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After Rainbow Dash loses a wing in an accident Twilight finds herself to be the only pony capable of restoring it. But can she reconcile the month long treatment with her suppressed feelings for the pegasus?


I wanted to change a lot in this story before submitting it here, but then it took longer than expected and I had other things to take care of. So, after only the most basic revisions, here it is in all its imperfect glory. And in chapter form, too.

Cover image by me.

Skipsy also made a comic for it.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 216 )

I enjoyed this fic quite a bit on EqD. While not the best shipfic I've read it's very pleasant and has some unique characteristics.

You should link the comic in the description too.

I don't know why you think this story is bad, I've read it before and enjoyed it.

Finally! Been waiting for you to upload this here. One of my favorite Twidash fics.

Awesome to see this up on Fimfiction. This was actually one of the first MLP fics I read, and it's still very high up in my TwiDash list! Thanks for the great story. :pinkiehappy:

I saw the comic on dA, but never got around to reading the actual story. This will be my chance, I guess. :)

Ah, finally one of my favorite TwiDash stories makes it over here. This is a great story, and I'd recommend it to anyone, especially if they like TwiDash.

Also, I noticed that the story is marked "incomplete". Is this an error or...?

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I just did that. Thanks for reminding me.

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Depending on how far back you read this story, it still wasn't as good as I wanted. Well, it still isn't. You might have enjoyed the story, but it was riddled with adjectives and LUS. I just fixed most of those before uploading it here.

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Thank you!

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One of your first huh? Thank you!

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How is it that I see that gif on almost every story here?

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Please do. The comic left a lot of little things out.

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It's only an error if you count me as a source. I just corrected it.

Finally, my favorite TwiDash on FimFiction :twilightsmile:

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I've had this account for over three months now ...

Thanks though.

This is... really good actually! I love the writing and the internal struggles, the characterizations, just all around awesome! Hope it stays this way! Please keep writing, I'll keep reading.

...Not my kinda story, but whatever. Magic makes you act in mysterious ways...

Why, you ask? It's magic. I ain't gotta explain shit.

...Or is it just sleep deprivation?

yes yes; one of my first twidash's that i ever read has made its way over to fimfiction

Hey, welcome to Fimfiction.

Love this story

The question now becomes, will you ever do the extensive revision? :twilightsheepish: I for one would love to see it.

Awesome story, but a pony breaking a pinky promise, without pinkie stopping them i just ain't buying i.

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Pfaha! No. You better not get your hopes up. I understand that you'd like to read it, but it would be more of a rewrite ending up about twice as long rather than making some changes. And I don't have the patience and commitment to do that.

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Rarity knew the risks and gladly took them.

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Twice as long?!... Now you've gotten my hopes up :pinkiesad2:
This is one of the few stories where I can feel what the characters feel, and that's a rare thing, and deserves recognition.

597004 Yeah, i could see her go though hell and high water for romance :raritywink:

:heart: the story. Twilight and Dash does make a great couple.:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:
Just surprised that :applejackunsure::raritywink: are a couple, love to read on how that happen

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Yes, the SS TwiDash practically sails itself! The RariJack was just a silly idea I threw in at the end of having written everything. I was referencing butterscotchsundae's Swayback Mountain.

Read this ages ago, but will read it again now :twilightsmile:

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Aw, thank you. And I approve of your avatar.

why couldnt rainbow stay with twilight??? :fluttercry:

597440 I just though I needed something original...ish, haven't seen anyone else with it so far.

Kenseirabbit Because Pinke has a big mouth! :rainbowlaugh:

im enjoying this a lot its my first twi-dash shipfic and i you are doing quiet well in my opinion cant wait to see what you offer in the future

yay she falling in love with twilight! :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

I remember this one up one EqD, It's a really nice story and I was glad to have re-read it.

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Thinks for tilling me about the other story, now i gonna start reading that one, Man i feel like twilight grabbing books to read. Anyhow, Keep up the good work:heart: and let the other stories that you write will be as good as this one :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

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Thank you. You can read the other two stories I've uploaded here, too. They were both written after this one. Although I haven't written anything after Dreamworlds and it'll still be a while before I start again.

:fluttercry: Those last two paragraphs... I've been there. That is precisely how it feels. Well done. Well done indeed.

I said it before and I'll say it again: excellent! Seriously wonderful writing here. There were more than a few times where I had tears in my eyes, and I never once had a hard time seeing the scene in my mind. I've been looking forward to this all day, and it couldn't have appointed me more! (Weird that you can't say that, you can disappoint, but you can't just appoint, unless you're classifying something, whatever, anyways, your story made me very happy!) Thank you so much for writing this! You've got some real talent, and I really hope you keep getting inspired to use it. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

she suuuureee does

:pinkiehappy: :twilightangry2: piiiinnnkkkeee!!!

i absolutely love this story it is my first twidash shipfic and i am glad to say it was this one because i instantly fell in love with it keep up the good work cant wait to see future installments:yay:

I have nothing to say, other than that this fic made me laugh and DAWWWW.
...
One could say it's simply...
aDAWWWWWable.
:rainbowkiss:

Very nicely written chapter! Liked by me, and you have a new stalker

Daaaaaws will be had.

"By Celestia's beard, she was an awful liar"
"By Celestia's beard, she was an awful"
"By Celestia's Beard, She was an"
"By Celestia's beard, she was"
"By Celestia's beard, she"
"By Celestia's beard"
"Celestia's beard"
"Beard"

The fuck? Since when has Celestia had a beard?

Oh i know its a marestauche.

No daaaws were had. Non-manly tears were shed.

Heh. Very sweet :flutteryay:

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