Spike dreamed about finding his soulmate for a long while. But when Scootaloo was crushing on him at the wedding he might get his lover.
This story is requested by ChazMLPFIM.
And the art I credit to LifesHarbinger. Great job!
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Big Imagination E
For those who wants to get to know me i may be 21 years old and feel like a teenage boy who may feel small but i got a BIG imagination inside me
Big Imagination E
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Sweet. Spike and Scootaloo are finally in love
There are many grammatical mistakes, and too many saids, way too many of those.
You should have really edited this before posting, at least have another pair of eyes look at it.
Sorry to say this is no good.
You should remove the second person tag, nothing indicates that you are speaking directly to the reader…
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Thank you for agreeing with me.
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You're welcome.
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But he doesn’t seem to care about it.
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Actually I did hear you. I fixed the mistakes. Try looking now.
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Ok
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You can say they said it in unison, but saying they said it together just sounds weird.
And for goodness sake, please get an editor.
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My bad.
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You can look in the group called looking for editors for an editor.
Because you really need one.
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Ok.
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He's taking your advice in the future.
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Oh ok