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Big Imagination E


For those who wants to get to know me i may be 21 years old and feel like a teenage boy who may feel small but i got a BIG imagination inside me

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This story is a sequel to Twilight and Spike: Daughter and Son of the Beast


Ever since what happened at the Canterlot wedding 5 years ago all of Twilightโ€™s friends felt really bad for not listening to her about the Changeling Queen. And when a portal opens they go there to make amends. With others too.

This sequel is requested by my friend ChazMLPFIM. Give him the respect that he deserves.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 16 )

Love it nice:raritystarry::rainbowlaugh::heart:๐Ÿ˜€

Love it nice:pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::heart:๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ

This is a neat sequel so far. I'd love to see more of the parent dynamic between Belle, Adam, and Twilight, Spike, and Cadance.

This premise has promise, but much like the last story it has a massive problem. The pacing, it feels way too fast, like it was written by an adhd squirrel cracked out on all of the drugs. Slow down the pacing.

Love it nice good:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::heart:๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ

YOU HAVE MY ATTENTION

TBH I actually kind of pictured Cadence requesting something like this during the ceremony.............................


" Actually before I say I do" She replied. "I have a request if it's alright with you Phary? "

"What is it luv?" He asked. " If your gonna talk about starting a family so quickly............................

"No, no not that" She interrupted. " Actually................................" The princess of love hesitated at first until she finally continued. " You know about spikes harem right?"

Pharynx raised an eyebrow after hearing his soon to be wifes question. " Yes?"

"Well...........................If you don't mind, would it be ok if I added someone else as well, like a mini harem?" She asked earning shocked looks from the crowd and her soon to be husband.

"Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" He hesitated. " I mean I'm not against this idea but, who do you have in mind?"

"It's quite simple" Cadence replied. " It's someone whom I thought I'd hate forever, someone who I have long since forgiven after realizing that it wasn't all his fault, someone who i admit couldn't stop thinking about even after leaving Equestria" Cadence then pointed towards a certain blue maned stallion in the crowd. " What do you say Shiny? would you like to be my other husband?"

Tears of joy fell from the mans eyes at his exes or should I say soon to be wifes request and he was quick to walk up to the podium to join the duo. "I would love too, I missed you so much Cadence"

"Me too Shiny, me too" Cadence replied as their lips touched into a passionate kiss.

"Uh we haven't gotten to that part yet you two" Celestia said earning blushes of embarrassment from the couple.

"Sorry auntie" Cadence said with a blush.

"Eh, I'm cool with sharing my wife" Pharynx replied. " But listen no kinky shit luv and that goes for you too Shining, I'm not against gay people but I don't swing that way" Roars of laughter could be heard from the crowd including Celestia , Shining armor , and Cadence.

"No worries bro, I don't swing that way either, we'll do it normally" He said with a wink before giving a friendly hoofpound to his new friend. He then walked next to him ready to say I do to cadence as well once his turn is called. " Please continue Celestia"

"Of course Shining armor" She said with a smile. " My apologies but I don't have a spare wedding ring for you"

"No worries auntie, we'll get one after the honeymoon" She said with a wink.


Cause let's be real if Spike could have a harem, why not the Princess of love?

good story, but very chaotic writing

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"Still wish you were more nice to Spike bro?" A female dragon named Smoldering asked.

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