Exactly what you saw earlier when you clicked on the short description.
Man dies and comes back as the pony of shadows, if you liked Venom and let there be Carnage, This is the story for you!
And if anyone wants to read this, be warned, shit’s about to get real.
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"few actual sins in here but I’m going to stop with your conviction of murder"
From where does he get the sins File of the Mc? the police database? and conviction of murder is not a crime nor is it a sin it's a punishment. the sin should be murder but if the guy is someone who sort people then he should already know that. and He should already know that he is innocent. because by the logic of the soul agent corrupt politicians who did not get caught or cleaned their records should go to heaven in a limo.
Sorry if I sound harsh but this just annoyed me lol.
NICE START MAN!!!
Well, this should be interesting. A bit fastpaced but considering it’s the start of the story and the MC’s background doesn’t seem that relevent, it’s not a bad to just get the story going. But for future chapters, I suggest to tell the story in a way as if Duncan is trying to absorb everything around him, like taking in details and stuff like that.
Oh man, the mentioning of venom 2 has me remembering the ticket for it i got which had a misprint
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I based that scene on the pilot of a show called The Good Place.
hey this is pretty good.
please do continue
how long is this going to be
I’m curious on how this will go, Keep up the good work.
And I make you one of the villains because of your bad deed
I wonder if his soul possesses Pony of Shadow or Rob create a new body for him
A bit quick for my tastes but I will be watching
You sonova Bish I'm in, the main character has my name!
and I like this.
Keep it up.
I just hope this doesn't end up dead in the water like your other stories.
Because this one has amazing potential.
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I’m working on chapter one right now
I like the concept, but please slow down a little.
Interesting idea.
There aren't many Pony of Shadows stories out there.
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Perhaps because the Pony of Shadows is not a particularly well-thought-out character. Although, this can be blamed on all the villains of the series.
However, I agree, I would like more stories.
For me personally, the beginning looks like some kind of issekai anime.
I like it.
Good luck, author.
I'm very interested in seeing where this story goes. It's a very unique concept!
Got to the top of the Featured list. I read a few of your stories, hope you keep this one going.
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I am, but I’d appreciate some people giving me ideas.
Looks interesting will be following this to see where it goes.
I can appreciate the reference to “The Good Place” series, had me laughing 😆
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Thank you! I’m glad someone got the reference!
This looks fun
I wonder if this is before or after the pony of shadows was re banished. Also ponys being scared is defently gonna happen once they see him but hopefully cooler heads will win in the end. If they do find out about him and give him a chance they will likely keep him under watch aka "your free but since we think you could be evil you have to stay with us and if you seem to do something bad we will critisise you relentlessly even if we would have done something similer"
Oooh heck yeah!
This is going to be fun!
When is chapter 1 going to be release?
That's with humans too lol, from what I have read and learned, ponies and humans are pretty much the same besides appearances.
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Yes.
I already read a few of your other stories and I have to say that it seems very interesting so far. Can't wait to see him interact with the main 6!
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We still waiting
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I have a lot of stuff going on, be patient!
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all good take your time
Just by looking at it I can already tell it's going to be good
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I have seen fanfics of 70 chapters with over 200K words that takes at least 40 hours to read everything, at first glance seems easy to do, but when you actually try to start writing the truth of how hard it is comes with all force, take your time dude/gal, it's not easy
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Ok, thanks for understanding… I think
continue with this story please it's really cool I really loved this story please 👍 :)
More more good good
Keeping an eye on this one.
update it
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If you all like it so much, would you like to help me with my writer’s block? I’m halfway through the next chapter, but I got stuck, if you want to read it, send me a pm and you can try helping me finish the chapter.
By seeing the description I assumed that the shadow form would have its own conscious and Michael and the shadow would converse with each other like Eddie and venom.
Please continue some of you're stories
please.
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I’m trying, I’m stuck cuz I need a new co-author, if you can spread the word and find me someone who can help and be comfortable with the kind of stuff I do, then maybe some of my stories can get new chapters!
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Have you tried asking on a blog post?
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Yes, repeatedly
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That is unfortunate
I want M O A R pls!