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As the sun gives way to the night, a pegasus knocks on a window. She has a secret. One that, if revealed, would shame her forever. Yet she can't stay away.

Featured on Equestria Daily 1/29/2013

First Published
7th Oct 2012
Last Modified
7th Oct 2012
#1 · 233w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

Commence Reading.exe

Comment: Fun. Nice. Cute. Funny.

Rainbow just can't get over being an egghead, but perfectly fine with being with an egghead. :twilightblush:

#2 · 233w, 2d ago · 3 · ·

And RD STILL cares more about being thought of as an egghead then being in a relationship. :facehoof:

#3 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

I love it! Looking forward to more.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

#4 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

lol you've got me hooked! :coolphoto:

#5 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

Oh Rainbow Dash! Your reputation will never recover from that article by Gabby Gums.You may just come out behind the book shelves. :raritywink:

#6 · 233w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

I hate really good one-shots, because I know there's no' MOAR' to shout for :pinkiesad2:

#7 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

This is funny. :pinkiehappy:

More. Must nom on more this Twidash.

#9 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

Well done! I :heart: Twidash

#10 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

Really fun, with some laugh-out-loud moments. More please! :twilightsmile:

#11 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

Sweet.  Like... Pinkie Pie.  That kind of sweet.

Anyways, cute and funny.  Muy bueno, señor Steel.

   En español,

               ~Plyxe

#12 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

Can't really say much. Shipping's not my thing, and outside that, there's really no story to it: too easy and clean and generic.

-Scott

#13 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1391711 Correct, its not designed for drama. It's just meant to be a little feel good one shot. But thanks for commenting.

#14 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1391719 Also, there looks to be a missing line-space before 'Twilight, please open the door?'

Have you considered using proper dashes instead of hyphens? I only really learned about it a couple of months ago, but it already looks weird to me.

#15 · 233w, 2d ago · · ·

This story was like a delicious cookie with all of my favorite ingredients!

But now I ated it. :fluttercry:

#16 · 233w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

GAH! it's not long enough :twilightoops:

I want more! :raritycry:

It was short and sweet and although I think I prefer the somewhat longer stories with a little emotional tension this was great. :twilightsmile:

#18 · 233w, 1d ago · · ·

A fantastic little story, loved it.

#20 · 233w, 1d ago · · ·

Short, sweet, cute, and funny.

You nailed all of the characters' personalities, and the overall plot felt believable.

Good job.

#21 · 233w, 1d ago · · ·

Good story, love it. :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

>>1394553

One question: Why this story don't apear in my favorite list nor my read later list? I only can access from the post that you send to the followers of Green.

#22 · 233w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1395201 because its not officially visible to the site yet. its still waiting for approval.

#23 · 233w, 21h ago · · ·

TwiDash story from Steel Resolve? DONE. No need for the Read Later list, this one goes on top of the pile. Short and adorable, in character, believable, well written - all the hallmarks of the kind of fic I could read all day. Gold star & thumbs up for you!

#24 · 233w, 20h ago · · ·

Cute :rainbowkiss::heart::twilightblush:

#25 · 233w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1391719

Hey! You know, what you should do? You should do a one shot featuring Raridash! :pinkiegasp:

Yes! What a great idea! :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowkiss: < -"That's an awesome idea!"

:raritystarry: < -"The best idea!"

  < -"That is a great idea! I'm glad I thought of it!"

#26 · 233w, 19h ago · · ·

Liked it.  Very cute.

#27 · 233w, 19h ago · · ·

great story but my favorite part was when you used the word cravenly. i love the word craven and you dont see it a lot today. So, thank you

#28 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

Very cute, and very funny. :pinkiesad2: A one-hit-wonder! :derpytongue2:

#29 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

Brought here by DawnFade's recommendation, and it was worth it. I may have to take a look at Green.

#30 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

>>1398925 It's a good read. If you try it out prepare your body for drama, cute, and sexy. In that order. Stretching is recommended.

#31 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

Why do I feel so strongly that I've read this before? Have you posted this someplace else?

#32 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: that ending

#33 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

>>1398988 Nope, just finished it a couple nights ago.

#35 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

Excellent, and almost overwhelmingly cute. But why does this have a comedy tag? It was a bit silly, but I didn't notice anything particularly funny about it.

#36 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

A little sudden, but funny

#37 · 233w, 18h ago · · ·

>>1399023 Well... that was the direction I was going for when I wrote it. My main shipfic Green has some funny moments too, but no comedy tag because that's not the intent. With this I was going for a fluffy little romance about a couple just forming over a mutual love. One of them happens to be closeted... but not about her sexuality.

#38 · 233w, 17h ago · · ·

>>1398948 Hey, didn't remember that you were the So, you've grown wings author, I'm surprised I didn’t have you on watch before now. I will definitely have to give it a read.

#39 · 233w, 17h ago · · ·

lol

So how did you two meet?

:rainbowdetermined2: - I was doing tricks!! Yep! Bonded over my awesome stunt flying and incredible acrobatics AND NOTHING ELSE!!

:twilightblush: - Eh heh, yes that's right, nothing else...

A fun little read.

Especially since what Twi is saying about Dash needing to apply herself to the technical side of flying is absolutely true.

I'm not a TwiDash fan, but this was enjoyable enough for a quickfic.

#40 · 233w, 17h ago · · ·

Bravo :moustache:

#41 · 233w, 17h ago · · ·

Books are now drugs... and Twilight is the drug dealer.  I could have been happy with the story left at just that little concept alone, with Rainbow sneaking out at night to read at Twilight's, but the romance was the icing on top of the cake.  Well done.

#42 · 233w, 17h ago · · ·

>>1399279 This... you get it. Thank you. :pinkiehappy:

#43 · 233w, 16h ago · · ·

Not much to say about this that hasn't already been said, it was short, sweet and ludicrously cute. :twilightsmile:

I will add that Dash not caring about what anyone thinks of the relationship, but worried about being discovered studying fits her absolutely perfectly. :rainbowkiss:

#44 · 233w, 16h ago · · ·

Yep, cute lil story, amazing characterization.  Bonus points for "fortress of blanketude." :scootangel:

#45 · 233w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

>>1390672

#import reading.h

int main()

{

int count = 1;

while (count < 0)

{

// initiate the fun, nice, cute, funny loop

cout << "DAWWWWWWWHHHHH" << endl;

};

return 0;

};

Azu
#47 · 233w, 15h ago · · ·

D'aww that was so sweet! :pinkiehappy:

#48 · 233w, 14h ago · · ·

That was so cute it was stupid.

AND I LOVE STUPID!

#49 · 233w, 13h ago · · ·

Loved it :twilightsmile:

#50 · 233w, 12h ago · · ·

It's just so cute, I think I'll die.

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