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Big Imagination E


For those who wants to get to know me i am a teenage boy who may feel small but i got a BIG imagination inside me

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This story is a sequel to Twilight and Spike: Daughter and Son of the Beast


Ever since what happened at the Canterlot wedding 5 years ago all of Twilight’s friends felt really bad for not listening to her about the Changeling Queen. And when a portal opens they go there to make amends. With others too.

This sequel is requested by my friend ChazMLPFIM. Give him the respect that he deserves.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 12 )

More good

Love it nice:raritystarry::rainbowlaugh::heart:😀

Love it nice:pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::heart:😀😃

This is a neat sequel so far. I'd love to see more of the parent dynamic between Belle, Adam, and Twilight, Spike, and Cadance.

This premise has promise, but much like the last story it has a massive problem. The pacing, it feels way too fast, like it was written by an adhd squirrel cracked out on all of the drugs. Slow down the pacing.

Love it nice good:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::heart:😀😃

Looking good.

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