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Everypony knew about Dash's feelings for Twilight, everypony but Twilight that is. As the girls come together for a slumber party, Rainbow Dash finally sees her chance to tell Twi how she feels. With her friends behind her Rainbow Dash throws caution to the wind!

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Thank you for not needlessly filling up Applejack's dialogue with "ya'lls" and "ah" instead of "I". I read a story that drove me crazy just from things like that. The story also flows nicely.

I fapped 7 times to this

Chapter ends with "The End"

Story labeled "incomplete"

now I don't know what to think. =S

I liked the story though, and I love the pegasus feather move. Every time that shows up in a story, I get fluffy feelings =3.

You have something against the fandom realizing Applejack's accent in her spoken dialogue? It's just a way for the author to ensure that their work is read in the way they envisioned, and there's nothing wrong with that. Admittedly, some authors like to take it too far, but it's perfectly acceptable for one to replace "I" with "Ah" and so-on.

Yeah, I have no problem embracing a character's mannerisms; you should have read this one story which used "y'all" four times in one sentence.

It was a great story, but a few out of place quotation marks and commas that need to be
Err, fixed.

Cute, and it fits into the show perfectly. Excellent job, guy!

That was so amazing. Great job! :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

D'awwwwww! So cute! You got everyone's character perfectly! :heart::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::twilightblush::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::yay::moustache:


How the hell do I favorite a story!? I can't figure it out! No seriously, somepony tell me how, so I can come back to this and favorite it please?

D'awwww :trollestia:

This is so cute on many levels


Favorite by clicking the star next to the title and thnx :D

Got it, thanks. An oh you're welcome :Dd

D'awww. Sweet story.

My manlyness took a crushing blow. It may not survive much longer

ok time to wash my mind of some of sexual clop (thank god) and have the innocent shipping.
im diving in


Who could dislike such a cute story? :scootangel:

Twilight just blushed even more. Was this really happening? There was no way this was real, and yet there she wa,s looking her straight in the eyes with what could only be described as adoration. Twilight felt honored, but was still very confused. Did she feel the same way about Dash? The minutes passed and Twilight was unable to speak or move.

And yet there she wa,s

I found that reading it and thought I'll point it out in the comments later. (me being my grammar nazi self):rainbowwild: Then I had to find the paragraph for reference but I forgot where it was.:derpytongue2: So I looked for twenty minutes to locate it again:pinkiecrazy:

Erm, cool story bro?
Loved the tale to bits. Keep it up!
EDIT: Didn't mean for shrugpony to be so huge xD


contrary to popular belief, you can still be a badass and think that little ponies are cute.

741921 my eyes + your avatar = BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG WTF?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!



That was a cute story. Thumbs up and favourite just for you! :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowlaugh:

This is so perfectly executed I don't even know what to say. I love it!

Who doesn't love a good TwiDash fic? :rainbowkiss::heart::twilightsmile:

So much ADORABLENESS!!!!!!! :fluttershysad::fluttercry: :heart::raritydespair::raritycry:

This was so beautiful :rainbowkiss:
I loved it so much :heart:

Clever usage of the word game. Al round great and sweet fic. :twilightsmile: Well done!

That was adorable. I love it. Thanks for the read!

It's these types of stories that make me D'AAWWWWW like a little filly:heart:

D'awws... too... powerful. Must... punch something... to feel... manly... :twilightsmile:

Another like worthy Twidash. Very well done!

Very clever and heartwarming. Well done!

575767 anti-homosexuals?

Nice Story :twilightsmile:! Would be awesome to see whats going on in the kitchen.

Very nice! Enjoyed the read!

The word game made it really cute.

every level of cute :heart:

so much daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww you could give a creeper diabetes
also wooooo 400th upvote

1082515 people who don't like twidash, or in other words "the crazys"

CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!!!!!!*explodes*

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