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Talon and Thorn


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It's Hearth's Warming and Smolder would like to invite a certain young dragon to a dance but she can't get the words out, can her changeling roommate help her make this the best Hearth's Warming ever?

Many thanks to Rixizu for editing.


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Wonder if Smolder and Ocellus decided to share Spike?

Awwwwwww, cute.

Not quite sure it'd actually help in real life if your friend changed into your crush, but YMMV! Also, Fifty Shades? For shame Ocellus!

Thank you for this, and have a very merry Christmas.

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Doubtful.

She seems to have a thing with Snails.

Okay. This was very adorable. :D I figured Ocellus was gonna pull something like that in the first scene. ;)

Very nice! This is actually the only story I've seen tat features Spike and Smolder after the epilogue of the series, and you did a good take on it, with a few interesting twists as well. Ocellus and Snails was an unexpected surprise, but actually makes some sense in retrospect (Snails probably has lotsa easy-going and positive emotions to feed from), and any story with the Trixie-Starlight-Sunburst trio is a thumbs up in my book! The twist with Ocellus and the real Spike was easy to see coming, but very humorous nonetheless!

Have an upvote, please!

Very nice!:moustache:

I know this story says it’s completed but if you ever get the time could you make a 2nd part to it about Smolder and Spike in the relationship. Possibly giving them ups and downs of the relationship and also having the others find out about them. It’s fine if you don’t want to it’s just it’s hard to find stories like this and I really love this one!!

I love this fanfic.

I love how shy the tough Smolder is.

And I love how devious and snarky Ocellus has become. I guess she learned how to be a bit of devil. Heh. But seriously it's nice for her to have some development from her teen years.

Spike and Smolder have a cute chemistry together. I like how they start out shy but gets more natural.

Seriously there are not a lot of Spolder fics. I'm lucky to have come across this one.

Great work with this!

“I don’t know, why ever would he want to spend time with a smart, confident friendship graduate who spends her time helping whoever asks her? And who happens to look cute as a button in that frilly pink dress you bought last month.”

Not only that you along with your friends did save the magic from cozy glow and even bringing all the creatures together defeating the legions of Doom

“Not really,” Spike replied with a snort. “It’s Twilight and the girls who are the famous ones, I just tagged along occasionally.”

Hey you got to give yourself some credit here Spike you did a lot man

Well I got to say this was a pretty interesting story so apparently smolder has been having some feelings for Spike for a while and Ocellus really did try to help her to finally admitted to spike before they prolonged this situation but luckily with a little push from Ocellus both of them ask each other if they can go to the dance which they did and I got to admit it was pretty cute seeing them how they admitted how much they did care for each other they just dance and have fun and it looks like they're taking their relationship to the next level but not too fast but I got to say this was a really nice story keep up the good work and Merry Christmas

That was fun to read.

Ocellus is a sneaky buggo

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