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The Wizard of Words


Come what may and test what will, I always find peace in some form of writing. Be it famous, hidden, or simply my own, it is and forever will be a sanctuary.

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There comes a moment in everypony's life when they have to look back and see what they have done. There is nothing that I regret in my life. I have battled demons, defeated gods, and deciphered mysteries that the Princesses themselves doubted could be unlocked. All of that was just the beginning to a grand adventure.

Prior to Season 3
Story three in my Twidash Challenge: Feel Good Theme
Credit Image to PageTurner1988

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this story made me hnnnnnnnnnng
it also reminded me of this rap song

But yes sir, i like it very much, can I have another slice ? Please.

Can we have a end like this for your other fic "Progress". No, I'm just kidding :rainbowlaugh:

I can't way for another chapter of your TwiDash challenge.

Cédric

wow, i read that like 5 hours ago, really takes a while to pass que queue. :derpyderp1:

not need to tell, a great work, a nice reference with surprise. :pinkiehappy:

and congratulations to the first complete story of the challenge, 19 more to go :yay:

darkho off and as always, nicely done

I have the "It's Over 9000" soundbite from DBZ on my iTunes, mostly for shits and giggles.

My songs are always on shuffle, so what are the odds that that soundbite plays as I click on this story?

THE WORDCOUNT IS OVER NINE-THOUSAND!

I am so sorry.

The only bad part about being your editor is the excitement I get when I see a new TwiDash, and that feeling getting immediately crushed when I realize I've already read it.:twilightangry2::rainbowwild:

I really wish I knew how to embed youtube videos. Oh well.
In any case the title reminded me of this song.
I'll read this later.

Can't wait to read this. Looks cute:twilightblush:

This was just wonderful. Thank you for writing. :pinkiesmile:

It wasn't written like I had expected it to, but damn...
Definetly one of the best romance stories I have read. The Pinkie & Fluttershy ordeal was the first thing that brought me to tears, the second was Dash proposing.

An absolutely beautiful story that deserves to be read by everypony on this site.
Don't stop writing, you have an amazing amount of talent, and it would be a shame to let it go to waste.

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You'd be doing yourself a dis-service if you didn't read it.

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Here in the Add comment thinger hit the You-Tube Button and type in the URL or the web address. Pretty much the same one you put in your add link one there.

1498717Thanks. I can't wait to read it now! Here, have a musical present. I love sharing my music preferances with the world, and have an amazing day, good sir or madam.:twilightsmile:

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Why thank you Sir/Madam I as well like to spread my musical interests. So by judging the song you sent me I avoided my metal and found this. Please do enjoy.

Music

1498772Ha, that song was pretty sweet. Kinda Coldplay-like, to be honest. I luv Coldplay! And I liked that song you gave me, so I'll give you softer Rock song by one of my all time favorite bands ever.:twilightsmile:

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I've heard there stuff before. Not bad. While not entirely my style I am not some idiot that will go and bash it just because it's not my exact style.

The song you sent me in a way reminded me of a song on the edge of my style. This one.

I will end our back and forth on this comment board here so as to not annoy the author with a bunch of comments not pertaining to their story.

If you wish to continue this musical sharing just send a PM.

If not then have a good day and good life.

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YourBronyGod

*BLAM!!* Right in the feels!! :twilightsmile:

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Heh, you and I had the same idea.

It's just.....so ungodly amazing. Really. This has literally just knocked at least 1o different fics out the window and is sitting as one of the absolute best pieces I've read. There are so many feels in this fic, all of them good. All of them so well developed and realistic. There isn't any needless tragedy to create tension, everything is completely possible due to time. Even her end thoughts are something that I can see any person feeling and the dynamic of Rainbow helping Twi realize how much more there is in life to enjoy just....ahhhhh it's too amazing. I don't care what you ever think of yourself, after this there is no doubt that you are in fact The Wizard of Words.

heart warming, sweet and beautiful the best combo for a good fanfic i like it how it goes over everything as a long friendship report and a one at that i believe it could make a man with a heart of stone share a tear or two.
A man once said: a great love is like a good memory, if fores it or push it, it will seem fur fer away but if you sit wait and if your patient then maybe just maybe it will come to you.
Rating: READ THIS FIC
im the ponyfic critic and i read so you don't have to

First off, because I'm just a nitpicky person, a few errors here and there. Nothing that couldn't be glossed over, so no big deal. And this story is complete, right? So that thing saying the story is incomplete is false?

Now, for the most important part.

Wizard of Words, you brilliant, brilliant man.

