Hi I’m Mamoru Shinigami, one morning I woke up in a land of talking Multicolor ponies, all because I got a letter from the merchant. not the craziest thing, but it’s definitely insane. Now let’s see what kind of mischief I get wrapped up in!!
Mamoru Shinigami's powers come from dark magic. With his dark magic, it seems like he has superpowers but in actuality his powers are just dark magic, manifesting as to appear like superpowers.
This story shall go to the series finale. So strap yourselves in for a wild ride. It may say alternate universe in the tags, but that's because There will be a few small differences here and there, not many but enough to make things interesting.
This is my first story. As you read it will begin a little boring, but then you may have a little more excitement with each chapter as the story progresses. I apologize in advance for the prologue. The other chapters will be a little more tasteful.
And I'd like to thank DarkKing2 for the art on the cover.
Disclaimer: I do not own my little pony: friendship is magic, it belongs to hasbro.
Ps, sex tag is mostly for prologue and a few sex jokes later on.
The rest of the mature tags are there because the character is an antihero, so stuff happens.
...Shinigami? What kind of family has "death god" for a last name?
I went on google and looked up the Japanese name that meant caretaker, or Protector and I got Mamoru. I looked for a Japanese name that meant death and I got Shinigami. I put the two together in the western order and got Mamoru Shinigami.
A full name that meant to protect the innocent and destroy evil, sounded like the best bet. It also makes the character seem dark and mysterious.
My advice is don't rush, they don't know what women or girl is, and get an test reader so they can tell you how to apply certain aspects needed for a story. I'll continue reading now.
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Ok anyone who knows a way to go to Equestria for real, please speak up.
If anyone has any more questions feel free to ask.
The story is good, but you really need to work on your pacing. And by that I mean you NEED TO SLOW DOWN THE PACE. Your going from one thing to another to fast with both not enough filler, or explanations. Like with Celestina first meeting with shadow she didn’t do anything but sit down and say ok. It’s all way to convenient and fast pace. Plus you go from major plot point to another to fast with not enough time for explanations, down time, or there is just no filler.
Ok the reasons for hiatus, one I need to recap on Equestria girls, two I need time to relax, and three I need to relax. I know I wrote relax twice, but I need to slow down my pace so it doesn't seem like I'm too excited, I know everyone is thinking it, I just need to watch Equestria girls and take some time to relax.
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Who tampered with his stasis?
You will have to find out in the sequel.
If you're wondering where one of my stories went, check my blog post.
Ok I made a few changes to the prologue, hope it's a little better.
I am 'no one in particular' to you as such I will at least to to explain this.
1. You never said how many your character had. As such infinite amount was the second option. Your lucky you didn't get the first (a.k.a. you only get one of each as in 1 grenade, 1 or 2 ammo clips, 5-10 throwing knifes, so on and so forth). Also they take up the original room meaning one grenade goes in another goes in, and etheir the former evaporates or the latter combines with it.
2. You have a pocket dimension were you take, and keep them.
3. You listen to cartoon logic instead of normal logic. Because in some cartoons some characters have seemingly infinite amounts of something or other. Like bugs bunny in his carrots.
Luna is me (and others) after vacation... Literally hundreds to a thousand things happened. At least that is the expression I get when I see my Gmail and Email.
MC's perspective: Admires her as a character in mlp.
Celestia's perspective: Sees him as possible family.
Me: Hmm this looks interesting. But I have to wonder what will happen when HEAT season strikes. After all in the show they never showed when they had their heat seasons or if they even had any.
Also that females will be coming after him (in pony form), because small number of males, they like him, heat season, horny, or something else.
P.s. Still is good. As such will continue to watch.
Now will he treat sombroa like a buffay of black magic, Or will it do something else.
This is me with family. loves them, but tries to get away from them.
He has friends instead of family, but still tries to get away from.
Well, I gave this an honest read so far and, well, it's just not my thing. The small chapters make it easier to consume quickly but I'm just not digging it
Good he has the intelligence to not say the cursed phrases. At least for now.
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To sum up 3 Pinky Pie
I love Tim Burton’s Alice in Wonderland
I do too
Check for sequels
Pinkie #2
Now I know why we don't have magic. We are toltally OP with them
The tummy of a pony is as mysterious as Pinkie
So what happened to Luna?
Dude, he is way past normal human insanity. Probably cus Discord magic...
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So the 'non logical term' already rubbing of on him huh
With the right imagination he can be the most powerful being
Ah~ this duo
When you hate the unimportant event
Wah...he really is moving to fast...at least stay for a cup of tea...
Deadpool vibes
Um where's the image
Yeah, I’ve been unable to get an image. I need someone to help with that.
Not buying that descended from primates crap. Also, we still haven't found the missing link.
Niiiiiice!
He missed the Dazzlings?! Bullshit!
Is he dating Sunset?! HELL YEAH!!!
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But you shouldn't let that to be seen, it looks bad. I recommend you to edit out the words in the fic, keep the reminder on a separate part.
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He could literally just thought this through
Before he talk to the characters (0-0)
Wow….
He could actually have a fun time in this world but ok then.
YEAH!!!!
DARK MAGIC!!!
Welp the girls are definitely traumatized
Aren’t they worried?
Because it’s a Colt who accidentally turn into an Adult
Ok, I liked that Back to the Future reference.