Shadow Wolf

It was a hard battle, everyone was hurt. There was no hope or any way to win, at least every pony thought so.

But a mare had an idea, but this idea comes with a severe cost.

Chapters (1)

Comments ( 7 )

brittanypegasister2008 #1 · Apr 22nd, 2022 · 2 · · Shadow Wolf ·

Love it!

TheAncientPolitzanian #2 · Apr 22nd, 2022 · 1 · · Shadow Wolf ·

I'm willing to give this a thumbs up, but for future reference, there are some grammar/formatting errors you may need to work on down the line.

Either way, kudos!

GoodVibeWolf #3 · Apr 22nd, 2022 · 1 · · Shadow Wolf ·

Please. Make another chapter where Sunny comes back to life. I can’t bare to see this happen. Please make her come back to life

Flora Blossom #4 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 1 · · Shadow Wolf ·

This fiction made me cry. Good job though. I love this. It has good emotion of sadness. Congratulations.

Lulamoon-Crystal #5 · Apr 24th, 2022 · 3 · · Shadow Wolf ·

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Thank you for reading!

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Yep, I’m aware... seems the grammar fixer didn’t pick them all up... But thank you for reading!

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Well, I was considering writing an alternate ending, no promises tho

BirdsBooksBrownies #6 · Oct 18th, 2022 · · · Shadow Wolf ·

I didn't cry out loud but I did feel a certain weight in my heart like it was being stepped on albeit slowly.

Comment posted by Merrrylongford deleted Nov 28th, 2022

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