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Zubric


I write various things depending on my mood, just not very fast at the process. I'm a happy and fun brony so there is that.


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Spike felt so overworked and in desperate need of a vacation. With him and Twilight making retuine trips back and forth through the portal to the other world of their doubles, he comes up with a plan that he is sure will give him a few days off. His plan was simple, swap places with his dog counterpart. Assuming they can keep up the act, what could possibly go wrong?

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I can see this backfiring so bad Princess Twilight will give him ten years worth of work.

7854795 Just ten? Pffff. I'd say fifty, at the very least.

is this based on the story where the pony CMC switch places with the human CMC?

7854913 to be fair I had the idea before finding that swap story. Just similar premise I suppose

7854913 No more than that is based on a story concept you've probably seen before. Two characters look similar but come from different backgrounds, and agree to swap places, thinking no one will notice. Two prominent examples that come to mind for this are "Garfield: A Tale of Two Kitties" and the Mickey Mouse film "The Prince and The Pauper".

There should not be an apostrophe in the title.

7855048 The Prince and the Pauper actually predate Mickey Mouse. I know because I read the book for it.

7855084 further back in time Charles Dickens's novel of 'Tale of Two Cities' has a similar base idea, albeit loosely (don't quote me on that was quick google search so could be mistaken) The swap lives with a look-alike isn't anything new, i mean what concept hasn't already been done.

Assuming they can keep up the act, what could possibly go wrong?

And just like that you jinxed it.

Well, this shows promise.

I'm liking this story

7885957 new chapter out today or tommrow depends on editing

Interesting how Starlight is willing to help Dog Spike fill in for Dragon Spike.

This is gonna end badly. But other then stating the obvious, great chapter!

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Yep, and I can't wait to see this go horribly wrong!:trixieshiftright:

Am I the only one who's thinking that Dragon Spike and Dog Spike should've made a detailed plan before going through with this?:unsuresweetie:

I want to see how Starlight and Dog Spike work in this story. Good chapter

Poor Puppy!Spike. Still, he seems to be doing okay for now.

7888435 it true , spike made his plan witpitcthinkong ig fully though. That is what kids do afterall

Uh-oh. This could complicate matters...

Oh dear, Ember's just dropped in.

Would've been interesting if Ember had rushed into the portal as well, would she become a dog too? :trixieshiftright:

Well, they've been found out. Good that Twilight was so understanding about it, though.

Good chapter I wound if Ember is following Twilight

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Not too sure what I’d do with Ember if she did. or why she would though

Wonder if there's a human equivalent to the "Sonic Rainboom", even if it's not the exact same thing?

Well, it could've gone a lot worse.

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