Horror At Sandstone Manor

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This story is a sequel to The Princesses Bodyguard

After an unexpected arrival during the night at the lighthouse, Hitch discovers that one of the surprise visitors might have a connection to a recent cold case. But it all goes down hill when it leads him back to another solved murder which apparently was not solved at all. Unbeknown to him and his police force, they would be opening a dark and ancient wound...

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Chapter 1 · 19th Jan 2022 · 4,298 words
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Chapter 2 · 3rd Apr 2022 · 1,228 words
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Chapter 3 · 11th Jun 2022 · 1,301 words
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Chapter 4 · 12th Jun 2022 · 1,920 words
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Memories · 24th Oct 2022 · 1,311 words
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Forgotten Memories · 23rd Mar 2023 · 1,692 words
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Chapter 5 · 25th Mar 2023 · 1,059 words
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Chapter 6 · 13th Oct 2023 · 1,303 words
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KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #1 · Jan 19th, 2022 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

I love this and can't wait for the next chapter!

ILoveSprout

ILoveSprout #2 · Jan 19th, 2022 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

This is cool and interesting so far! I love how Sprout plays a role.
But I think it should be a T rating instead of an E rating?

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #3 · Jan 20th, 2022 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

Eager to see where this goes.

Simple, I was testing your deduction skills. Now hold your horses, Anemo said he would meet us here. We just need to wait for a bit."

is that Phrase not a bit unfitting, as they are horses?

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #4 · Mar 13th, 2022 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Did I forget to track this? *checks* I didn't.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #5 · Apr 3rd, 2022 · 2 · · Chapter 2 ·

nice to see an update

sandinyan

sandinyan #6 · Apr 25th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I will wait for the next chapter

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #7 · Jun 11th, 2022 · 2 · · Chapter 3 ·

nice to see this updated

Lord of edge

Lord of edge #8 · Jun 11th, 2022 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

Dude sprout with no filter is brilliant

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #9 · Jun 12th, 2022 · 1 · · Chapter 4 ·

interesting

Lord of edge

Lord of edge #10 · Jun 12th, 2022 · 1 · · Chapter 4 ·

I swear sprout dies I'm going to be so upset but it would be a good twist

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #11 · Jun 12th, 2022 · · · Chapter 4 ·

Feels wonderful to see this updated.

Also...

After all this is a horror story

But then where's the horror tag?

WinterStormed

WinterStormed #12 · Jun 13th, 2022 · 2 · · Chapter 4 ·

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Oops
...😁

krokodan

krokodan #13 · Sep 7th, 2022 · 1 · · Chapter 4 ·

Love involved, extra queen appeared. So... changelings?

the couples daughter, Moon Light

this one?

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #14 · Oct 24th, 2022 · 1 · · Memories ·

Short but good

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #15 · Mar 23rd, 2023 · · · Forgotten Memories ·

Nicely done but whats up with this?

she twirled it around her red mist. [color=# be4343]It's a little project of mine. It's purpose is to simply erase a ponies memories of any encounters with me. She sighed. [color=# be4343]

WinterStormed

WinterStormed #16 · Mar 23rd, 2023 · 1 · · Forgotten Memories ·

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Dammit...will. Correct it :)

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #17 · Mar 23rd, 2023 · 2 · · Forgotten Memories ·

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Youre welcome

sandinyan

sandinyan #18 · Mar 23rd, 2023 · 1 · · Forgotten Memories ·

he's back

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #19 · Mar 25th, 2023 · 2 · · Chapter 5 ·

you got a few formation errors, like here "

She let you live because disposing you would be losing ancient history of our past. My mother's words. Not mine. <b>I</b> wanted to suck you bone dry. Yes <b>Queen Chrysalis</b>. " The voice was laced with mock and sarcasm. " You belong in our History museum. In fact that's where we were going to put you. In a obsidian gilded cage. So the little foals on excursion can point at you and say 'Wow ! We used to look so barbanaric back then ! ' "

WinterStormed

WinterStormed #20 · Mar 25th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 5 ·

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shot.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #21 · Mar 25th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 5 ·

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yeah, just trying to help

WinterStormed

WinterStormed #22 · Mar 25th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 5 ·

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corrected it brov. Thanks :)

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #23 · Mar 25th, 2023 · 2 · · Chapter 5 ·

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youre welcome

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #24 · Mar 26th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 5 ·

Here's a few errors I corrected. Other than that, it was a great chapter!

" Why are you asking a question that you already know the answer to ?"

The second voice chuckled once more." Do you even know why she let you live old hag ?"

The second voice chuckled. A rather emotionless one. "Don't lie to me. I'm not an idiot. We have been watching you since your little field trip at Rosewood Manor. You have killed quite a few of them. Which was not part of our agreement."

"She let you live because disposing you would be losing ancient history of our past. My mother's words. Not mine. I wanted to suck you bone dry. Yes Queen Chrysalis . " The voice was laced with mock and sarcasm. " You belong in our History museum. In fact that's where we were going to put you. In a obsidian gilded cage. So the little foals on excursion can point at you and say 'Wow ! We used to look so barbaric back then ! ' "

"I hope you are ready Chrysalis. I'm not done yet."

Chrysalis cried in frustration. "What's so special about him !? I murdered an elderly couple. You did not bat an eyelid. I killed two guards, you did not even bother to confront me. But when I ponynap a deputy, who is depised by everypony, who is loved by no pony. You should of seen how foolish he looked when I made that dumb unicorn confess to him. It was pathetic. Is it because of this
outcast you came here ? In my sanctuary ? Telling me I lost my right to live !? "

WinterStormed