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Golden Flare


I love to create stories.

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Within the lore of Yu-Gi-Oh! Zexal, it was said that Don Thousand and Vector created one million Barian Numbers, or Fake Numbers to some, and scattered them across the Earth, but only four were shown (five if you count "Number 10: Dark Illumiknight"), so that begs the question: "Where did these other Numbers go?"

Well, look no further.

Even after it was all said and done with the interdimensional war that took place within Heartland City, the Barian Numbers were still out there somewhere, waiting to awaken the darkness within even innocent people...and unfortunately, some of them were found.

As the people of Canterlot City continued their daily lives, these Barian Numbers will disrupt the balance and quite a few people will HAVE to step up, even if it's not the Rainbooms.


The Barian Numbers from 5-100 will be custom cards made by me, the existence of Barian "Number 10: Dark Illumiknight" will be up for debate until further notice. If you have any custom Barian Number card ideas and/or OC's and actual EG characters you'd like to use or see in this story, please PM me with the details.

Co-written by ShootingStar25.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 139 )

With your permission I would gladly join this story.

This was really good! The character sound right and Golden Flare seems like a good protagonist. I know he took trixie’s number at the end of the chapter but will he get his own number similar to how Yuma created Utopia?

This is pretty interesting.

Curious on how characters like Spike would be handled?

Can't wait for the next and good use if a trap card to destroy the number

10477634 Hopefully soon, my brother wanted a chapter after mine, so I'm waiting on him

Interesting on how Golden's deck is based off of Megaman Battle Network, loved that game a bunch(and Megaman Star Force too).

I feel like there's a few issues though.
Trixie can't use Apple Magician Girl's summon effect since it was targeted for an attack while face-down instead of face-up.
IceMan.EXE's monster effect negation is worded like it can only be used during Golden's Main Phase 1 or Main Phase 2, it can't be used in the Battle Phase unless it has "(Quick Effect)" by that effect or its worded as "During Either Player's Turn" or its even worded as "If this card is battling a monster, negate that monster's effect until the End Phase".
Trixie can't use Dark Magic Twin Burst during the Battle Phase since it was a normal spell rather than a Quick-Play spell(even if it was, it couldn't be activated the turn it was set by Bond Between Teacher And Student unless it said "That set card can be activated this turn")
Same with Battle Chip - Barrier, since it was a equip spell rather than a Quick-Play spell or Trap card, Golden can't flip it face up and activate it on Trixie's turn there.

I am curious on if Spike would be in the story and what might be done with him there?

10478433 Thanks for the compliment, and thank you for pointing some things out: Apple Magician Girl was flipped face-up when it was attacked, I didn't know what (Quick Effect) meant since I had stopped dueling for a little while, so thanks for that, IceMan.EXE's effect wasn't used last turn, so I was under the impression that it could still be used, I thought any Spell could be activated on any Phase at any point in time, and Spike will come into play later on in the story.

Sorry if this was confusing :ajsleepy:

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Apple Magician Girl needed to be face-up this whole time in order to trigger its summon effect actually.
Like face-up the moment it got targeted for an attack, not while it was face-down the moment it got targeted for an attack.
I seen Berry Magician Girl(who has the same effect as Apple Magician Girl) in Duel Links got targeted for an attack while face-down and its effect didn't get to trigger. Showing it needs to be face-up the moment it got targeted for an attack in order to trigger its summoning effect.

Looking forward to see whats in for Spike there. Hopefully he gets to duel.

Its ok, I am sure your memory in dueling can be jogged if you look up some reminders such as clips or rulebooks and such.

Looking forward on what happens next there.

10483794 We've been working on it, we just have responsibilities at home and I think he's gonna make it a long one

10478463
There's that with the two comments I have so far.


I wonder if you got anything in store for Spike there?

While we know how Rainbow Dash is doing after the attack, I feel like we could have know how Scootaloo's doing.
I feel like there's going to be some issues/consequences down the line with what happened to here. Just a thought.


About the whole dimension thing, I am curious on how things are going for Princess Luna in the alternate dimension and the real one in the real Equestria too?

About Enix using 2 of the Dimension Dragons, something didn't feel right honestly.
I don't know.. just seems weird.

10517111 The whole thing was my brother's idea, not mine. Also, Spike will get a chance.

10517121
Meant like issues from what happened to Scootaloo(like how she feels, problems, etc.) I sort of botched my comment up.

Anyway, I wonder what deck(s) would Spike get to use?

