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professor space n time

There's so much to do and so much time. So I waste it reading and writing and you waste yours reading the results of my boredom and wild imagination.


When Princess Celestia was walking around the outskirts of Canterlot she found a young nymph in a basket in the bushes, she decided to take care of her like her daughter, Amara.

One day like any other Amara is sent to Ponyville with her mother's star student for the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration, they were also recommend making friends, but none of them knew what fate was preparing.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 101 )

Good story, it's plot is pretty similar to fanfic here called "My Little Pony: Friendships is Magic season 1" by Alpha Wolf 4500. Though your story has some differences between it, I look forward to the next chapter.

interesting start looking forward to see where this story goes

You’re right.

Should I ask him if this is alright with him?

I don't know man, I'm not going to stop you but please just don't get me on troubles, I'm new with this things, I don't have any intention on making any plagiarism, the last thing I want in this site is troubles, I just want to write about what I like.

Don’t worry, that’s not gonna happen.

Intriguing, my dear fellow:coolphoto:. Can't wait to read the next one!!:pinkiehappy:

It has some bizarre similarities. Although both taking inspiration from the child in the reeds aspect of the story of Moses from the Bible.

Only time will tell if this story falls prey to the same flaws as Alpha wolf's fic, with Changeling OCs that don't feel like actual changelings. Already it has the advantage of not having a changeling named Chad.

It just dawned on me that both stories had taken inspiration from Moses in the Bible. LOL

You're right about that.

Comment posted by professor space n time deleted May 1st, 2021

Could lead to an interesting moment or two if they have plans to diverge from canon and have their protagonist changeling pull a Moses on chrysalis

Why many people rewrite the canon with their OC? I am very curious about that.

I was wondering about this story. Well let’s hope the next chapter doesn’t take nearly a month to come out.

....wow they don't know that will call "unrespect canon episode"?

"Well, the mayor told me that I was in charge of receiving the supervisors of the celebration, I saw the three of you in the street alone and I did not know you and I know all the ponies here so that meant you were new and I always make a welcome party for the new ponies in town, so I went to ask the mayor if you were the supervisors and where you would stay and she told me that in the library but when I got there I realized it was closed so I got the locksmith to help me open the door and then I planned this super-duper special party for you!” Pinkie replied cheerfully.

I created this dialogue because I wanted to solve a small error in the episode, it is never explained how Pinkie Pie knew that Twilight would stay in the library, so I thought that since she is the town party planner and that Rarity was in charge Regarding the decorations, it was logical that the mayor would like her to welcome the supervisor who would be sent from Canterlot by the princess herself. Just a thought of mine.

Of course one could say "Pinkie sense" or "Just Pinkie being Pinkie" but i wanted to do something more reasonable.

I see the changes in it. Hoping Chrysalis and her holds a bond.

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Thanks!:heart: I'm already writing the next one, hope I finish it soon :applejackunsure:

I imagine that Rarity won’t be happy about Rainbow accusing Amara.

"Rainbow Dash!" Rarity yelled "What in your right mind do you think you are doing?! She is not a spy! She is the daughter of Princess Celestia!"

"Is she?"

"Of course she is! And you just accused her of having conspired with that monster, the same monster that foalnapped her mother, do you have any idea what could happen to you? They will throw you into a dungeon!"

Called it.

*The 7th Elements tinging * .........ugh this is not good

As a sofa critic, I would like to cancel that,, fan fiction,, causes a lot of positive emotions, as well as a strong interest . I also want to note the efforts of the author and support in writing the continuation . I fully agree with the author's opinion about the writing : the author is an autocrat, he decides what will happen next , but we ordinary readers can only hope that he ,, the author,, will not abuse the existing power .

Read this while imagining someone with a monocle , a cylindrical hat, and a glass with delicious contents .

I don't care what you think about my literacy

Sorry, I don't think I understood you well, do you want me to cancel this fanfic?

No, no, no . On the contrary, I want to continue . I just use the translator, maybe because of this and a misunderstanding.

I'm sorry if I offended you somehow .

No problem, I'm not offended, I was just confused, you'll be happy to know that the next chapter will be released soon, maybe today.

OMG, she is stealing Sunset's Elements. Everyone, quick, call the 911 to arrest her because of stealing.

..... Why did I feel that Amada is smartass or something?

You can order whatever you want, but we have to return before ten o'clock, I have experiments to finish.

I find myself curious.

She might be.

Okay then :twilightsmile:. Just let see if she have her own chapter :twilightsmile:

P/S: look like you enjoy fixfic right.

I see you’re fixing some of the later seasons’ episodes before they happen. That’ll probably lead to an interesting divergence from canon.

This is a decently enjoyable read, though there’s punctuation issues concerning the quotes, other than that, this is pretty enjoyable.

Amy and Fluttershy are very cute together.

The explanation for a 7th element is much appriciated.

Luna yelped in terror "How is this possible? Celestia, sister, what pony did you mate with?"

I love how Amy doesn’t clarify that she was technically adopted after this.


You might want to up the rating from E if you’re going to use curse words.

I don't mind the changes in this story despite being an AU of the actual episodes. I also hope that the next episode with Trixie doesn't be like the show. I mean years ago, I realized that the entire town got mad at a Stage Performer, even Twilight's friends who defeated Nightmare Moon. I don't get why they acted like hecklers to Trixie? Maybe they did it because Trixie took their customers and Rainbow's audience?

Yeah, don't worry, the element of empathy will work on that.

Funny thing, that...

According to the Entertainment Software Rating Board (ESRB) and Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA) As long as the word "Fuck" isn't used excessively or in a sexual context... it's still able to qualify for an E or E10+ rated game (ESRB) or PG-13 Movie (MPAA). If it starts getting more than Mild though, yes... it would no longer qualify for E-rating.

Granted, it's up to the author and site mods to have final say about the rating of the story.

Yeah, thinking about the future I decided to change the rating.

Good on you. The story has been interesting so far, so I'm watching the progress with a tempered eagerness.

100% Admittedly, we're talking like... 1 F-bomb in perhaps each quarter of the game at most. If the game ups its swear-count to what would be the equivalent of mild language, it has to bump the rating up.

Oh no! My uncle escaped the mental asylum and dated Celestia!

Ooh... that's no bueno... I don't like nightmare showing up... no me gusta.

"Seriously?" Twilight asked him.

Amara is female. When did she change her gender?

You know, I thought about the same story, in particular how changelings basically changed nothing; then I saw this

Celestia then looked at the drawer of her dresser thinking about the photos, drawings and diaries that lay inside, her student and her niece had dead in that incident

and I immediately was given hope for some massive changes.

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