This story made me smile like a goofy bastard. Thank you for taking my shitty day and spitting in it's face.

This story shall be re-read in my future. This story has the ability to make me happy no matter what happens in my life. Thank you for just being so awesome.

:twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

This story starts great, but there's one little thing I want to say, if that's ok with you. Could you please slow things just a little bit down. Twighlights other feeling and the development of the relationships of the mane 6 could be depicted more detailed.And somehow Twighlight was easier to convince to a marriage than to an one night stand in other stories. I know that she was thinking about this a long time ago, because Twighlight nearly never does something without long thinking, but you can let her tell us more about this feelings. That would be nice, if you don't mind.

Oh wow.

That was adorable.

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: OH CELESTIA THAT WAS THE MOST SADDEST STORY AND HEART WARMING STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: OMG SO MUCH LOVE!!!

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair: NEVER EVER HAVE I FELT LIKE THIS BEFORE :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: :heart::heart::heart:

You sir are a master!!! :raritystarry:

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All your songs are belonging to me.
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Yeah, one down, 19 to go...
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I'm glad you liked it. And it is complete now, so no worries.
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Submitted... Waiting...
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I understand where you are coming from, and I did try to do that at first, but I guess the reason why I didn't was because Twilight was trying to explain how these big things happen over time, and I gave them an unspoken relationship between Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie, and Fluttershy's incidents. If I had spent longer on her thought process it most likely would have altered the pacing of the story compared to the rest of the fic, which would have been damaging.

Some more thoughts from me...

I liked that Twilight started to freak out. It's exactly like her to overthink and rile herself up over little things like this. Good characterization there.

I didn't like how rushed the TwiDash was. Twilight kinda went into blow-by-blow description storytelling in that part. As it was the narrator recounting her own love tale, I would have liked to see that part expanded upon. Maybe mention how Twilight had felt something for Rainbow, maybe have her realize that she and Rainbow had shared feelings for one another prior to the Wonderbolts letter, and they were clearer in hindsight. It was such an important part of the story, and it kinda feels as though you glossed over it.

1503673 Then I'll set us up the bomb

YEAAHHHH feature bar or box, i rly dont know, nethertheless congrats,

ps. i still think the feature bar ( or box) sucks

You wonderful person, my heart melted. :heart:

Awww :twilightsmile: This feels me with such warm fuzzy feelings :heart:

Great damn story, only have one question, what about Sp:moustache:ike?:twilightsmile::rainbowwild:

A story that rends the very barriers that one has set around their heart and soul, singing beautiful symphonies of wondrous emotion that cascade through our heart, nay, our very manifestation of ourselves, enticing us with it's teases of true love and care, as well as it's true content, the lesson that the best has truly been saved for the future. It is a manifestation of wonder, and I hereby classify it as one of the Great works of TwiDash, if not as one of the greater works in the entirety of fictionalized stories under the romance genre on FIMfiction.

Long story short, loved it to atomic pieces. Thank you fully for the brilliant and truly wonderful work! :twilightsmile:

Good story. Very good story.

Very good :twilightblush: I liked it a lot :pinkiehappy:

That was a beautiful emotional roller coaster :fluttercry::pinkiehappy::fluttershbad::ajsmug::raritycry::rainbowlaugh:

:derpyderp2: Uh.. Muffin's confused here.. :derpytongue2:

this. this is beyond beautiful. i loved reading this.

But... Rainbow... how did she... how did Twilight... what? What sorcery is this! :twilightangry2:

Anyway, i think you just destroyed my heart with all the d'aww this story contains. I applaud you good sir! you have earned yourself a stalker. :twilightsmile:

...I'm at a loss for words. Just take all my likes and be proud of this masterpiece.

i cant explain this in words so i will post this
i.imgur.com/U10A6.jpg
so good but so feel

And then it was an Unicorn colt and RD was like "D'aaaaaaaaaaaawww... time to make another baby. This time eat lots of bananas, i heard that will make sure the baby becomes a pegasi." :rainbowlaugh:

Well, I thought that this story will be a kind of epic prologue for a "RD and Twighlight become parents" story

Nicely done! I loved it all (sucker for a good TwiDash), except for the two marriage proposals, which seemed to come completely out of nowhere. Just two extra paragraphs giving some background to set them up would've at least made them plausible.

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Dude... that was deep. Bravo *slow clap*

sir that was beautiful. This story is the reason I love this site. You are truly an excellent writer. I cried. Twice.
10/5 stars

Normally i detest past tense but his made the past tense worth it, the turn to the future at the end was lovely. Bravo Sir. Bravo

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