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I write various things depending on my mood, just not very fast at the process. I'm a happy and fun brony so there is that.

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Spike felt so overworked and in desperate need of a vacation. With him and Twilight making retuine trips back and forth through the portal to the other world of their doubles, he comes up with a plan that he is sure will give him a few days off.  His plan was simple, swap places with his dog counterpart. Assuming they can keep up the act, what could possibly go wrong?

First Published
9th Jan 2017
Last Modified
7th Feb 2017
#1 · 10w, 4d ago · 1 · · The Deal ·

I can see this backfiring so bad Princess Twilight will give him ten years worth of work.

#2 · 10w, 4d ago · · · The Deal ·

>>7854795 Just ten? Pffff. I'd say fifty, at the very least.

#3 · 10w, 4d ago · · · The Deal ·

is this based on the story where the pony CMC switch places with the human CMC?

#4 · 10w, 4d ago · 1 · · The Deal ·

>>7854913 to be fair I had the idea before finding that swap story.  Just similar premise I suppose

#6 · 10w, 4d ago · 2 · · The Deal ·

>>7854913 No more than that is based on a story concept you've probably seen before. Two characters look similar but come from different backgrounds, and agree to swap places, thinking no one will notice. Two prominent examples that come to mind for this are "Garfield: A Tale of Two Kitties" and the Mickey Mouse film "The Prince and The Pauper".

#7 · 10w, 4d ago · · · The Deal ·

There should not be an apostrophe in the title.

#9 · 10w, 4d ago · · · The Deal ·

>>7855048 The Prince and the Pauper actually predate Mickey Mouse. I know because I read the book for it.

#10 · 10w, 4d ago · 1 · · The Deal ·

>>7855084  further back in time Charles Dickens's novel of 'Tale of Two Cities' has a similar base idea, albeit loosely (don't quote me on that was quick google search so could be mistaken) The swap lives with a look-alike isn't anything new, i mean what concept hasn't already been done.

#11 · 10w, 3d ago · · · The Deal ·

Assuming they can keep up the act, what could possibly go wrong?

And just like that you jinxed it.

#12 · 10w, 2d ago · · · The Deal ·

Well, this shows promise.

#13 · 8w, 6d ago · · · The Deal ·

I'm liking this story

#14 · 8w, 6d ago · · · The Deal ·

>>7885957 new chapter out today or tommrow depends on editing

Interesting how Starlight is willing to help Dog Spike fill in for Dragon Spike.

#16 · 8w, 5d ago · 1 · · The Deal ·

This is gonna end badly. But other then stating the obvious, great chapter!

#17 · 8w, 5d ago · 1 · · The Deal ·


Yep, and I can't wait to see this go horribly wrong!:trixieshiftright:

Am I the only one who's thinking that Dragon Spike and Dog Spike should've made a detailed plan before going through with this?:unsuresweetie:

I want to see how Starlight and Dog Spike work in this story. Good chapter

Poor Puppy!Spike. Still, he seems to be doing okay for now.

>>7888435 it true , spike made his plan witpitcthinkong ig fully though. That is what kids do afterall

Uh-oh. This could complicate matters...

Things just got complicated.

Oh dear, Ember's just dropped in.

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