbolts. But will this turn out to be a dream come true, or a curse? Follow her as she journeys across Cloudsdale and Ponyville in a story of riches, dreams, depression, but above all, love.

Special thanks to masonalcat for the editing help!

Chapters (20)
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Comments ( 158 )

I'm intrigued. Will the ship be DashFire or SoarinDash?

You will just have to wait to see won't you? :pinkiecrazy: I will just see where this story takes me.

Tell us more about your OCs. I don't know anything about them, and thus I don't really have any empathy as to what might happen to them. Also; it isn't a good idea to suddenly change tenses in the same chapter, let alone the same story. It ruins the flow and rhythm that you're trying to cultivate.

Backround is coming. Brace yourselves :raritywink:

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Then I'll wait with reading this until somepony can tell me, 'cuz if it's SoarinDash, I'm staying the hell away.

What kind of mess has Dash gotten herself into this time? :rainbowderp:

A big one, I can assure you. Though you'll have to wait until thursday for the next chapter.



More than likely anyway

Yay! Another good story to follow! :twilightsmile:

I really like your writing style, but you should try to get rid of the sudden time changes and repeatings as they're just confusing...

Despite that: Let's get ready for some serious shipping! :rainbowlaugh:

Yes, let the shipping COMMENCE! :rainbowkiss:

I'm scared to read this story. 3 paragraphs in and Dash already broke her wing? :rainbowderp:

It wont be THAT bad. I promise!

Please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash!

Please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash!

600671 I'm with you! Please be SoarinDash! :rainbowkiss:

Super excited for the next chapter! :moustache:

It will be released tomorrow! Hopefully..... I have 2 major projects due Friday. So yeah, no idea if I'll have the time to do it after all. I hope I will though, I'd hate to leave FiMFiction hangin :rainbowdetermined2:

Err..... that doesn't tell me much. 607346

Hmm... this story is turning out to be pretty good. Do you need an editor right now? I'd gladly do this for you, if you want.

607444 Not really, I have one. He is just busy with my OTHER story that I'm writing. It's on my page too, if ya wanna check it out <Shameless Advertising> :rainbowlaugh:

I like how tihs is turning out, let's hope Rainbow Dash's wing can be fixed. :twilightsmile:

607645 I should HOPE that it's turning out well.... I spent a good 2 hours writing this chapter! I already have ideas for my third chapter. It's gonna be good! :rainbowkiss:

607380 I'm not sure I like the direction where this fic is headed.

Poor Cuts, having his heart broken and such. :fluttercry:
But then that may leave open other possibilities.
Orrrrrr... she may return the love? :pinkiegasp:
I shall force myslef to wait and see. :raritydespair:

613895 Allright allright! I'm releasing another chapter tomorrow!

For everyone trippin bout dash, she's kind of Nitro she'll be fine

love the third chapter, can't wait for the next one!

I love it too! Favorited, liked, and...commented XD

AND I READ ALL OF YOUR OTHER STORIES SO YOU NEED TO UPDATE XD And I loved those too!

Keep up the good work! :raritywink:

614683 Well, I updated them ALL yesterday.... :ajsleepy: I'll try to get some more updates out this weekend. This story gets the first update today though.

Good news to all those who are waiting eagerly! Chapter 4 is on it's way right now as we speak! :rainbowdetermined2:

Nice to seem some added depths to Soarin. :rainbowdetermined2:
One question though is Soarin in love with Spitfire, Rainbow Dash, or neither one? :applejackconfused:

616747 Well, just wait and see! Mwhahahahaha! I LOVE writing this thing so much!

Um this chapter seemed to be rushed, but this is still great. :applejackconfused:

Waaaahoooooooooooo!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss:

So there is a hint of Spitfire+Soarin. :heart:

Also I fear that Rainbow's position on the team could be in danger from her friend. :unsuresweetie:

Good story so far. WANT MOAR!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Really everypony? No comments at how I'm throwing in another love interest? Hm......I sometimes wonder about you all :trixieshiftright:

Hey! You're throwing in another love interest!

I've forgotten what Cloud Chaser looks like. She's an actual background pony, right?

Anyway. Jolly good show. :moustache:

Uh oh, why do I get the feeling that something will happen to Rainbow Dash's suit? :pinkiecrazy:

lol
shits goin down
oh wait...it already went down
ITS GOING DOWN AGAIN

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