Hi I’m Mechagodzilla, I’ve been sent to Equestria by the merchant, now I’m an unstoppable giant robot. Weird day huh?
Before you read, I’d like to explain to you which Mechagodzilla this is, this Mechagodzilla is from the millennium series movie called Godzilla against Mechagodzilla, however I put in the weapons from the movie Godzilla Tokyo S.O.S., but I didn’t put in The triple maser canon, I kept the absolute zero weapon because I liked it better. I’m probably gonna add a few monsters from Godzilla movies, so be sure to give this a few likes and comments to keep the ball rolling. Hope you’ll enjoy it. I will make sure the chapters are long so you might have to wait a while before the next few chapters.
I was thinking of making this story a sequel to A Lone Synth(rewrite) but I didn’t think it would be good, so I decided to make this instead, I’m hoping it turns out a little better than a few others I’ve made.
Disclaimer: I do not own my little pony: friendship is magic or Mechagodzilla or any of the other giant monsters from TOHO and etcetera.
Ok come on! I just posted this! There’s no way you can give me a thumbs down after a few seconds.
You have to read it first before you give it judgement.
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Can you not make too much stories for you to handle, thus making you unable to function properly and not able to finish your other stories that you seemingly forgot about?
So this is Kiryu?
Don't you mean Triple Laser Cannon?
Another great story R-E-X. I got an optional idea (meaning that you don't have to use the idea). What if you somehow put a living quarters inside Kiryu. And one of or many of the mane six took advantage of it.?/.
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Alright, Usually I like to try and just reply with memes in comments, kinda like my own personal gimmick. Don't ask why I want to have a gimmick for an account on a pony fan fiction website, for some reason I think it makes me "unique" or funny. But I'm breaking that now to say this. Firstly, it's because your pacing and premise aren't interesting. Secondly, it's because people have read your previous stories and won't really enjoy it because they know your writing style and how you make stories. Your most successful story is due to a gimmick, that being that he's Alastor, and there are a good number of people who will latch onto it because of the character, not because of the plot or premise. Third, why like something that we know you're likely not going to continue? People expect writers to, at least, have enough interest in their own stories to continue them. You've shown, time and time again, that you don't like your own stories enough to bother continuing after a second or third chapter, so not many people are going to bother showing support for a story that will likely not see another chapter. Also, the premise and characters in this are uninteresting, the Displaced genre has been done to death, and there isn't really anything here for people to latch on to. The descriptions are sparse, the dialogue is passible, and the idea of being sent to Equestria as a giant mech has been done before, and done better too. I'm not going to say, "Stop writing so many stories, just focus on one," because that'd be bullshit. It's your page, you can post whatever the hell you want so long as it follows the rules. Write a hundred more one chapter fanfics, dedicate all of your time to only the one popular story you have, jump into a whole new genre of fan fiction, do whatever the hell you want. But, just remember, we also have the right to show our support or distaste for anything you publish.
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Bruh you just killed him
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To quote Jontron, "Holy shit you fucking killed her dude."
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Whenever you speak you have so many wise things to say, I can tell this is only 1% of you're power.
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No I don’t. A Maser is an actual thing.
hey guys I love this story ok. Remember this is his version of the story so I like it a lot so all you Godzilla fans out there just suck it up because you guys are too much for him ok so I love it the way that the story is told so stop bullying R-E-X over here ok cut him some slack. ok.
I don't know why there's so many dislikes.
Pacing aside, it seems fine to me.
My stories are not your personal outhouse! Quit shitting on them!
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That sort of attitude will attract trolls and other people who wish to criticize you.
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Thank you! 🙏
I'm really enjoying this please let this be a displaced fic that doesn't end up cancelled!
This is a good story Rex like all your stories keep going and don't let anybody tell you any different because you're a good story writer keep going Rex
nice keep up the good work
ah yes Kiryu
DEPLOY THE MECHAGODZILLA THEME
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You replied to the wrong comment.
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Nope. Triple Maser Canon. Either that, or the dub messed up along the way. But that is usually how Toho (who rightfully owns Kiryu, or Mechagodzilla) spells it.
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Ok.
Interesting. His size alone will be his main problem. Hmmm I will keep an eye on this story. Looks promising, but I'll reserve judgement for later.
Please continue.
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Oops
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Yes, I think that's what this version of Mechagodzilla supposed to be from reading sparse description.
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Don't get your hopes up pal, it'll only bring you crushing disappointment.
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Damn... You done burned his/her ass. And you've said exactly what everyone felt about these Displaced stories. Which are a dime a dozen these days. Most of them following the same old ciche tropes with story plotlines and premises that has become so similar to one another you can't tell them apart.
Not to mention this author needs to be criticized for their work or they'll never learn anything. You can't become a good author if you don't learn from your mistakes or learn to take criticism.
I’m trying to get better, and chapter two will come out as soon as it’s ready and finished.
Ech.
Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor
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more?
hay nice chapter but when will the next one come out?
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Writer’s block.
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Also I just added chapter two
more
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If you want more, you have to come up with it yourself
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Guess I’ll just have to wait then cause I can’t write for shit but hey you can so good on you
What are those two weapons, and why do you prefer one over the other?
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Good question! The triple maser cannon is from GODZILLA TOKYO SOS, but the Abolute zero weapon is from GODZILLA AGAINST MECHAGODZILLA.
Kiryu's ultimate weapon is the Type-3 Absolute Zero Cannon (３式絶対零度砲 3-Shiki Zettaireido-hō), also known simply as the Absolute Zero (アブソリュート・ゼロ Abusoryūto Zero), equipped in his chest hatch. As its name suggests, this weapon fires a beam that instantaneously freezes the target to absolute zero, the lowest theoretical temperature of -273.15 degrees Celsius or zero kelvin, at which all atoms cease movement. Because of this, a target struck by the Absolute Zero will be instantly frozen on an atomic level, smashing its atoms and causing it to collapse under its own weight. The Absolute Zero consumes 40% of Kiryu's energy reserves, and as such cannot be used heavily in combat. The Absolute Zero was shown to instantly freeze and disintegrate skyscrapers when fired at them. Its observed impact on Godzilla was much lesser by comparison, presumably due to interference from being fired underwater. The Absolute Zero was unable to kill Godzilla, though it did open a gaping wound on his chest that would prove critical in defeating him a year later. When Kiryu was repaired the following year, it was deemed to not be cost-effective to repair the Absolute Zero as a key component, a synthetic diamond 1.25 meters in diameter, was damaged and so it was replaced with the Type-4 Triple Hyper Maser Cannon.
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When Kiryu was repaired, his Absolute Zero was replaced with the Type-4 Triple Hyper Maser Cannon (４式３連装ハイパーメーサー砲 4-Shiki 3 Rensō Haipā Mēsā-hō).[12]While this attack was undeniably less powerful than the Absolute Zero, it proved crucial in defeating Godzilla, as Kiryu used it in conjunction with his Type-99 Double Maser Cannon to strike Godzilla's chest wound after it was reopened by the Spiral Claw, which critically injured Godzilla and left him helpless as the Mothra larvaeencased him in silk. The hatch covering the Hyper Maser is equipped with claws that allowed Kiryu to restrain Godzilla and carry him out to sea.
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You just got schooled.
I only want him to remain flight-capable, via rockets in his legs.
Also to have some form of weapon located in/under his horn.
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Ok. But like I said, you’ll have to write that part. As in you have to write a minimum of 100 words.
That's not a pony that's a horse.
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Potato potato.
update?