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Voted "Least Likely Spirit to Scare You with a Reading of an Excerpt from Murakami's Norwegian Wood" two years in a row

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There is a saying in my family.

That Mill Finish will never be a mare you’d want waiting at your doorstep.

I suppose there is some truth to that.


The original draft of this story was written for Undome Tinwe's Dramatic Contest,
as part of the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting group

Many thanks to the following for their invaluable feedback:
Atom Smash Decaf HapHazred The Red Parade Scrying Mind Shaslan Undome Tinwe Vis-a-Viscera

Artwork by LA-ndy

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Stay awesome, friend! :rainbowdetermined2:

Of all the foods one could ever get in the heartland of the Czequestrian Republic, Mill Finish went with macaroni and cheese.

It’s neat to see a new country pun for a location I haven’t seen ponified before.

Anyway, this was good, evocative stuff. I can’t believe it doesn’t have more attention.

Pretty great story. i like Millie finish she’s a fairly realistic oc

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