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Blackcatsuperfan1


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Just like the story our little brother Spike Spike will be found by dragon lord torches wife. After being found Spike will have to go through new trials through his life

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

This is a better and different introduction chapter.

I see you edited the chapter. Very nicely done. Still looking forward to seeing Spike and Ember bond.

Saw that you edited the first chapter, still works for me here (plus Torch got a bit of cosmic karma at the end there:rainbowlaugh:)

Looking forward to see Spike & Ember bonding, not to mention meeting another pair of siblings later on! :moustache:

Will there be another chapter coming soon? Also Happy New Year! :moustache:

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Yes there will be an also check out my other stories like especially the tale of nightmare night

11102697
I mean yes there is and go to my other story especially the tale of nightmare night

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Thanks also check out my other story the tale of nightmare night

I really don't want to have to count this story as being one of the ones that became abandoned by their creators. I REALLY don't.

Also read my other stories and I mean all of my other stories

I am glad this story finally updated again, but it feels a bit… "sloppy". It isn't formatted the same as the previous chapter was and it seems filled with a lot of typos, including the title of the chapter.

There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, honestly it makes it hard to read. I think the concept is good but the mistakes hurt the story.

are you planning on continuing this story.

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