But... but the porn? We only had a scene!

Great story. Hope to read more

okay, so... I have all the good vibes right now, but i don't have the words to describe it. This story was simply fantastic.

Came for the porn, stayed for the story absolutely beautiful.

Hey, I imagine attempting to write a threesome with two bodies isn't easy. Which it basically ends up as.

A technical three way. Not the way I thought this was ending, but much appreciated. This was a soulful journey. Very beautiful

Oh man, what an awesome ending! This was an emotional roller coaster that I'm sad to get off but happy that I got to ride. Well done!

Good finish to the story.

Yay, best ending!

Congrats on completing the story

I say this is your best one you’ve written

Absolutely beautiful. You did a great job balancing porn and emotional torment.

Amazing job well done! I’m sad the story has come to an end, but perhaps there could be a sequels to this in the future?

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Mayhaps.

Great finish to an excellent story! I do wish we'd had some cuddling at the end.

This was a good story, and had a great ending

You can has review!

So I finally finished this nice story glad it didn't just turn into mindless porn