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WinterStormed


Once a Brony, Always a Brony... #Brony4Life

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After having a terrible and horrible life , I was given a chance and made a deal with the dev-I mean Discord. Transferred as a god with dashing features into a television program that I never paid attention to ? Hell yeah. My only concern is what Discord meant by 'prone to enslavement.'

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 39 )

The first few chapters weren’t bad! I’m a little confused about why you decided to make them so short? It’s very jarring to jump so quickly from one place to another so quickly.

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The style is a bit wierd but kind of similar to some of the wattpad stories iv seen so it's good quick question but is their mother faust?Faust? So is she evil in this?

i like this story can't wait too see what happens next

Hmm, is the author a Russian or a Belarus? There is an uncommon use of verb wake up which means to stop sleeping, but stupid thing that our language use same verb for meaning "to stand up".

Comment posted by hmaf43 deleted May 30th, 2022

Super livre j’espère que tu vas continuer

at least luna knows something is up. she is his frend and i hope they meet again

this story pissed me off as most storys about trusting someone only for it to be a betrayal end up doing im not downvoteing but i wont upvote either

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A good story gets you emotionally involved.

Monk

Nice I was wondering when this would return

Every pony has a best pony and I want to know it. Leave the name of the pony who you think is the best in the comments below

Best pony has to be Luna.

Sexiest character is Adagio Dazzle

Best character Discord

The Monk

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Galexia is the anomaly. Step one is to determine when divergence occurred and what has become of Faust as she could be your best source for information.

Discord gave a disappointing look. "Silver, I am your close friend and guide to this alien world. Trust me when I say the first thing you want to know is that Fluttershy is best pony. Come Silver, say it with me. Shout it on the rooftops : FLUTTERSHY IS BEST PONY !"

This is objectively false. Everyone who is anyone knows that Derpy Hooves is THE best pony. Where each of the main six embody an element, Derpy embodies all of them.

Comment posted by Rubae deleted Jul 13th, 2022

I do hope you finish this because it was very good. I mean who would not want to see what happens with the corrupt/ princess Fluttershy.

Top Riddle sighed as he pulled the cage towards his destination. "It seems the Avocado broke him."

Are we sure this isn't just Discord in disguise

Wow, chapters are like a single paragraph long. Why the heck are you writing em so short?

I was hoping for a violent and gory fight to break out
but eh at least we get to see more of the world now

"I-I-I'm F-F-Fine. I need to go now." Luna immediately teleport-ed away. Huh. Was it something I said ? I looked out of the window. I'm free. I could easily fly out of here. Discord did say I should escape if I get the chance but....staying is not bad....plus with Discord warnings I could be extra careful. Determination grew in me. "I'll stay."

Too not listen to the guy that helpt you and all wow this guy is a stupid

w chapter took me awhile to get here

Another weakness is that being a powerful creature, I could be imprisoned and enslaved easily if I was not careful.

If he is that powerful how would it be easily. That makes no sense in any form, also he should have learned the term and conditions before saying yes. Especially if he planned to have a.simple life as he says no a sentence later

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Thanks for reading man.....this story is on hiatus as i'm trying to juggle my work with fimfiction. But don't worry this story is not dead.

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That is good this is a very pleasant story.

This has way too many spelling errors.

That was quick. Too quick actually.

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I know. The story is being rewritten.

I think Discord is just using Thomas to prevent Celestia and Luna from discovering his adventures in Equestria and defeating him.

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