10517788
Ok then, looking forward to that big time.

Wonder how large is the next chapter is? Pretty curious there

That .EXE deck was AWESOME! I want a copy!

Really glad to see a new chapter here.
Wonder what will happen next?

I see a few errors though.

"I draw! And thanks to Fuzzy Lanius's effect, when its sent to the Graveyard, I get a new Fuzzy Lanius from my Deck!" Rainbow looked at the remaining four cards in her hand, I gotta think of something fast, or this newbie will make short work of me! "Since I took damage, I Special Summon Raidraptor - Avenge Vulture in Defense Mode!" a vulture-shaped robotic bird appeared on Rainbow's field (1700/100),

Fuzzy Lanius's search effect would have activated the moment it got sent to the Graveyard, not waiting till RD's next turn to happen.
Same with Avenge Vulture, it would have triggered the moment damage happened to RD, not waiting till her next turn to activate.

Astral ignored this and looked at his hand, then sneered, "Well, this'll be over quickly. I activate the effect of the three Cyber Dragons in my hand, allowing me to Special Summon them to the field when you control a monster and I don't!" three mechanical, snake-like dragons appeared on Astral's side of the field (2100/1600) (2100/1600) (2100/1600), "I then Normal Summon 'Genex Ally Birdman' in Attack Mode!" a mini bird-like humanoid robot appeared next to the mechanical dragons.

Astral can't do this actually.
Cyber Dragons don't summon themselves simultaneous, only one at a time.
Since after summoning the first one, Astral would have a monster which means he can't summon the other 2 Cyber Dragons through their own effect.

“Not a chance! I play the Equip Spell, Battle Chip - Barr200, and equip it to SearchMan.EXE!” the blast hit a barrier instead of SearchMan, who was left on the field without a scratch, even when the barrier shatters, “This card saves my monster from destruction, and you take 200 points of damage from his barrier, the only downside is that after the effect resolves, the barrier is destroyed!”

You can't activate equip spells from your hand on your opponent's turn unless a card effect says otherwise.

"I activate the Spell Lightning Vortex! By discarding a card from my hand, all monsters you control are destroyed!" a vortex sparking with electricity shot out at MegaMan and SearchMan, making them explode in shards of light, "Hehehehehe! Now everything is set! I overlay the 3 Cyber Dragons and the Darkflare Dragon I discarded in my Graveyard to build the Overlay Network!" a dark purple portal appeared and shot out four swirling lights into a galaxy portal right above it.

You can't use monsters in the Graveyard for an Xyz summon unless an effect says otherwise.
The monsters you are about to use for an Xyz summon must be face-up on your field, that's how it usually goes unless a card effect says otherwise.

That's all I got for this chapter.

1. Sorry, this is a while back when I first started writing this

2. Yeah, but this was what AstralFlare42 wanted me to do, I assumed there was something about the Cyber Dragons I didn't know

3. My mistake

4. The Xyz Monster's effect DOES say that, "4 Level 5 monsters from the GY"

Thanks for pointing these out

10971153
It says "if only your opponent controls a monster", as in if your opponent has monsters but you don't.
So the moment you summon the first copy of Cyber Dragon through its effect, your opponent is no longer the only one with monsters on their field. Which means you can't summon the other 2 Cyber Dragons through their effect since your opponent isn't the only one with monsters anymore(both players now have a monster on their field)

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About the 4th one, I somehow didn't notice that. Sorry about that.
Though I feel like the characters should react with "Wait, you are using monsters from your Graveyard to xyz summon??", them having no reaction makes it seem like they saw this before.

10971167
Never said that you can't summon them all at once though.

10971286
The summoning can't happen all at once.
It can only happen one at a time.
Its summoning doesn't start a chain since its something called a "Inherent Summon".

"This has nothing to do with you Rainblooms ," Trixie sneered, "The Great and Powerful Trixie has simply come to speak with the 'computer nerd'."

At least they smell better than you.

Comment posted by AstralFlare42 deleted Mar 3rd, 2022

Not again. That's the second time that has happened.

Ksm

If it's not too much of a bother, when can we expect the next chapter? I really want to see what happens to the thief who stole Yugi's deck as well as I'm looking forward to the Friendship Games that's coming up.

11211058 It’s a work in progress, real life is being a pain and I have things to take care of, but I will get the next chapter out as fast as I can

Ksm

11211061
Understood. Can't wait to see it. Good luck.

That was a pretty fun duel with D/D/Ds.
Nice in seeing this continue.

Really excited on seeing if Spike shows up next chapter or so.

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